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Topic: Third Round
Posted By: Random
Subject: Third Round
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:05am
Comedy.  Why did it have to be comedy?

Ok, enough of that, time for bed.


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Posted By: charleycheval
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:06am
Crime caper for me... first time and a bit nervous Confused

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Posted By: Puckerby
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:06am
Mystery. I am in the middle of reading a 12 book mystery series. I still have no idea how to write a mystery. This is definitely a sleep on it kind of prompt.

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Posted By: manifestlynot
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:07am
Thriller, School for the Blind, Compact Disc or CD. Hmm...

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Posted By: jpronovost523
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:08am
Ghost story, Ferris wheel, and syringe here... gonna have to change up my soundtrack so I can get in the right frame of mind for this one...
Best of luck everyone!


Posted By: ImprintedPrincess
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:09am
Ghost story, ferris wheel, syringe.

Could have been a lot worse, I guess. Thanking my lucky stars no comedy or pol sat. 


Posted By: MrLipto
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:10am
Romance.

NYCM must love how Lipto does love, cuz I dance this jig every damn year.

Sigh. Alright. Let's count our gratitudes. Romance offers a lot of room in which to work.

Hey. No political satire assignments this round. That normal?


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Posted By: deedodd81
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:15am
Horror.

Have literally never read or watched a horror...anything in my life. I had my eyes covered for most of October.



Posted By: KLNorman
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:15am
Alas...horror again. Hopefully 3rd time’s the charm.

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Posted By: amlewi08
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:15am
Crime caper, underground bunker, flip chart.  

Not a very inspired combo, we’ll see what happens!


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Posted By: northernwriter
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:15am
Romantic comedy, hair dye, a concert

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Posted By: cheddarbaked
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:16am
Horror--one of my favorite genres! Going to be fun to play around with this one.

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Posted By: td333777
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:18am
Suspense/Fire Escape/Mattress

I checked the other people in my heat, and one of them is Sarah Martin, the 2017 Short Story Comp champ.  This is the second time we've ended up in the same heat together: two overall winners head-to-head!  Oh yeah, with 23 other really talented people too!  <grumble grumble, damn luck of the draw>

Time to make the chimichangas!

:)


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Posted By: charleycheval
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:20am
Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

Crime caper, underground bunker, flip chart.  

Not a very inspired combo, we’ll see what happens!

Hey groupmate! Good luck!


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Posted By: dennymike
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:20am
Comedy - A Temp Agency - A Motor

(Whew thank the assignment gods no Poli-sat) I think I can do this.


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Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:21am
OMG - I'm completely thrown. Of all the genre possibilities that I'd have loved to get, hated to get, and thought I would get...Sci-fi wasn't one of them. That genre wasn't even remotely on my mind so I honestly don't even know how to feel about it haha. I don't read sci-fi nor do I really watch it (unless Hunger Games and Star Wars are sci-fi). Guess my first google search will be "How do I write sci-fi?" LOL I'm group 14 and my other elements are a fashion show and a chain. 

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Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:23am
Originally posted by manifestlynot manifestlynot wrote:

Thriller, School for the Blind, Compact Disc or CD. Hmm...

You come up with great stories so I can't wait to see what you write for this. I hope your story has a seeing eye dog for the blind SmileSmileSmile


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Posted By: manifestlynot
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:23am
Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

OMG - I'm completely thrown. Of all the genre possibilities that I'd have loved to get, hated to get, and thought I would get...Sci-fi wasn't one of them. That genre wasn't even remotely on my mind so I honestly don't even know how to feel about it haha. I don't read sci-fi nor do I really watch it (unless Hunger Games and Star Wars are sci-fi). Guess my first google search will be "How do I write sci-fi?" LOL I'm group 14 and my other elements are a fashion show and a chain. 

Write political satire and add robots and/or aliens in a technology-rich world. Done!


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Posted By: td333777
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:24am
Also noticed, no political satire or spy in this round.  Thank goodness for small favors!

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Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:26am
Originally posted by deedodd81 deedodd81 wrote:

Horror.

Have literally never read or watched a horror...anything in my life. I had my eyes covered for most of October.


Aaaw, I love this post so much! "my eyes closed for most of October." Love that. Horror might be more fun to write than it is to watch. Wink


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Posted By: northernwriter
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:28am
Originally posted by td333777 td333777 wrote:

Also noticed, no political satire or spy in this round.  Thank goodness for small favors!

I was hoping to get one of those! 

Rom-Com is a good second choice for me, though. Glad you aren't in my round. (I bet you're glad you're not in my round also, or you'd have to write a rom-com also!)

Good luck!

-Alex


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Microfiction 2021: 4th place overall
Flash Fiction 2020: 8th place overall


Posted By: amlewi08
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:29am
Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

Crime caper, underground bunker, flip chart.  

Not a very inspired combo, we’ll see what happens!

Hey groupmate! Good luck!

Hey! Thanks! You too! 


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Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:29am
Originally posted by manifestlynot manifestlynot wrote:

Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

OMG - I'm completely thrown. Of all the genre possibilities that I'd have loved to get, hated to get, and thought I would get...Sci-fi wasn't one of them. That genre wasn't even remotely on my mind so I honestly don't even know how to feel about it haha. I don't read sci-fi nor do I really watch it (unless Hunger Games and Star Wars are sci-fi). Guess my first google search will be "How do I write sci-fi?" LOL I'm group 14 and my other elements are a fashion show and a chain. 

Write political satire and add robots and/or aliens in a technology-rich world. Done!

HAH! That might be the way to go :-)


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Posted By: td333777
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:29am
Originally posted by northernwriter northernwriter wrote:

Originally posted by td333777 td333777 wrote:

Also noticed, no political satire or spy in this round.  Thank goodness for small favors!

I was hoping to get one of those! 

Rom-Com is a good second choice for me, though. Glad you aren't in my round. (I bet you're glad you're not in my round also, or you'd have to write a rom-com also!)

Good luck!

-Alex


I AM glad!  Rom com would flummox me!! :)  I'm glad you got something you enjoy, though.  Good luck!!

TD


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Posted By: Lookit There
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:30am
Originally posted by northernwriter northernwriter wrote:

Romantic comedy, hair dye, a concert
Well, you did say your strategy was to write comedy, no matter what genre you pulled. 
So there you are! Good luck!!!


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Posted By: SLK43
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:33am
Action Adventure / A gravesite / a rifle. Gulp.

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Posted By: LindaNZ
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:40am
Sci Fi (twice in a row, maybe it'll become my thing). Adoption agency. Seesaw. They kinda work together. At the domestic airport so will spend my flight home thinking this through. I don't think I recognised anyone else in my group.

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Posted By: northernwriter
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:43am
Originally posted by Lookit There Lookit There wrote:

Originally posted by northernwriter northernwriter wrote:

Romantic comedy, hair dye, a concert
Well, you did say your strategy was to write comedy, no matter what genre you pulled. 
So there you are! Good luck!!!

Yes, the satanic squirrel horror-comedy mashup that I planned may have been too much for the judges. 

Good luck, everyone!

-Alex


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Microfiction 2021: 4th place overall
Flash Fiction 2020: 8th place overall


Posted By: Charlie272
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:45am
Historical .. sigh... fiction ... sigh ... in a .. sigh ... maternity ward ... with ... a .. sigh .. horse.

Group nine... sigh ... teen.


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Posted By: lisafox10800
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:51am
Originally posted by manifestlynot manifestlynot wrote:

Thriller, School for the Blind, Compact Disc or CD. Hmm...

Me too! Good luck!


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Posted By: Talia
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 2:35am
Originally posted by Charlie272 Charlie272 wrote:

Historical .. sigh... fiction ... sigh ... in a .. sigh ... maternity ward ... with ... a .. sigh .. horse.

Group nine... sigh ... teen.

Hahaha I'm with you, in the group and in the sentiments


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Posted By: LyndaD
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 3:23am
Horror in a pharmacy with a welding helmet.

I think Colonel Mustard did it.Wacko


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Posted By: OnyxLily
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 3:37am
Originally posted by Charlie272 Charlie272 wrote:

Historical .. sigh... fiction ... sigh ... in a .. sigh ... maternity ward ... with ... a .. sigh .. horse.

Group nine... sigh ... teen.
I’m cheering for you! 


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Posted By: Fabala
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 3:45am
Thriller!

Considering some of the genres I feared, I'm happy with that.


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Posted By: Fabala
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 3:47am
Originally posted by manifestlynot manifestlynot wrote:

Thriller, School for the Blind, Compact Disc or CD. Hmm...

Same! The wheels are turning :)


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Posted By: Sammayne
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 4:07am
Thriller, CD, School for the Blind. 

Lots of opportunities with this prompt, but Thriller feels like such an ambiguous genre? 


Posted By: AineKnees
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 4:17am
[QUOTE=LyndaD]Horror in a pharmacy with a welding helmet.

I think Colonel Mustard did it.Wacko
[/QUOTE

Hi  I'm in the same group! Good luck! Wink]


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Posted By: Snarkmaiden
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 5:43am
Comedy / a temp agency / a motor.

I always say I don't want comedy, but I think I have this one...


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Posted By: Anansi
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 9:04am
Romance; a Frozen pond and a croissant for me. 

And French ice-skating accordionists will not leave my brain.

Have fun everyone!




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Will return all reads. Thanks!


Posted By: salgal80
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 9:12am
I’m on vacation in China so have to write and submit from here. Walked into a restaurant tonight alone. No English on menu or coming out of anyone’s mouth. The only non-Asian around.
Did I mention I drew horror? 🤪


Posted By: crumhorn
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 9:39am
Fairy tale/rowboat/podium. Uh..... Ok, sure, why not?

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Posted By: Charlie272
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 10:08am
Originally posted by salgal80 salgal80 wrote:

Did I mention I drew horror? 🤪

Horror, again!  Your FAVORITE!


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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 10:37am
Rom-Com | Outdoor cafe | Energy bar

The thing writes itself.


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Posted By: Puckerby
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 10:51am
It would be lovely if my computer would start working so I can write. :/ Sigh.

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Posted By: salgal80
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 12:14pm
Hahaha! My last horror barely got me through!
Getting horror IS my horror!


Originally posted by Charlie272 Charlie272 wrote:

Originally posted by salgal80 salgal80 wrote:

Did I mention I drew horror? 🤪

Horror, again!  Your FAVORITE!


Posted By: MarkBickle
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 12:37pm
I got Comedy (again), a temp agency, a motor.

Don't like any of the ideas I have so far, plus I'm out tonight and all day tomorrow so God knows what I'll be submitting.

Last challenge I tried comedy/drama but I think that was risky. Got 10 points but feel like I should have gone more full-on comedy (one of the judges even said as much).


Posted By: louciferish
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 1:37pm
I had a lovely idea when I found out I made the cut. I decided no matter what I drew, I was going to embrace my inner weirdness and do something fun.

Of course, I'm in the historical fiction/maternity ward/horse group

sigh

Best of luck to everyone!


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Posted By: rmaterese
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 3:06pm
Hi heatmates,

I'm also ghost / ferris wheel / syringe.

I have a concept, but I'm not sure it's ghosty enough. Here's hoping as I work on a draft.


Posted By: justmel
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 3:13pm
Originally posted by LindaNZ LindaNZ wrote:

Sci Fi (twice in a row, maybe it'll become my thing). Adoption agency. Seesaw. They kinda work together. At the domestic airport so will spend my flight home thinking this through. I don't think I recognised anyone else in my group.
 
I'm in your group!  *waves*


Posted By: rmaterese
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 4:38pm
Draft one done. It evolved while writing. I think I like it. I'm pretty happy with the ending that just came to me. Now I just need to figure out how to trim 288 words. 

Oh, and I hate my title.


Posted By: MegtheCrane
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 4:45pm
Originally posted by td333777 td333777 wrote:

Suspense/Fire Escape/Mattress

I checked the other people in my heat, and one of them is Sarah Martin, the 2017 Short Story Comp champ.  This is the second time we've ended up in the same heat together: two overall winners head-to-head!  Oh yeah, with 23 other really talented people too!  <grumble grumble, damn luck of the draw>

Time to make the chimichangas!

:)

Oh gosh. As if I wasn't nervous before, now I really feel the "heat" (pun painfully intended). 




Posted By: rmaterese
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 4:56pm
OK. I did a read/rewrite. And it ended up longer. Argh! I think I may need to take a break and take a fresh look later. // UPDATE: I'm down to "only" being 187 words too long. But I used to be 280+ too long. So I made some progress. Break time!

I will say, I went back and reread my feedback from the last round and am trying to keep that in mind as I write this time. Not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing. But they had some valid comments so... there's that.


Posted By: rmaterese
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 5:10pm
Originally posted by crumhorn crumhorn wrote:

Fairy tale/rowboat/podium. Uh..... Ok, sure, why not?

Wow. Now THAT's difficult. The rowboat - podium thing seems CRAZY hard. Good luck!


Posted By: Hatter
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 5:11pm
Fantasy...oof.  

I may be many things, but Tolkien is not one of them.


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Posted By: ChillyToez
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 5:34pm
Any other 24's out there? (Fantasy, construction site, mirror)

I have thus far, written a perfectly adequate first draft and have then tossed it in the bin for not being sexy enough for a C3 story. (figuratively, not literally. It's not that kind of story!)

262 words into idea 2... it might soon be time to break out the liquid creativity.


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Posted By: Hatter
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 5:37pm
24 here as well. Not thrilled with what I’ve done, but it’s a serviceable tale of inspiration doesn’t strike with something better. 

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Posted By: taaaylor
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 5:49pm
I got historical fiction, concrete plant, and massage table… I think I finally got a workable idea, but wow those three don't harmonize that well together LOL

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Posted By: LindaNZ
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 5:52pm
Originally posted by justmel justmel wrote:

Originally posted by LindaNZ LindaNZ wrote:

Sci Fi (twice in a row, maybe it'll become my thing). Adoption agency. Seesaw. They kinda work together. At the domestic airport so will spend my flight home thinking this through. I don't think I recognised anyone else in my group.
 
I'm in your group!  *waves*

Yay a groupmate! Good luck!Hug


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Posted By: Anansi
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 6:05pm
Originally posted by ChillyToez ChillyToez wrote:

Any other 24's out there? (Fantasy, construction site, mirror)

I have thus far, written a perfectly adequate first draft and have then tossed it in the bin for not being sexy enough for a C3 story. (figuratively, not literally. It's not that kind of story!)

262 words into idea 2... it might soon be time to break out the liquid creativity.

Broke out the liquid creativity some time ago and my first draft is getting progressively squiffy.


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Will return all reads. Thanks!


Posted By: ChillyToez
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 6:11pm
Originally posted by Anansi Anansi wrote:


Broke out the liquid creativity some time ago and my first draft is getting progressively squiffy.


<asks the Google about "squiffy." delights in new terminology>

Ya learn something new everyday.


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Posted By: louciferish
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 6:33pm
My first draft rings in at 1,022. Now to find a few victims/readers.

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Posted By: NKurt
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 7:46pm
Thriller, Nature Reserve, Handcuffs.

At least there are no horses or massage tables 😁


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Posted By: Random
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 8:26pm
Originally posted by NKurt NKurt wrote:

Thriller, Nature Reserve, Handcuffs.

At least there are no horses or massage tables 😁


A handcuffed horse on a massage table in a nature reserve?  Might be a little over the top.


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Posted By: uglypantsuit
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 8:32pm
Horror, Pharmacy, Welding Mask

I've taken the most generic approach to these prompts, but I think I have a solid idea. 

First draft clicks in at 1600 words, time for some serious trimming and refinement. 


Posted By: chrissie0707
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 8:33pm
Originally posted by Anansi Anansi wrote:

Broke out the liquid creativity some time ago and my first draft is getting progressively squiffy.


This is my new favorite word.

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Posted By: deedodd81
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 8:47pm
Originally posted by uglypantsuit uglypantsuit wrote:

Horror, Pharmacy, Welding Mask

I've taken the most generic approach to these prompts, but I think I have a solid idea. 

First draft clicks in at 1600 words, time for some serious trimming and refinement. 
I am in your group and i have nothing can i have your excess 600 words?


Posted By: alelha
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 9:08pm
Originally posted by taaaylor taaaylor wrote:

I got historical fiction, concrete plant, and massage table… I think I finally got a workable idea, but wow those three don't harmonize that well together LOL

I'm in your group. I have a first draft but I hate it. I also hate historical fiction and concrete plants. And now I even hate massage tables.


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Posted By: charleycheval
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 9:19pm
I have nothing. Crime caper is turning out to be a major pain in my neck.

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Posted By: Random
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 9:28pm
Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

I have nothing. Crime caper is turning out to be a major pain in my neck.


Think Mission Impossible.  I prefer to think about the series, not the movies, because I'm old and remember them and they're not nearly as obnoxious as the Tom Cruise movies.

Much as with rounds one and two I'm at one day with a few ideas and no words.  The first draft will get written around 2:00 tomorrow afternoon if history is a guide.


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Posted By: Fabala
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 9:43pm
Originally posted by Hatter Hatter wrote:

Fantasy...oof.  

I may be many things, but Tolkien is not one of them.

If it helps, I'm not sure he'd be capable of truncating himself down to 1000 words Wink


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Posted By: NKurt
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 9:53pm
Originally posted by Fabala Fabala wrote:

Originally posted by Hatter Hatter wrote:

Fantasy...oof.  

I may be many things, but Tolkien is not one of them.

If it helps, I'm not sure he'd be capable of truncating himself down to 1000 words Wink
Maybe describing the setting in the opening scene. 


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Posted By: crumhorn
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 9:56pm
Originally posted by alelha alelha wrote:

Originally posted by taaaylor taaaylor wrote:

I got historical fiction, concrete plant, and massage table… I think I finally got a workable idea, but wow those three don't harmonize that well together LOL

I'm in your group. I have a first draft but I hate it. I also hate historical fiction and concrete plants. And now I even hate massage tables.

Wow, this may be the toughest combo I've seen!  At least you're only competing against each other for who can make these elements make the most sense together. :-)


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Posted By: ChillyToez
Date Posted: 09 Nov 2019 at 10:38pm
Originally posted by Fabala Fabala wrote:

Originally posted by Hatter Hatter wrote:

Fantasy...oof.  

I may be many things, but Tolkien is not one of them.

If it helps, I'm not sure he'd be capable of truncating himself down to 1000 words Wink

I mean, have you read The Silmarillion? I takes 1500 words just to get through the lineage....


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Posted By: amlewi08
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 2:35am
Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

I have nothing. Crime caper is turning out to be a major pain in my neck.

You got this group mate! I definitely used the NYCM definition of crime caper as a guide in this one.



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Posted By: Beamishgirl
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 6:13am
Originally posted by chrissie0707 chrissie0707 wrote:

Originally posted by Anansi Anansi wrote:

Broke out the liquid creativity some time ago and my first draft is getting progressively squiffy.


This is my new favorite word.

Me too! I actually snuck it into my story at the end. LOL


Posted By: AineKnees
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 12:33pm
Ugh, so far I haven't got into the writing at all this weekend... so much going on... am pregnant and going through a tough time with my husband which has left me quite down and unmotivated... plus just tired in general and sleeping for Ireland at the minute. 
BUT... 
I am hoping to get into the story after I eat. I have written about 400 words of a first draft so it's not hopeless. Just not in the mood to write a horror. Or do anything. 
Whinge over! (swaps complaining bracelet to other wrist!) 
Ok now I'll start pep-talking myself. You can do this! Etc etc... Yeah it'll be ok... mightn't be a great story but I'll try and finish a first draft soon and then a second later and what the hey, we're not always in the mood to write, right? Just got to do it anyway. I WILL enjoy completing it. Good luck all!


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Posted By: AineKnees
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 12:34pm
Originally posted by deedodd81 deedodd81 wrote:

Originally posted by uglypantsuit uglypantsuit wrote:

Horror, Pharmacy, Welding Mask

I've taken the most generic approach to these prompts, but I think I have a solid idea. 

First draft clicks in at 1600 words, time for some serious trimming and refinement. 
I am in your group and i have nothing can i have your excess 600 words?

Ha ha, I'm in the same group too, chuck a few of 'em my way! LOL


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Posted By: AineKnees
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 12:36pm
Originally posted by alelha alelha wrote:

Originally posted by taaaylor taaaylor wrote:

I got historical fiction, concrete plant, and massage table… I think I finally got a workable idea, but wow those three don't harmonize that well together LOL

I'm in your group. I have a first draft but I hate it. I also hate historical fiction and concrete plants. And now I even hate massage tables.

Oh, bless you two, and the others in your group... those prompts do kinda suck... eek!


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Posted By: AineKnees
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 2:56pm
Right, my procrastination knows no bounds today. I've been sitting watching videos of the twin towers collapsing while crying my eyes out for all the people and the heroic firefighters... 
No this has nothing at all to do with my story!
Still only got 414 words written!


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Posted By: uglypantsuit
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 4:37pm
Originally posted by AineKnees AineKnees wrote:

Originally posted by deedodd81 deedodd81 wrote:

Originally posted by uglypantsuit uglypantsuit wrote:

Horror, Pharmacy, Welding Mask

I've taken the most generic approach to these prompts, but I think I have a solid idea. 

First draft clicks in at 1600 words, time for some serious trimming and refinement. 
I am in your group and i have nothing can i have your excess 600 words?

Ha ha, I'm in the same group too, chuck a few of 'em my way! LOL

Oh no!!! 300 each?? They're all incoherent half-bits of sentences, you're welcome to them LOL


Posted By: taaaylor
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 6:22pm
Originally posted by alelha alelha wrote:

Originally posted by taaaylor taaaylor wrote:

I got historical fiction, concrete plant, and massage table… I think I finally got a workable idea, but wow those three don't harmonize that well together LOL

I'm in your group. I have a first draft but I hate it. I also hate historical fiction and concrete plants. And now I even hate massage tables.

Ohh man I'm 700 words along and commiserate all too well. I hope that you were able to edit it into something you like a little more. Tbh I had no idea I could resent a piece of furniture and its history so much. Good job wrangling a hell of a weird prompt!


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Posted By: taaaylor
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 6:25pm
Originally posted by crumhorn crumhorn wrote:

Wow, this may be the toughest combo I've seen!  At least you're only competing against each other for who can make these elements make the most sense together. :-)

Originally posted by AineKnees AineKnees wrote:

Oh, bless you two, and the others in your group... those prompts do kinda suck... eek!

omfg thank you BOTH. I'm glad it's not just me. I've gotten some bizarre pairings before (like fishing pole and a statue) but never anything so outright juxtaposed. Surprisingly difficult, but I guess that's what this challenge is for! :)


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Posted By: SnasonJoe
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 6:29pm
Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

Crime caper, underground bunker, flip chart.  

Not a very inspired combo, we’ll see what happens!

Worse genre/setting combo ever.


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Posted By: SnasonJoe
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 6:39pm
Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

I have nothing. Crime caper is turning out to be a major pain in my neck.

YES! THIS! 

I should share my effing google search history over the last 36 hours - it was a wild ride.


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Posted By: amlewi08
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 7:02pm
Originally posted by SnasonJoe SnasonJoe wrote:

Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

Crime caper, underground bunker, flip chart.  

Not a very inspired combo, we’ll see what happens!

Worse genre/setting combo ever.

I know. It’s so blasé.  I almost wish it was something super outlandish.


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Posted By: SnasonJoe
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 7:58pm
Originally posted by alelha alelha wrote:

Originally posted by taaaylor taaaylor wrote:

I got historical fiction, concrete plant, and massage table… I think I finally got a workable idea, but wow those three don't harmonize that well together LOL

I'm in your group. I have a first draft but I hate it. I also hate historical fiction and concrete plants. And now I even hate massage tables.
I'm so tired at this point I thought concrete plant was the item - like a concrete fern. Oh boy.

My prompt was bad - very pigeonholing - yours makes me want to become an accountant.


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Posted By: MidwestToImpress
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 9:00pm

Originally posted by AineKnees AineKnees wrote:

Originally posted by deedodd81 deedodd81 wrote:

Originally posted by uglypantsuit uglypantsuit wrote:

Horror, Pharmacy, Welding Mask
I've taken the most generic approach to these prompts, but I think I have a solid idea. 

First draft clicks in at 1600 words, time for some serious trimming and refinement. 
I am in your group and i have nothing can i have your excess 600 words?

Ha ha, I'm in the same group too, chuck a few of 'em my way! LOL

Hello group mates!

Is it just me or is this prompt set wayyyyy more complicated than I thought. Woof. Just finished my first draft and its...fine. I cant tell if I was totally obvious or actually made something clever. Bleh.


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Posted By: charleycheval
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 9:09pm
Originally posted by SnasonJoe SnasonJoe wrote:

Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

I have nothing. Crime caper is turning out to be a major pain in my neck.

YES! THIS! 

I should share my effing google search history over the last 36 hours - it was a wild ride.

I am pretty sure we should start a thread after this disaster. 


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Posted By: SnasonJoe
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 9:12pm
Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

Originally posted by SnasonJoe SnasonJoe wrote:

Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

I have nothing. Crime caper is turning out to be a major pain in my neck.

YES! THIS! 

I should share my effing google search history over the last 36 hours - it was a wild ride.

I am pretty sure we should start a thread after this disaster. 
Let's just say I did a deep dive into septic tanks and could totally steal gold bricks via the sh*tter if I needed to.


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Posted By: SuperKarateMonkey
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 9:21pm
Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

Crime caper, underground bunker, flip chart.  

Not a very inspired combo, we’ll see what happens!

Hey groupmate! Good luck!


Looks like we're all groupmates. Good luck to all!


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Posted By: iliketowrite
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 9:35pm
Hey groupmates.

I am feeling your struggle. In my four years of doing this competition I have never fought a story this much. Best of luck, we're all gonna need it.

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Posted By: kizernix
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 9:44pm
I drew SUSPENSE, AN EMERGENCY ROOM & A HOUSEPLANT.  At first all I could think about was Little Shop of Horrors!  LOL




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Posted By: Random
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 10:03pm
Originally posted by kizernix kizernix wrote:

I drew SUSPENSE, AN EMERGENCY ROOM & A HOUSEPLANT.  At first all I could think about was Little Shop of Horrors!  LOL



Someone has a potted borocherro in the ER, and all kinds of strange things ensue?


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Posted By: amlewi08
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 10:23pm
So many group 16 people!  I hope everyone posts their stories, I was the only one who posted in my group last round. :( 

edit: typos


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Posted By: charleycheval
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 10:23pm
Originally posted by SnasonJoe SnasonJoe wrote:

Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

Originally posted by SnasonJoe SnasonJoe wrote:

Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

I have nothing. Crime caper is turning out to be a major pain in my neck.

YES! THIS! 

I should share my effing google search history over the last 36 hours - it was a wild ride.

I am pretty sure we should start a thread after this disaster. 
Let's just say I did a deep dive into septic tanks and could totally steal gold bricks via the sh*tter if I needed to.

Pretty sure at this point it is no longer crime caper for me and is more "dumpster fire" LOL


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Posted By: charleycheval
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 10:24pm
Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

So may group 16 people!  I hope everyone posts their stories, I was the only one who posted in my group last round. :( 

I'm leaning towards not posting this round, as my story is a dumpster fire. LOL


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Posted By: amlewi08
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 10:56pm
Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

So may group 16 people!  I hope everyone posts their stories, I was the only one who posted in my group last round. :( 

I'm leaning towards not posting this round, as my story is a dumpster fire. LOL

Bahaha, I'm sure it's better than you're giving it credit for!

Also, super glad the wait is only like a month this time.


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Posted By: charleycheval
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 10:59pm
Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

So may group 16 people!  I hope everyone posts their stories, I was the only one who posted in my group last round. :( 

I'm leaning towards not posting this round, as my story is a dumpster fire. LOL

Bahaha, I'm sure it's better than you're giving it credit for!

Also, super glad the wait is only like a month this time.

I finally just submitted. We will see. Not feeling confident in this at all, but stranger things have happened! LOL


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Posted By: salgal80
Date Posted: 10 Nov 2019 at 11:09pm
Mine is right there in he fire with you! Sorta literally.

Originally posted by charleycheval charleycheval wrote:

Originally posted by amlewi08 amlewi08 wrote:

So may group 16 people!  I hope everyone posts their stories, I was the only one who posted in my group last round. :( 

I'm leaning towards not posting this round, as my story is a dumpster fire. LOL


Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 11 Nov 2019 at 11:28am
Any Group One writers?

Am I the only one?


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