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R1/G 10 - MYSTERY/A RUNNING TRACK/A TOY AIRPLANE


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Bill Pryor freaks out and collapses while running with a friend.

What could possibly cause such a psychotic episode?

 





I think I totally phucked up ... working on the wrong computer ... couldn't export as a PDF ... ended up with a badly formatted DOCX three minutes late ... can it get any worse?  Lame prompts didn't help ...






Edited by Scarlet Screenwriter - 15 Oct 2018 at 12:23am
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Originally posted by Scarlet Screenwriter Scarlet Screenwriter wrote:

R1/G 10 - MYSTERY/A RUNNING TRACK/A TOY AIRPLANE

THE ALBATROS

Bill Pryor freaks out and collapses while running with a friend.

What could possibly cause such a psychotic episode?

I think I totally phucked up ... working on the wrong computer ... couldn't export as a PDF ... ended up with a badly formatted DOCX three minutes late ... can it get any worse?  Lame prompts didn't help ...

Scarlet!! I forgot to mention in my post that our entry is unofficially dedicated to you, as while we were writing I couldn't help but think we were channeling you somehow and it was really one of your whacky ideas! LOL Great to see you again! It's been a while.

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Group 22, ghost story, a costume shop, a stein.

Lovely Girl

A proud mother goes to the same ballet costume shop every time to prepare for her daughter’s dance performances. But there are some things we can’t prepare for.

And thank you to my beta readers - I see some of you posting here. 1st screenplay and you helped me so much! I will probably be too nervous to post it in the forum since I'm so new to this, but I worked hard on revising it. Thank you!
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Group 34 - Fantasy/Dining Room/Beehive


Alveare Regina

Queen Ronia's enchanted bees are the talk of the table for her unsuspecting banquet guests.


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Rhyming R1: Lionheart (Hist fic)
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Originally posted by northernwriter northernwriter wrote:

Group 22, ghost story, a costume shop, a stein.
Lovely Girl

A proud mother goes to the same ballet costume shop every time to prepare for her daughter’s dance performances. But there are some things we can’t prepare for.

And thank you to my beta readers - I see some of you posting here. 1st screenplay and you helped me so much! I will probably be too nervous to post it in the forum since I'm so new to this, but I worked hard on revising it. Thank you!
Posting it will get you even more feedback from a broader range of people, which will only help you continue to improve your screenwriting skills. I'm happy to have been one of your betas. I hope I gave you something useful. Smile Good luck!
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Originally posted by NilesPerry NilesPerry wrote:

Scarlet!! I forgot to mention in my post that our entry is unofficially dedicated to you, as while we were writing I couldn't help but think we were channeling you somehow and it was really one of your whacky ideas! LOL Great to see you again! It's been a while.


Been a while?  I haven't missed a round of story or screenplay in EIGHT YEARS! 

You wacky guys ... don't channel ME!  Nothing good could possibly come of THAT!  I'm old and twisted ...

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It's just another day at the Arkham Atrocities
in Wax Museum, complete with a mass murderer
and the wax statue of a porn star's penis.

How could I possibly offer any inspiration with a logline like THIS?  None of my porns made it to video ... they were all standard 8mm.  








Edited by Scarlet Screenwriter - 15 Oct 2018 at 12:41am
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Originally posted by NilesPerry NilesPerry wrote:

GROUP 15
Comedy, Wax Museum, Pumpkin

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 Waxing Homicidal

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It's just another day at the Arkham Atrocities
in Wax Museum, complete with a mass murderer
and the wax statue of a porn star's penis.

Ha! You've got me wondering whether it's John Holmes or Ron Jeremy. FYI - I have my hair done next door to the Lizzie Borden house. Was there today…
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Group 27 | Thriller, A sleeping car on a train, A stethoscope


A Familiar Ride

A traveling college student wakes up on a train and can't help feeling like he's been here before.

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It felt like a redemption task since Thriller took me out of round 2 of the Screenplay challenge! Really, really tried to not be cliche but fingers crossed. 


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Originally posted by lisafox10800 lisafox10800 wrote:

Crime Caper / Private Jet / Refrigerator

Pilfering the Truffles
With a dash of deception and a cup of ultimatum,
a wanna-be chef envisions the perfect pizza.

I'm not a thief by any stretch but, given the opportunity, I'd steal truffles from an airplane fridge. 
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Action/Adventure
Airstrip
A coconut 

"No Dog Left Behind"

An Army kid embarks on her own secret mission when someone dear to her is taken by a mysterious stranger.
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