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Topic: SCREENWRITING '21 - R1 TITLES & LOGLINES
Posted By: NilesPerry
Subject: SCREENWRITING '21 - R1 TITLES & LOGLINES
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:02am
And it's that time again...
Remember... ONLY TITLES & LOGLINES.

You may upload full scripts AFTER NYCM sends confirmation emails!

Starting things off...

GROUP 44 - Historical fiction, a bond, a pathfinder.

The Last Flight of Amelia Earhart

What really happened to Amelia Earhart? Nearly a century later,
the truth is told... or is it?



Replies:
Posted By: manifestlynot
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:08am
 Group 44 - Historical fiction/a bond/a pathfinder      

The Hastings Cutoff

    Lansford Hastings' word is his bond. That's what Virginia Reed and the rest of the Donner-Reed Party are trusting as they prepare to take the Hastings Cutoff on their way to California - again.


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Rhyming R1: https://forums.nycmidnight.com/topic51185_post541412.html#541412" rel="nofollow - Lionheart (Hist fic)


Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:08am
Originally posted by NilesPerry NilesPerry wrote:

And it's that time again...
Remember... ONLY TITLES & LOGLINES.

You may upload full scripts AFTER NYCM sends confirmation emails!

Starting things off...

GROUP 44 - Historical fiction, a bond, a pathfinder.

The Last Flight of Amelia Earhart

What really happened to Amelia Earhart? Nearly a century later,
the truth is told... or is it?

I love the mystery behind Amelia Earhart so definitely looking forward to reading your story!

I got...

Group 23 - Drama, Bartering, an Engineer

What Happened To Charlie Foster?

Events in Charlie Foster's past drive him to search for answers that will alter the rest of his life.

I can't wait to read everyone else's stories! I love this forum.


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MF 100 Word '22 R1 G44 https://bit.ly/3kgWEIm" rel="nofollow - Good Boy
SCW '22 RD1 G29 https://bit.ly/3iTmkKw" rel="nofollow - Inseparable


Posted By: manifestlynot
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:10am
Originally posted by NilesPerry NilesPerry wrote:

GROUP 44 - Historical fiction, a bond, a pathfinder.

The Last Flight of Amelia Earhart

What really happened to Amelia Earhart? Nearly a century later,
the truth is told... or is it?

Heatmate!! This sounds amazing and I can’t wait to read. So glad we didn’t pick the same era!!


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Rhyming R1: https://forums.nycmidnight.com/topic51185_post541412.html#541412" rel="nofollow - Lionheart (Hist fic)


Posted By: Suave
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:13am
Originally posted by manifestlynot manifestlynot wrote:

 Group 44 - Historical fiction/a bond/a pathfinder      

The Hastings Cutoff

    Lansford Hastings' word is his bond. That's what Virginia Reed and the rest of the Donner-Reed Party are trusting as they prepare to take the Hastings Cutoff on their way to California - again.

This is good. Something not over done and something that I did research when younger. Was into the old west. Looking forward to reading it.


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Posted By: on the sly
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:14am
Group 32 (Thriller; A Guarantee; A Doppelganger)

Facsimile (Thriller)
In a bid for Hollywood redemption, down-and-out actor Jeremy Jordan agrees to a publicity stunt with his long-time ‘celebrity doppelganger’ nemesis — but what they expose is far more sinister than they could ever know.

Thanks all, so super fun!





Posted By: LeilaLay
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:14am
Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:


I got...

Group 23 - Drama, Bartering, an Engineer

What Happened To Charlie Foster?

Events in Charlie Foster's past drive him to search for answers that will alter the rest of his life.

I can't wait to read everyone else's stories! I love this forum.

Hi heat mate! Excited to see what you did with the prompts - sounds very intriguing! Mine is...

The Engineer of Magic
An elderly toymaker re-visits difficult memories with the help of a young boy, the only person interested in his toys.






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Posted By: pentailed
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:14am
I'll jump in -- here's mine:

GROUP 33: Political Satire, allergies, an enforcer.

The Bureau of Temporal Control

Director Jackson, a miserable government bureaucrat,
valiantly defends our temporal status quo until an
inter-departmental run-in opens her bloodshot eyes to a
new way of seeing the world.


Posted By: D’Agostino_Sarah
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:15am
Home Sweet Home Team
When your home team is cross-country and the rivals are crosstown, loyalty will get you everywhere.

63-Historical Fiction/A robbery/A guarantor

Admittedly, historical fiction was intimidating for my 2nd time in the contest but really like what I submitted. 


Posted By: NilesPerry
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:18am
Originally posted by on the sly on the sly wrote:

Group 32 (Thriller; A Guarantee; A Doppelganger)

Facsimile (Thriller)
In a bid for Hollywood redemption, down-and-out actor Jeremy Jordan agrees to a publicity stunt with his long-time ‘celebrity doppelganger’ nemesis — but what they expose is far more sinister than they could ever know.

Thanks all, so super fun!
You do know that Jeremy Jordan is the name of a real actor, don't you? Big smile


Posted By: Libby90
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:20am
Group 11: Action/Adventure / Burned-out / A Mercenary


On Mission

After a mercenary in a post-apocalyptic world sustains a head injury, the fabric of his world starts to fall apart. 




Posted By: DContara
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:22am
Gr. 35 - Sci-Fi / Tourism / A Censor

The Unlivers

In 2084, a check-in agent for an exclusive time travel company

dreams of affording her own ticket to the past. Can a visit to a

defining event in human history reveal the truth about her father's

disappearance, or maybe even more?



Writing a time-travel script felt like playing with fire... but it was fun.


I think I'll post it on the forums... to get roasted LOL


Thanks to my amazing betas! 



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https://tinyurl.com/3paknk6e" rel="nofollow - 2024 Screenwriting (Drama)


Posted By: Alyxbee
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:23am
Group 56: Thriller / Relocate / Crossing Guard 

Title: An Unexpected Lesson 

Logline: Sophia relocates across the country, and takes a job as a substitute teacher. She quickly finds out why the position was vacant.


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https://bit.ly/40xcCSg" rel="nofollow - My Archive


Posted By: Rachel M
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:28am
Group 6 Romance/ A Pit Stop/ A Specialist

The Secrets We Keep
Even when she raised you your whole life, near the end there are always too many things unsaid.

Yes, I know that's more a tagline than a logline. But I just couldn't get a logline to work at the nth hour this time!

Thanks as always to some fantastic beta readers - beta reading is a BLAST with you all!


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https://bit.ly/441rqug" rel="nofollow - 100 MF R2
Rachel M Archive


Posted By: on the sly
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:29am
Oh. My. God. NO I DID NOOOOOOT. 

(Horrified!! I thought I picked the most 90's ish boring names ever. I can't believe it!! (don't know the guy... hoping he doesn't come with many pre-loaded associations?? Sigh. LOL)

Cry


Posted By: NilesPerry
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:32am
Originally posted by on the sly on the sly wrote:

Oh. My. God. NO I DID NOOOOOOT. 

(Horrified!! I thought I picked the most 90's ish boring names ever. I can't believe it!! (don't know the guy... hoping he doesn't come with many pre-loaded associations?? Sigh. LOL)

Cry
Yeah...
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jeremy_Jordan_%28actor,_born_1984%29" rel="nofollow - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jeremy_Jordan_(actor,_born_1984)
Maybe he'll be flattered...


Posted By: on the sly
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:33am
Originally posted by NilesPerry NilesPerry wrote:

Originally posted by on the sly on the sly wrote:

Group 32 (Thriller; A Guarantee; A Doppelganger)

Facsimile (Thriller)
In a bid for Hollywood redemption, down-and-out actor Jeremy Jordan agrees to a publicity stunt with his long-time ‘celebrity doppelganger’ nemesis — but what they expose is far more sinister than they could ever know.

Thanks all, so super fun!
You do know that Jeremy Jordan is the name of a real actor, don't you? Big smile

Oh. My. God. NO I DID NOOOOOOT. 

(Horrified!! I thought I picked the most 90's ish boring names ever. I can't believe it!! (don't know the guy... hoping he doesn't come with many pre-loaded associations?? Sigh. LOL)

Cry


Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:00am
Originally posted by LeilaLay LeilaLay wrote:

Hi heat mate! Excited to see what you did with the prompts - sounds very intriguing! Mine is...

The Engineer of Magic
An elderly toymaker re-visits difficult memories with the help of a young boy, the only person interested in his toys.


Oooh, yours sounds sooooo good! I can't wait to read it. So glad to have found a heat mate this round SmileSmileSmile


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MF 100 Word '22 R1 G44 https://bit.ly/3kgWEIm" rel="nofollow - Good Boy
SCW '22 RD1 G29 https://bit.ly/3iTmkKw" rel="nofollow - Inseparable


Posted By: graymalkin
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:03am
Group 53:

Suspense
A Telethon
An Ex-husband

"Year of the Woman"

It's 1992, and women have more power in the workplace than ever before--but the job's not done.
In the countdown to a live television broadcast, we see what they're up against.


Posted By: alexdsut
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:12am
Group 9: Suspense / Bulk Buying / A Braggart

THE MARCOMANO

A peculiar Senator of Rome wishes to make purchase of a sizable number of gladiators, but in a world built upon bloodshed, costs can extend far beyond that of coin.

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Really enjoyed writing this one. It might just be my favourite yet!


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https://bit.ly/3OzQRdZ" rel="nofollow - SC Final




Posted By: ross_c
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:35am
Okay, I'll go...

Group 36: Action/Adventure / An ultimatum / A freediver


Game Face
Trapped in an immersive virtual reality game, a timid Croatian man must complete a dangerous mission in order to escape.


First-time NYC Midnight competitor here:
Writing in the Action/Adventure genre really was an adventure -- but now, at the end of the week, I'm pleased to say that I'm very happy with how it all came out. Also, I'm looking forward to reading everyone's screenplays in the near future!


Posted By: bluevervain
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:37am
Group 12: Drama/an anniversary/a valedictorian

                                                                 FRESHWATER                                                                        
In a tiny lake village in northern Wisconsin, Charlie tries to give her granddaughter, Olga, an idyllic childhood. As Olga approaches adolescence, Charlie fears that the darkness that swallowed her own daughter will come for Olga as well.



Posted By: Jimmy JJ
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:42am

Group 23
Genre: Drama
Subject: Bartering
Character: An engineer


APPREHENSION

Waking after a celebration of his latest scientific breakthrough, a bioengineer learns his behaviour has profound consequences for him and his family.



I enjoyed that immensely, even if my characters didn't!


Posted By: rjplaywright
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:51am
Group 62: Romance/ Aviation/Midwife


The Fourteenth Amendment
A Chinese Couple is flying to America so that their unborn child could be an American Citizen, but then the water breaks on the plane.

For the record I forgot to create a logline until there was only 5 minutes left.


Posted By: slevy
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:55am
This was a tough one for me this time! Glad I was able to get it done in the end.

Group 3 
Historical Fiction / Relaxation / A Sailor 

Bonny
After a lifetime of oppression and abuse from one too many men, a young woman takes to the rough high seas to find her power among
the roughest of them all.


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Posted By: Mister_Write
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:07am
What  a wild ride. That was my first screenplay :D. Am I crazy to do it undertime pressure? Maybe. Was it crazy to interpret valet creatively? Double maybe.

But I like to live dangerously :P

Group 21: horror, a contract, a valet

Locked-In

Callum is surprised that his new research assistant job involves attending to the personal care of a paralyzed man. A chilling telepathic message makes a request he cannot grant while danger lurks close behind.




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R1 SSC https://shorturl.at/cfH39" rel="nofollow - How Much is that Dragon in the Window?


Posted By: laurbail
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:28am
So happy to be doing this again this year. Last year was my first year and I was totally thrown by having to do mystery and then horror, both not my typical genres. But this year I embraced the whole Crime Caper thing with a story that is SO not my usual thing that it was actually quite freeing. Excited to read everyone's scripts!

Group 51: crime caper/homework/a hockey player.

SCORE

Four college roommates seek revenge on a fraternity after they learn of a misogynistic bet about which frat brother can sleep with the most women on the air hockey table.

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Read my SSC CH2 script: https://bit.ly/3pTiAgN" rel="nofollow - Wish You Were Here (suspense)
or SC Final https://bit.ly/36KMdGj" rel="nofollow - Beyond Words(suspense)


Posted By: Zounds
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:30am

Group 28/Crime Caper/ A Banker/ A Celebration

Good Deeds

Kenny turns to his friends for help in finally outflanking his smart, successful older twin brother, but a family party makes it hard to acquire a Monopoly on luck. Can Kenny bank on his friends to help him gain the prize?


Not my best logline. This was a very uneven ride. After a day or two of complete freeze I  had an idea and had a great first couple of pages... then it was a slow grind. I had a really hard time fleshing out the middle. I actually skipped ahead and wrote the final scenes. Then I had to sort of match them up.




Posted By: TreeTheGreen
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:32am
group 24 / historical fiction / probation / a beer drinker

This World and the Next
A KGB agent defects from the USSR and tries to find refuge in America. But when his initial plan goes wrong, he must navigate through both physical pain and the pain of falling in love.

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I was initially quite disappointed in my genre but I think it turned out alright!


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SSC 2021 CH3 | tinyurl.com/jp5x3w3u" rel="nofollow - Hold My Hand


Posted By: pluginmatty
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:50am
Group 5 - Mystery/A reward/A matchmaker

Me Too?

When one of her regular customers is implicated in a murder investigation, Bree must decide just how much she's willing to trust her instincts.


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https://forums.nycmidnight.com/topic53695_post571135.html#571135" rel="nofollow - Screenplay Challenge 2023 R2 GR9: This Little Piggy (Suspense)


Posted By: moonworm
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:58am
hi! i'm new to NYC Midnight :) i really liked my prompt and had a lot of fun writing this!

Group 41: Ghost Story / Photography / A bibliophile

SELF-PORTRAIT OF THE ARTIST AS A YOUNG MAN
A wishful photographer makes a fate-sealing deal after becoming enamored by a mysterious portrait in a small town bookstore.


Posted By: Paula
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 4:28am
Group 59: Crime Caper / A last will and testament/ A journalist

                           The Real Deal

When disowned journalist Tom Haynes meets struggling artist
Arabella Manson, he plots a hustle to solve their financial
problems, unaware that the real deal is a different one.






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Screenwriting 2023 R1 G8: https://forums.nycmidnight.com/r1-g8-devils-rising-thriller_topic52837.html" rel="nofollow - DEVIL'S RISING


Posted By: Joni
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 4:40am
Group 27 - Romance - a Pharmacist - Superficial


Thr End... 

As a woman faces death, her much younger husband offers to help speed the process along. 


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R2 - https://shorturl.at/fFP12" rel="nofollow - Race to the Tomato Plant


Posted By: Graham Brand
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 4:59am
Group 32 / Thriller / A guarantee / A doppelgänger

No Time To Die

You cannot change the past, no matter how terrible the future.


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SC 2023 R2 https://bit.ly/3MS2aiT" rel="nofollow - Faster, Stronger, Dead
SC 2023 R1 https://bit.ly/3ztWg0S" rel="nofollow - Hell Bent


Posted By: Janetinputney
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:06am
Group 20, horror, stagehand, shadow

I’d Do Anything
A teacher is terrorised by a mother will go to extreme lengths to ensure her daughter stars in the school production of ‘Oliver!’


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Posted By: Graham Brand
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:08am
Originally posted by Janetinputney Janetinputney wrote:

Group 20, horror, stagehand, shadow

I’d Do Anything
A teacher is terrorised by a mother will go to extreme lengths to ensure her daughter stars in the school production of ‘Oliver!’

Brilliant choice of title! LOL


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SC 2023 R2 https://bit.ly/3MS2aiT" rel="nofollow - Faster, Stronger, Dead
SC 2023 R1 https://bit.ly/3ztWg0S" rel="nofollow - Hell Bent


Posted By: JennaIsWriting
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:10am
Group 33 - Political Satire / Allergic / An Enforcer


POLITICAL ARMAGEDDON

A political strategist goes into crisis mode when her top presidential candidate becomes the unwitting star of a viral video.


Posted By: Gert Of The Well
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:28am
Group 14 - Romance / Self-taught / A butler.

Was a little disappointed to receive romance as a genre (the one I have been most dreading since first entering NYC competitions), and two prompts which lead to quite a predictable plot line... That said, this is my first screenplay so I was just happy to get something submitted!

On The Fiddle


Lady Evelyn, grieving her recently deceased husband, is oblivious to the secrets of her humble and reserved butler, who has more to him than first meets the eye.


(I realise most if not all of the judges are American, so I'm interested to know whether my title has the same (double) meaning over there as it does in Britain?!)


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100R1 https://bit.ly/36OPJQh" rel="nofollow - Unholy Communion
A


Posted By: Graham Brand
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:33am
Originally posted by dcontarato dcontarato wrote:

Gr. 35 - Sci-Fi / Tourism / A Censor

The Unlivers

In 2084, a check-in agent for an exclusive time travel company

dreams of affording her own ticket to the past. Can a visit to a

defining event in human history reveal the truth about her father's

disappearance, or maybe even more?



Writing a time-travel script felt like playing with fire... but it was fun.


I think I'll post it on the forums... to get roasted LOL


Thanks to my amazing betas! 


I feel for you. I did one too... and I didn't even have SF as the genre...

There's always a paradox you can't explain away!


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SC 2023 R2 https://bit.ly/3MS2aiT" rel="nofollow - Faster, Stronger, Dead
SC 2023 R1 https://bit.ly/3ztWg0S" rel="nofollow - Hell Bent


Posted By: Snarkmaiden
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:43am
Group 47 Romcom / antique(s) / a carpenter

Antiques

The years haven't been kind to Sureshot Yolanda or the Red Woodsman -- former members of the heroic Shining Company. But when their old enemy stirs in its icy prison, they must join with a new generation to quell the threat -- and learn to see each other with fresh eyes...

Holy unoriginal title, Batman!


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SC R1: https://tinyurl.com/4mcs6kua" rel="nofollow - Sanctuary (drama)
SSC R1: https://shorturl.at/azIT4" rel="nofollow - Speechless (romcom)


Posted By: NatColfer
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:51am
Group 41: Ghost Story / Photography / A bibliophile

Forever and Always
Sometimes nothing is real, and everything is too late.


Posted By: paulene.turner
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:53am
Hi

Group 18, Spy, biohazard, a fugitive.

This one nearly killed me.

THE MIGHTY QUILL
When William Shakespeare finishes writing his new play, he imagines the applause and praise that will come his way. But some ideas are too big for the stages of our time.




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Posted By: BarbaraFL
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 6:23am


Group 59 / Crime Caper / A last will and testament / A journalist

 

Stealing Honus 


When their stepmother bequeaths a rare, multi-million dollar baseball card to a charlatan televangelist family, siblings Joy and Brian scheme to steal it back.  



The odds of me posting it are slim - I don't think I've ever struggled with one more than this one! Was still working out plot holes at 8 p.m. and nearly shut the computer off. But just in case, here's the title and logline Big smile



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Posted By: Tim G
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:01am
Originally posted by pentailed pentailed wrote:

I'll jump in -- here's mine:

GROUP 33: Political Satire, allergies, an enforcer.

The Bureau of Temporal Control

Director Jackson, a miserable government bureaucrat,
valiantly defends our temporal status quo until an
inter-departmental run-in opens her bloodshot eyes to a
new way of seeing the world.

Fantastic to bump into a heatmate. Even better when we've gone in totally different ways. I'll look forward to reading!


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Rhyming Story R2: https://shorturl.at/ozDEZ" rel="nofollow - Flying On Empty (Thriller)


Posted By: Tim G
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:03am
Originally posted by Alyxbee Alyxbee wrote:

Group 56: Thriller / Relocate / Crossing Guard 

Title: An Unexpected Lesson 

Logline: Sophia relocates across the country, and takes a job as a substitute teacher. She quickly finds out why the position was vacant.

Love this logline; super-economic, super-effective.


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Rhyming Story R2: https://shorturl.at/ozDEZ" rel="nofollow - Flying On Empty (Thriller)


Posted By: Tim G
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:05am
Originally posted by alexdsut alexdsut wrote:

Group 9: Suspense / Bulk Buying / A Braggart

THE MARCOMANO

A peculiar Senator of Rome wishes to make purchase of a sizable number of gladiators, but in a world built upon bloodshed, costs can extend far beyond that of coin.

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Really enjoyed writing this one. It might just be my favourite yet!

Back to defend the double? ISN'T MAKING HISTORY ONCE ENOUGH FOR YOU!?

:) so glad you're here Alex!


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Rhyming Story R2: https://shorturl.at/ozDEZ" rel="nofollow - Flying On Empty (Thriller)


Posted By: Tim G
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:08am
Originally posted by Janetinputney Janetinputney wrote:

Group 20, horror, stagehand, shadow

I’d Do Anything
A teacher is terrorised by a mother will go to extreme lengths to ensure her daughter stars in the school production of ‘Oliver!’

I love this title/concept combo. Awesome.


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Rhyming Story R2: https://shorturl.at/ozDEZ" rel="nofollow - Flying On Empty (Thriller)


Posted By: Tim G
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:09am
Originally posted by Snarkmaiden Snarkmaiden wrote:

Group 47 Romcom / antique(s) / a carpenter

Antiques

The years haven't been kind to Sureshot Yolanda or the Red Woodsman -- former members of the heroic Shining Company. But when their old enemy stirs in its icy prison, they must join with a new generation to quell the threat -- and learn to see each other with fresh eyes...

Holy unoriginal title, Batman!

Your character names tho... and the plot doesn't look like one I've seen before Big smile


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Posted By: Tim G
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:11am
Group 33: Political Satire, Allergic, An Enforcer


The Complaint

President Hogarth's wiener is perfect for any American.
Disagree at your own risk.


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Posted By: Mister_Write
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:17am
Originally posted by Tim G Tim G wrote:

Group 33: Political Satire, Allergic, An Enforcer


The Complaint

President Hogarth's wiener is perfect for any American.
Disagree at your own risk.

So flippin' keen for this! :D. This logline is already bellissimo Clap


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Posted By: catnamedeaster
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:23am
Group 62 
Romance / Aviation / A midwife

I think this is the first logline I've written that I don't hate. 

Out of the Blue

With the help of a time machine, a scientist from the early 20th century falls in love with a midwife from the 21st and discovers they don't have all the time in the world. 


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Posted By: catnamedeaster
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:32am
Originally posted by Graham Brand Graham Brand wrote:

Originally posted by dcontarato dcontarato wrote:

Writing a time-travel script felt like playing with fire... but it was fun.


I think I'll post it on the forums... to get roasted LOL


Thanks to my amazing betas! 


I feel for you. I did one too... and I didn't even have SF as the genre...

There's always a paradox you can't explain away!

I did time travel, too. Smile With romance. Can't wait to read both of yours!


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Posted By: swilki
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:38am
Drama/Temptation/A Mechanic

MISSING MIKE

Home for his father's funeral, Adam has some decisions to make about the family business. But can he live up to his dad's reputation?

I'm a bit of a Leonard Da Quirm when it comes to titles, and was struggling to get into this script until last night, I only finished the first draft with about two hours to go and slapped a title on it - It's only this morning that I look at it and realise I practically named my story Magic Mike. Oh well!


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Posted By: Nimhathuna
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 7:58am

Group: 62: Prompts: Romance / Aviation / A midwife


Midwife Under Fire

War tears lovers apart; this war brought two together.





Posted By: catnamedeaster
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 8:48am
Originally posted by BarbaraFL BarbaraFL wrote:


Group 59 / Crime Caper / A last will and testament / A journalist

 

Stealing Honus 


When their stepmother bequeaths a rare, multi-million dollar baseball card to a charlatan televangelist family, siblings Joy and Brian scheme to steal it back.  



The odds of me posting it are slim - I don't think I've ever struggled with one more than this one! Was still working out plot holes at 8 p.m. and nearly shut the computer off. But just in case, here's the title and logline Big smile


Hi Barbara! 

This reminds me of your A/A short story a bit. LOL I hope you decide to post, I'd love to read it!


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Posted By: DSC123
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 8:51am
Group 39: mystery / stepmom / skywriting 

Jacks Over Aces

Jackson Diaz decides to investigate a series of mysterious deaths in his county after his father, the chief of police, refuses to act. 

Good luck to everybody. 


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Posted By: pentailed
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 8:53am
I love seeing heatmates in this thread! Looking forward to seeing what everyone has done with this genre!


Posted By: awai
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 8:55am
Group 68 : Political Satire / A feast / A gamer

"Well Played"

A local celebrity gamer receives a surprise invite to lunch with the Mayor of Tucksville, unaware the government party has plans for the use of her social media platform.

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Oh, the dreaded political satire ....  Ouch   Looking forward to reading many of the great and interesting stories I'm seeing here! Smile


Posted By: nickwascreative
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 9:03am
Group 62: Romance | Aviation | A Midwife

The Final Flare
When a plane crashes in a remote forest, a pilot and a midwife must coexist, looking to each other for warmth, comfort, and survival.


Posted By: Anansi
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 9:28am
Not sure yet whether I'll actually post the script - Rom Com is very much not my genre - but here goes...

Grp 22 / Rom Com / A grudge / A grandfather

Casa Messina

Old timers Benny and Bee have been rivals for as long as any of the other care home residents can remember (which isn't saying much). Can a ploy pull them together?


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Will return all reads. Thanks!


Posted By: SJRidley
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 9:39am
Group 6 
Romance - pit stop - a specialist 

“Rerouted”

When her flight is forced to ground during a storm, a highly independent self-help guru learns there is more to life than self-perseverance from an unlikely stranger. 

I absolutely hate my log-line. But, I’m proud to be done and submitted. The 12 page limit and my genre threatened my sanity quite a bit this week WackoGood luck to everyone! 


Posted By: Janetinputney
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 10:14am
Originally posted by Tim G Tim G wrote:

Originally posted by Janetinputney Janetinputney wrote:

Group 20, horror, stagehand, shadow

I’d Do Anything
A teacher is terrorised by a mother will go to extreme lengths to ensure her daughter stars in the school production of ‘Oliver!’

I love this title/concept combo. Awesome.

Thanks Tim.  Yours looks amazing as usual.  Can’t wait to read yours!!!


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Posted By: alelha
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 10:57am
Group 45 - spy/stubborn/an understudy

Chick'un Steak-Out At The Happy Clucks Cafe

Karma's dream to run a successful vegan cafe is put in jeopardy by

the grand opening of a new plant based restaurant. Can she harness

her skills as an understudy to win the role of a lifetime?



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Posted By: maryjanejacobs
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 11:06am
 Group 65 Fairy Tale/ A swindler/ Impregnable 
The Sparrows
A mysterious saleswoman gives a pair of sparrows to a kid. Is it a gift or is it a curse?

This was my first time participating! (this is also my first post in the forum!) I had so much fun/wow that was HARD. I've been out of practice for a long time but this was a really fun way to dip my toes back in. I am hoping to participate in future challenges. 


Posted By: wickedtallfilmmaker
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 11:07am
Group 28 -- Crime Caper/A Celebration/A Banker

Seco Tower

As a Drag Queen and a Bank Teller attempt to get into an exclusive gala, a vengeful plot against the elite party-goers begins to form.


Posted By: Birdie Num Num
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 11:13am
Group 69: Mystery/Alimony/A School Bus Driver

The Disappearance of Beverley Stopes

Daniel's innocence slowly fades as two Detectives question him over
the disappearance of his ex-wife.

I keep going back and forth on how I feel about this, I like it then I think it's meh. We shall see. Good luck to everyone


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Posted By: dialitbackfilms
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 11:17am
Group 57:  Suspense/Premeditation/A Truant Officer

For Jimmy

Four high school outcasts plot against the

 school truancy officer after one of their

 friends lands in the hospital.



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Posted By: jdadams1
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 11:31am
Not sure I'm going to post mine, but I ended up fairly happy with it, considering. I did an outline Friday night, wrote the dang thing in about 10 hours Saturday afternoon/evening, then did my final "submit" at 11:58 p.m. EDT Saturday night (the email confirmation has that exact time, so I know it didn't go over -- *phew*). 

Group: 43 / Genre: Fantasy / Subject: A Tribute / Character: A bookmaker

The Witch at the End of the World

A smug prince thinks he's won a witch's wager when he emerges with eternal life. But as the centuries wear on, he realizes he may not be the victor of this bet after all.


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Posted By: Paula
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 11:33am
Originally posted by BarbaraFL BarbaraFL wrote:

<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt">

<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt">Group 59 / Crime
Caper / A last will and testament / A
journalist



<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt"> 



<p style="text-align: center; margin: 0in; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt;">Stealing Honus</span><span style="font-size: 11pt;"> </span>



<p style="text-align: center; margin: 0in; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11pt;">



<p style="text-align: center; margin: 0in; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11pt;">When their
stepmother bequeaths a rare, multi-million dollar baseball card to a charlatan
televangelist family, siblings Joy and Brian scheme to steal it back.  

<p style="text-align: center; margin: 0in; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11pt;">

<p style="text-align: left; margin: 0in; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11pt;">

<p style="text-align: left; margin: 0in; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11pt;">The odds of me posting it are slim - I don't think I've ever struggled with one more than this one! Was still working out plot holes at 8 p.m. and nearly shut the computer off. But just in case, here's the title and logline Big smile






Oh hello there heatmate! I'm sure it is much better than you think and I would love taking a look. If that helps, I struggled too. Particularly because this time, I didn't have much time to write. Since crime capers allow for a certain suspension of disbelief, I'm banking on that to cover for the bits of my script that would perhaps require a bit more explanation. And whatever happens, we managed to submit something on time :-)

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Posted By: ashwilleby
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 11:46am
Group 26: Comedy / Sportsmanship / A Waiter

Odd Man In
A pick-up game of basketball shows how important sportsmanship values are in everyday life. 


Posted By: Rachel M
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 11:49am
Originally posted by SJRidley SJRidley wrote:

Group 6 
Romance - pit stop - a specialist 

“Rerouted”

When her flight is forced to ground during a storm, a highly independent self-help guru learns there is more to life than self-perseverance from an unlikely stranger. 

I absolutely hate my log-line. But, I’m proud to be done and submitted. The 12 page limit and my genre threatened my sanity quite a bit this week WackoGood luck to everyone! 


Yay! A heatmate! And yeah this one took my sanity a couple nights in a row this week... Hope you post yours when we're able to; I'd love to read it.



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Posted By: RiBoMex
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:07pm
Group 67 - Fantasy, Luxurious, a Barbarian

THE BARBARIAN'S ROAR

An uninvited guest with a grudge will expose a mother's dark secret and set a young girl into the path of an exciting adventure.


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Posted By: SJRidley
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:08pm
I'm on the fence about posting, but hopefully get a little bit of confidence in it soon! This is my first script for competition, but I did like it enough by the end. 

I'd love to read yours, too! Your Logline has me intrigued!! Thumbs Up (whoops this was supposed to be a Reply to Rachel M, doesn't look like I did it right, but I'll figure this all out soon enough Wacko

Where are our other heat mates?! Come on out group 6!!


Posted By: LAbeles
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:16pm
This sounds amazing. So glad I'm not in your heat! 


Posted By: LukeSutton
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:16pm
Group 61: Drama, Temptation, A Mechanic 

The Commission 

A financially struggling mechanic has a strange encounter with a couple of goons, but dealing with deep pockets he bites off more than he can chew.


Posted By: LAbeles
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:22pm
Group: 43 / Fantasy /  A Tribute /  A bookmaker


LOGLINE:
In the Elf-ruled Kingdom of Phalhaellen, all identical twin brothers born of Men are forced to fight each other to the death on their 16th birthday, in THE FRAY. 


Posted By: Janetinputney
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:51pm
Originally posted by LAbeles LAbeles wrote:

Group: 43 / Fantasy /  A Tribute /  A bookmaker


LOGLINE:
In the Elf-ruled Kingdom of Phalhaellen, all identical twin brothers born of Men are forced to fight each other to the death on their 16th birthday, in THE FRAY. 

Love the sound of this!!


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Posted By: haole
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:55pm
Group 43 / Fantasy / A Tribute / A Bookmaker

TALOS, THE WARRIOR

LOGLINE
The King's annual Tribute Tournament gains an intriguing storyline after an incident with one of his representatives.


Posted By: haole
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:56pm
Originally posted by LAbeles LAbeles wrote:

Group: 43 / Fantasy /  A Tribute /  A bookmaker


LOGLINE:
In the Elf-ruled Kingdom of Phalhaellen, all identical twin brothers born of Men are forced to fight each other to the death on their 16th birthday, in THE FRAY. 


Good luck, heat mate!


Posted By: haole
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 12:58pm
Originally posted by jdadams1 jdadams1 wrote:

Not sure I'm going to post mine, but I ended up fairly happy with it, considering. I did an outline Friday night, wrote the dang thing in about 10 hours Saturday afternoon/evening, then did my final "submit" at 11:58 p.m. EDT Saturday night (the email confirmation has that exact time, so I know it didn't go over -- *phew*). 

Group: 43 / Genre: Fantasy / Subject: A Tribute / Character: A bookmaker

The Witch at the End of the World

A smug prince thinks he's won a witch's wager when he emerges with eternal life. But as the centuries wear on, he realizes he may not be the victor of this bet after all.


LOL, aside from doing an outline first, this is pretty much what I ended up doing. I procrastinated mine all week last week

Good luck, heatmate! I know you always bring something solid and entertaining  :)


Posted By: freddwilk
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:32pm
Group 65: Fairy Tale / Impregnable / A swindler

FREYJA AND THE NECKLACE

In an untold chapter of Norse Mythology, Freyja has been running her whole life, chased by monsters wanting to steal her powers.

I wasn't completely happy with my logline but found it difficult as I didn't want to give too much away... Anyhow, I'm looking forward to reading some amazing-sounding scripts! Any heat-mates out there?


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Posted By: pgleleux
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 1:58pm
H29- Horror, Long-distance, talent scout

Monsters Among Us

When human traffickers lure Julia into a modeling scheme they get more than they bargained for.


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Posted By: pgleleux
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:04pm
Originally posted by alelha alelha wrote:

Group 45 - spy/stubborn/an understudy

Chick'un Steak-Out At The Happy Clucks Cafe

Karma's dream to run a successful vegan cafe is put in jeopardy by

the grand opening of a new plant based restaurant. Can she harness

her skills as an understudy to win the role of a lifetime?

I can't wait to read this one just from the title!😂


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Posted By: Julia
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:10pm
Looking forward to reading so many of these!

Haven't seen a ton of spy genre represented in this thread so far - "spy" definitely threw me for a loop when it landed in my assignment... But, ended up having a ton of fun with this one!

Group 17: spy / a replica / a nerd


GLASSBREAKERS

An elite team of cocktail waitresses work a Friday night job at a corrupt corporate office. 




Posted By: jettmovieman
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:50pm
Group 7 - Spy / A Scandal / A Runner


The Decryptor 

"Following the murder of an Eastern European government official, a local police decryption specialist must carry out a covert mission, while avoiding the suspicion of a Federal Investigator."


First time I've written anything in the Spy genre. Definitely gave me some trouble fitting the twists and turns into 12 pages, but I'm decently satisfied with the results.


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Posted By: Patrice
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:53pm
Group 52: Ghost/Cowardly/Contrarian

COWARDLY LYONS
When the wealthy Lyon family discovers their new house is haunted,
they reluctantly band together to save their mother from a vengeful
and disapproving specter.


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Posted By: Snake1082
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:55pm
Group 27: Romance | Superficial | A Pharmacist

Bourbons, Digestives, and Chocolate Fingers

Sharing a biscuit with the right person can change everything.

Yum.


Posted By: Patrice
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:58pm
Smile I like this one!

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Posted By: Patrice
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 2:59pm
I like this one!

Originally posted by Julia Julia wrote:

Looking forward to reading so many of these!

Haven't seen a ton of spy genre represented in this thread so far - "spy" definitely threw me for a loop when it landed in my assignment... But, ended up having a ton of fun with this one!

Group 17: spy / a replica / a nerd


GLASSBREAKERS

An elite team of cocktail waitresses work a Friday night job at a corrupt corporate office. 




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Posted By: Tim G
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 3:00pm
Originally posted by Julia Julia wrote:

Looking forward to reading so many of these!

Haven't seen a ton of spy genre represented in this thread so far - "spy" definitely threw me for a loop when it landed in my assignment... But, ended up having a ton of fun with this one!

Group 17: spy / a replica / a nerd


GLASSBREAKERS

An elite team of cocktail waitresses work a Friday night job at a corrupt corporate office. 


Sounds like a ton of fun to read!


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Posted By: swilki
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 3:01pm
Originally posted by LukeSutton LukeSutton wrote:

Group 61: Drama, Temptation, A Mechanic 

The Commission 

A financially struggling mechanic has a strange encounter with a couple of goons, but dealing with deep pockets he bites off more than he can chew.
Hello heatmate! 
Really like the sound of this.


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Posted By: Nimhathuna
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 3:08pm
Originally posted by freddwilk freddwilk wrote:

Group 65: Fairy Tale / Impregnable / A swindler

FREYJA AND THE NECKLACE

In an untold chapter of Norse Mythology, Freyja has been running her whole life, chased by monsters wanting to steal her powers.

I wasn't completely happy with my logline but found it difficult as I didn't want to give too much away... Anyhow, I'm looking forward to reading some amazing-sounding scripts! Any heat-mates out there?

This is right up my (research) alley. Nothing like an inventive twist on an Old Norse saga. Looking forward to reading this.


Posted By: Probably Someone
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 3:23pm
Group 47: Rom Com / Antique(s) / A carpenter

Wood You Please

When Kevin returns to the sleepy suburb he escaped as a teenager to settle his estranged father's estate, he discovers the boy next door grew into the man of his dreams. 
But of course, he's straight and spoken for -- isn't he?


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Posted By: emw95
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 3:45pm
Group 62: Romance/Aviation/A midwife 

An admittedly boring logline but I went down to the wire with this one.

Blood, Touch, Planes, and Ice Cream
Two deeply scared people fight fear to find love. 


Posted By: kcwelsch
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 4:03pm
Group 31: Ghost Story, Dilapidated, A Financier

NO PLACE

A rich person believes they can’t feel anything anymore and enlists an assistant to help find an experience that will change this. They get what they pay for.


Posted By: rebeccalouise
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 4:04pm
Here’s mine!

GROUP 44 - Fantasy, Circumnavigating, A birder

Caladrius

A young girl hunts for a bird with the power to cure any disease so that it may heal her sister


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Posted By: LAbeles
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:27pm
Same to you!


Posted By: Alix_Flo
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:30pm
Same group (23) - I wrote 'NORAH'

A brilliant engineer steers a tortured rockstar on a meditative road trip. It's one service against another to change their lives forever.

Good luck everybody. Can't wait to read some other interpretations of the genre/subject.


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Posted By: LAbeles
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:30pm
Originally posted by haole haole wrote:

Group 43 / Fantasy / A Tribute / A Bookmaker

TALOS, THE WARRIOR

LOGLINE
The King's annual Tribute Tournament gains an intriguing storyline after an incident with one of his representatives.

Good luck to you, Heatmate!


Posted By: laurbail
Date Posted: 28 Mar 2021 at 5:37pm
Originally posted by manifestlynot manifestlynot wrote:

 Group 44 - Historical fiction/a bond/a pathfinder      

The Hastings Cutoff

    Lansford Hastings' word is his bond. That's what Virginia Reed and the rest of the Donner-Reed Party are trusting as they prepare to take the Hastings Cutoff on their way to California - again.

So looking forward to reading this one!



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