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NilesPerry ![]() NYC Midnight Black Belt ![]() ![]() Joined: 10 Dec 2014 Location: Bisbee, AZ Status: Offline Points: 1725 |
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Written in a record 1-hour and 10-minutes, with 12-minutes left to deadline... I was NOT going to let the idiots who claim to be my family keep me out of this. Certainly not my best writing, and it could have definitely used beta readers and a good proofreading. Nonetheless, here it is. Now, back to other problems...
GROUP 56 Romantic Comedy / Chain of Command / An Activist YES, VIRGINIA, THERE REALLY ARE UNICORNS An activist trying to save Asian Unicorns from extinction is derailed by a handsome businessman. Sparks fly between them when she discovers just what business he's really in. I not sure I'll post it to the forums. I'll cross that bridge when the email comes in a few days. Cheers everyone! ![]() |
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Vernacula ![]() NYC Midnight Black Belt ![]() ![]() Joined: 21 Jan 2016 Location: West Coast Status: Offline Points: 3485 |
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Thanks, Suave! Got it in just in the nick of time. ;-)
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jdadams1 ![]() NYC Midnight Black Belt ![]() ![]() Joined: 13 Jul 2018 Status: Offline Points: 3028 |
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Aw, yeah!!! I hope you post it!
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Learn from my mistake: Rate your judges
FF2: Beer, Bears, and Bath Salts: A True-Crime Exclusive From Hollywood Holly |
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stephenmatlock ![]() NYC Midnight Black Belt ![]() ![]() Joined: 05 Sep 2013 Location: Seattle Status: Offline Points: 9723 |
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R1 G42 | Ghost | Maternal | A Mortician NO SPARROW FALLS UNSEEN Can a burned-out mortician learn that death
is not just the closing of a casket but also the opening of a door? |
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jdadams1 ![]() NYC Midnight Black Belt ![]() ![]() Joined: 13 Jul 2018 Status: Offline Points: 3028 |
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Thank you! It was a labor of love, but I tried to have fun with it.
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Learn from my mistake: Rate your judges
FF2: Beer, Bears, and Bath Salts: A True-Crime Exclusive From Hollywood Holly |
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Rainbowsockmonkey ![]() NYC Midnight Addict ![]() ![]() Joined: 25 Jan 2017 Location: Los Angeles Status: Offline Points: 818 |
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G6:Spy/A double date/An ex-wife
Flauxtus When Fake Melania is poisoned—again!—a retired spy is drawn into a mission to replace her. |
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NilesPerry ![]() NYC Midnight Black Belt ![]() ![]() Joined: 10 Dec 2014 Location: Bisbee, AZ Status: Offline Points: 1725 |
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Should "has" be "have? And doesn't "fulfill" have two Ls? You say "mother and grandmother," so who exactly is "her?" Sorry. I'm being really nit-picky. These just stood out as I was scrolling past. Disregard the tired guy who's being a jerk. ![]() |
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Joni ![]() NYC Midnight Black Belt ![]() ![]() Joined: 17 Jul 2017 Status: Offline Points: 1701 |
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Yay!! Glad you got something in. I had to skip betas this round too, and I know my script suffered because of it. Oh well, though, something is better than nothing.
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fioOxf ![]() NYC Midnight Black Belt ![]() ![]() Joined: 13 Jul 2018 Location: Oxford, UK Status: Offline Points: 3465 |
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Hi there! No, she's one person who's a mum and a gran, ie she has a son and a grandson. And fulfil and fulfill are both correct, but one L is more common in UK English. My spellcheck is UK so squiggly-underlines it if I use 2 Ls. The sun is coming up. I need to go to sleep! Night! F
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jalex77 ![]() NYC Midnight Regular ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 Apr 2018 Location: Beaverton OR Status: Offline Points: 401 |
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Now that it's over, that's when I start to freak out! Anyway, here's my thing: Heat 44 (Mystery/ insatiable/ a garbage man)"Yarrow Street" "When neighborhood dogs start disappearing and a young black man
is the main suspect, a single mother will have to aid him in clearing his name." Edited by jalex77 - 21 Apr 2019 at 9:27am |
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