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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote ABEAR111 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 Jul 2006 at 7:00pm
Originally posted by wenonah wenonah wrote:

I would be willing to put a couple scripts on my server (www.beadedroad.com) I have plenty of space - they should be .pdf's and you can email them to me and I'll upload and email you back a link.

wenonah@beadedroad.com




Wenonah, why haven't you posted yours? ??
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote MeaningLess Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 Aug 2006 at 3:00am
Where are u guys posting your stuff, too.  How can I read them?  I went on to freeweb.com and am in the process of creating a site, but I can't figure out how show my script.  It's uploaded, but how do I make it viewable?
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Requiem Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 Aug 2006 at 3:09am
Upload the file, I guess zou alreadz did that. Click on the file zou uploaded and itll take zou to a new window, copz the url from that window and post a link to zour script on this forum.

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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Michael Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 Aug 2006 at 4:43am
Posted in correct forum.

Edited by Michael - 01 Aug 2006 at 7:08am
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Chris Messineo Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 Aug 2006 at 4:47am
Originally posted by Michael Michael wrote:

http://www.beadedroad.com/scripts/SeptemberDay.pdf
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You'll want to post this link in the script review forum (it is a subforum in the "screenwriter's bar and lounge").   That way people can easily provide feedback on it.
 
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Okay, I may post mine but can I just put up my disclaimer before I do? I going to put the blame on the heat and the wine, both of which I took part in more than usual the past week Wacko - I was working off of two Final draft documents after I found out we had to name them specifically with the heat and underscore and all that ... anyway, like an idiot I ended up doing the final edit on the old document and sending that it. Needless to say, there are some inconsistencies with a character's name and some dialog that just doesn't belong, etc. Things that make me want to go back to the heat and wine to make me forget.  I know the judges are going to be harsh (as they should) so I'm not counting on placing - but I'll put the script up anyways since I had a lot of fun writing it.

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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Chris Messineo Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 Aug 2006 at 5:06am
Originally posted by wenonah wenonah wrote:

Okay, I may post mine but can I just put up my disclaimer before I do? I going to put the blame on the heat and the wine, both of which I took part in more than usual the past week Wacko
It sounds like it could be quite an entertaining read.  I can't wait. Smile

Chris


Edited by Chris Messineo - 01 Aug 2006 at 5:07am
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote wenonah Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 Aug 2006 at 5:52am
LOL... yeah! I bet it's a fantastic script if you couple it with a morning cocktail! You're the bartender - a round for everyone, on me!



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OOPS!  Thanks, Chris.
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote BarbaraFL Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 Aug 2006 at 1:16pm
OK, I will post mine with the disclaimer that I know as much as all of you do that the script isn't that suspenseful and is full of holes. My personal deadline was 4:30 since I was going out Sat. night and at 3:45 I realized I had a huge sinkhole and the story couldn't possibly work...so hey, I made someone a pizza delivery guy, lol.
 
I can't get the link to work to freewebs.com though?!
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