BAD 100-Word Stories!

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   Hi everyone! Someone started this a while back. Here to carry the torch. If you feel the need to contribute, add your monstrosity of a bad micro based on your submission here. Have fun creating a purposely BAD 100-word story! 
The same rules apply to this effort. Must be 100 words or under, must be in the correct genre, and must include the action and the word! (That said, I went over my word count )

Here's mine:
Prompts: Drama/Cashing a Cheque/Opposite

The Day The Cheque Got Cashed in My Story

Sun Shone. Opposite
where he was standing was the sun high in the sky. Tom had a dramatic feeling in
his gut. He had to get a cheque cashed. To do that [pause for dramatic pause/effect],
he had to go to town. Tom, that’s the hero of this story. I was going to call
him protaggonnnistt at first, but I messed up the spelling.

Tom passed
people.

“Cash the cheque,
or I’m doomed,” Tom said to the person in the bank whose responsibility was to
cash cheques.

“Is it open
or crossed?”

Tom was confused.
You could tell that by the confused expression on his visage.

“Cash the
cheque!” 

Tom was a
man of few words. He was rare.
***

Note to
Readers

This is
the unedited version coming in at 119 words. Before submitting, I cut all words
with the letter “s.” For me, it’s more experimental.
Note to self: I should have thought about that a bit more. My word has an "s."

Edited by Nimhathuna - 30 Apr 2023 at 12:23pm