Incorrect feedback
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Topic: Incorrect feedback
Posted By: _kamacca_
Subject: Incorrect feedback
Date Posted: 19 May 2022 at 12:38pm
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Hi NYC Midnight, I just had my feedback and the third judge's {1943} comments are very clearly for a different story. Can you help me get the right feedback?
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Posted By: NYC Midnight
Date Posted: 19 May 2022 at 12:39pm
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Yes, please email us at feedback@nycmidnight.com and we will look into it right away. Thank you and we hope to get to the bottom of it soon! ------------- Next up is the https://www.nycmidnight.com/ffc" rel="nofollow - Flash Fiction Challenge kicking off May 1st |
Posted By: LynnH
Date Posted: 19 May 2022 at 2:41pm
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I feel like mine might be wrong too..... the below is from the same judge... It didn't really make sense to me at all, it sounds totally contradictory or am I missing something? What i liked.... I appreciated reading about Ahmed and Anna's relationship. I liked that the story was set in present tense. I feel that you have a very grounded approach to your writing, as in, it is very straightforward. That was something that I liked.
What needed work.... Go through the story and fine tune any language that does not serve the piece. Be mindful of sentence structure. What I would do is simplify the piece sentence by sentence. In other words, find the most clear and succinct way to say each line without compromising the meaning of the sentence. |
Posted By: NYC Midnight
Date Posted: 20 May 2022 at 3:15pm
Hi Lynn, We apologize for the delay responding! If the characters referenced are not in your story or you feel other comments do not apply to your story, please send us an email at feedback@nycmidnight.com so that we can look into it right away. Thank you and sorry again for the delay! ------------- Next up is the https://www.nycmidnight.com/ffc" rel="nofollow - Flash Fiction Challenge kicking off May 1st |
LynnH wrote: