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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote stephenmatlock Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 Jul 2019 at 1:20pm
Originally posted by GillenLiam GillenLiam wrote:

If someone could have a look at mine it would be much appreciated, so far I have only had one review :)


I'll get to yours next. It might not be until this evening, though--I'm full up with projects today!
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Originally posted by stephenmatlock stephenmatlock wrote:

Originally posted by GillenLiam GillenLiam wrote:

If someone could have a look at mine it would be much appreciated, so far I have only had one review :)


I'll get to yours next. It might not be until this evening, though--I'm full up with projects today!

Any help at all is really appreciated, thanks! 
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote chrissie0707 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 Jul 2019 at 1:44pm
Originally posted by GillenLiam GillenLiam wrote:

If someone could have a look at mine it would be much appreciated, so far I have only had one review :) 




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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Charlie72 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 Jul 2019 at 5:06pm
Originally posted by GillenLiam GillenLiam wrote:

If someone could have a look at mine it would be much appreciated, so far I have only had one review :) 
Hi Liam -  I can’t find the post with the link to your story.  Give that to me and I’ll read it tonight!
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Hi Charlie, thanks very much, hopefully it should be at the bottom of this reply!?

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Originally posted by GillenLiam GillenLiam wrote:

Hi Charlie, thanks very much, hopefully it should be at the bottom of this reply!?

It isn’t — I guess maybe the forum’s gotten buggy about signatures — but i found it in your profile so good enough for me.  
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Would be so very grateful for anyone that’s looking for something to read to provide some feedback on my story. Thank you in advance. :)

https://forums.nycmidnight.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=22911&title=ch1-gr22-a-rose-in-the-forest-fairy-tale

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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote stephenmatlock Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 Jul 2019 at 10:19pm
Originally posted by Ansel_V Ansel_V wrote:

Would be so very grateful for anyone that’s looking for something to read to provide some feedback on my story. Thank you in advance. :)



I'll take a look soon.
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