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Originally posted by emilymyoga emilymyoga wrote:

Originally posted by Kristinmarie23 Kristinmarie23 wrote:

Here’s mine! 

Group 11
Comedy/helicopter/playbill 

Helicopter Mom 
Maggie brings new meaning to the term “helicopter mom” when she is not invited to her son’s wedding.

We're in the same group and I love your take on the prompts!! This sounds hilarious!

Yay for another group 11! I was hoping to see more on here! I hope you post yours when the time comes - I’d love to read it! 
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Originally posted by KelsNotChels KelsNotChels wrote:

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As Above, So Below

Mountain against Valley,

mother against son,

blood against bone.


(My logline is clearly three sentences but let’s just accept the comma use and celebrate conformity, okay?)

YES! Killing it with the title and logline! 
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Group 19: Historical Fiction / Orphanage / Rake

DIAMONDS UNDER RAKES
Marilyn Monroe reflects on a life tumultuously lived.
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Group 19 / Historical Fiction / An Orphanage / A Rake

Butter-Drenched Fingers, Clasped Tightly in Prayer


In Prohibition-era Kansas, a young orphan prays to God about her role in a terrible ordeal. 

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Group 1: Mystery/Ophthamalogist’s Office/Quiche

A Drop In The Bucket

After an ophthalmologist’s meal is poisoned, a detective searches for the culprit.



Pretty straightforward, wouldn’t be surprised if someone else used a similar premise.

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group 3/horror/a public archive/a diploma

Red Tape
 Bureaucracy  has its uses, for the undead as well as the living.

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Originally posted by robosagogo robosagogo wrote:

Group 1: Mystery/Ophthamalogist’s Office/Quiche

A Drop In The Bucket

After an ophthalmologist’s meal is poisoned, a detective searches for the culprit.



Pretty straightforward, wouldn’t be surprised if someone else used a similar premise.


It’s all about execution! The same premise in 2 writer’s hands can be very different indeed! I look forward to reading your take!
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Group 10: Drama, A Salad Bar, A dozen roses

Look at the Flowers

Ryan Bradley is faced with an impossible task that leads to crippling indecision.

I've been overly careful with my synopses since the 1st challenge when I received a paragraph of feedback from a judge on the misuse of a comma in my synopsis.

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Originally posted by Kristinmarie23 Kristinmarie23 wrote:

Here’s mine! 

Group 11
Comedy/helicopter/playbill 

Helicopter Mom 
Maggie brings new meaning to the term “helicopter mom” when she is not invited to her son’s wedding.

Welp, I know which one I'm reading first!
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Originally posted by BeckyG515 BeckyG515 wrote:

Group 10: Drama, A Salad Bar, A dozen roses

Look at the Flowers

Ryan Bradley is faced with an impossible task that leads to crippling indecision.

I've been overly careful with my synopses since the 1st challenge when I received a paragraph of feedback from a judge on the misuse of a comma in my synopsis.


Do they take the synopses that seriously?
Oops LOL
I probably should have put more thought into it
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