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Topic: What Inspired Your Story This Round?
Posted By: patsy
Subject: What Inspired Your Story This Round?
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 10:58pm
 
I woke up with nary an idea in my poor little head until I went into my closet to get dressed.  I put on a Wicked T-Shirt, and thought:  OK.  Why not, Witches! 

What did you use for inspiration this round?  


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Posted By: Malhearst
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:09pm
A few things:

1) I researched drama, and the wikipedia article mentioned radio dramas.
2) It put me in mind of the game Oxenfree.
3) I have an old character, Alistair Madigan, inspiring one of my characters. He was easy to blend with Francis Abernathy from The Secret History.
4) The main conflict and character were inspired by Billy from Stranger Things (even before I saw the ending of Season 3).
5) There was also a bit of Bender from Breakfast Club in both him and the plot.
6) My father-in-law told me some stories of archetypical behaviours in the military, which was a big catalyst for me.


Posted By: Lexiconundrum
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:16pm
Malhearst - your story sounds really cool. And I love The Secret History! That was one of my favorite books for a long time. 

My setting was a flower show,  which got me thinking about a poem by Christina Rosetti called Goblin Market. Here's hoping the judges enjoy references to pre-Raphaelite poetry :)


Posted By: manifestlynot
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:18pm
Mine wasn’t very inspired this round. Romance, porch, tractor. Farm romance. Done. Any inspiration was probably from having Lonesome Dove planted in my subconscious.



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Posted By: TammyB
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:21pm
I had suspense, reception area, and peanut butter.
My inspiration came from the reception area. I had googled it, but it just talked about office space.
I thought, “wait a minute!” I thought Hotel Lobby. Then Hospital. Then Wedding Reception popped in my head. I was picturing the area where everyone is drinking and standing around. Cocktail Party!
The only crime I could think of at a wedding party was killing the bride or groom with an allergy to peanuts. 
So I went back to a cocktail party. At a museum, thinking theft of a treasure. A cocktail reception at the museum. Made logical sense to me. A beta reader said that would be a reception hall, not a reception area. So how did I throw that down the judges’ throats? “Champagne flowed freely throughout the reception area.”


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Posted By: Rainbowsockmonkey
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:22pm
I’d been doing research on Ancestry.com for my mother. When I got fantasy and courtroom as prompts, I immediately thought of colonial America.


Posted By: Malhearst
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:23pm
Lexi, likewise!

Goblin market, pre-Raphaelite, and poetry really got me tickled pink. If you want to do a swap, send me a PM! I'd love to read it.


Posted By: ChillyToez
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:24pm
My story was pretty much art imitating life with a fairy tale twist.

When I got divorced I moved to a spectacular little cabin in the middle of the woods. Unfortunately, there were no laundry hookups, so to the laundromat I went. Little did I know that laundromats were "hookup central" where cougars could smell the divorce on me...

Also, the thing at the end is super true, but I don't want to give it away.  Wink 


Posted By: TammyB
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:27pm
Originally posted by ChillyToez ChillyToez wrote:

My story was pretty much art imitating life with a fairy tale twist.

When I got divorced I moved to a spectacular little cabin in the middle of the woods. Unfortunately, there were no laundry hookups, so to the laundromat I went. Little did I know that laundromats were "hookup central" where cougars could smell the divorce on me...

Also, the thing at the end is super true, but I don't want to give it away.  Wink 
You all have been warned!
The Laundromat is definitely fodder for divorced people who need aluminum foil hats, so they can clean their clothes in peace!


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Posted By: Phobos
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:29pm
I got "mystery" as my genre, which hits close to home because my Uncle (actually, my 1st cousin once removed ... my mom's 1st cousin ...) is a published mystery and thriller writer.  Unfortunately, I haven't actually read any of his books, because, well, mystery is not really my thing.  

So ... my main character is at least a little bit inspired by my Uncle's ... synopses ...

I got "child's bedroom" and "a tropical fish", which also hits close to home because my daughter had a betta fish in her room and hilarity insued.  Like, one time, my wife and I went in there to find she had taken off the lid, scooped out most of the gravel, and put a beanie baby in the tank.  The betta was swimming around frantically like, "What the f------------???"  I made sure to include little snippets of that in my story.


Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:30pm
Lots of swearing Friday night as I drew a blank.

"OK mind, come up with SOMETHING."

Saturday a.m. I had a great idea for a first line! It does not seem promising for a story, but I have something. It does not involve my location or my object at all, but maybe if I sneak in queens and elves and magic and potions something will happen. Let me think about it for a few moments...

Saturday (all day) I am too busy to think about anything. Maybe the Queen will need to be rescued by the Bard. OK--how does that happen?

Sunday (through 4 pm) I am too busy to think about anything.

Sunday 4 pm I HAVE to write SOMETHING. Let me just free associate and write.

Sunday 6 pm OK, I have 1200 words. NOW WHAT?

Sunday 8:30 pm OK, some last-minute beta readers made some good suggestions. I'm under 1000 words. THIS IS GOOD ENOUGH. Submit.

Sunday 8:30 pm-9pm OK, I found another typo. Resubmit. (Do this a dozen times.)

Sunday 9:01 pm Literally find a misspelling in the first paragraph. Die one, die all merrily. It's done.


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Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:30pm
Ooh, fun topic. I got comedy for genre and started thinking about my favorites. My number one favorite is Frasier and the funniest episodes to me always involve a misunderstanding or mixup so I knew I wanted something like that. I also got caviar as my object so I thought about all the different ways I could have caviar play a role.

I actually wrote down three possible ideas:
1) some caviar is delivered to a penthouse apartment and the occupants mistake it for drugs, which they decide to “take” and then begin acting out in outlandish ways as they believe the “drugs” are taking affect lol.

2) 2 sisters pet sit for a Rich relative and they find a container of caviar and think it’s a charcoal face mask and decide to give themselves facials with it £.

I finally settled on idea number 3 (which may or may not be better than the above two) but I don’t want to divulge the story here - I want to everyone to come at it fresh when we post them 😊


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Posted By: ADave411
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:37pm
1. Researching FFC2018 comedies from writers who advanced to the next level
2. Watching the pilot episode of NBC's AP Bio and reflecting on the wonderful Jack Black in School of Rock (A self-taught course on "How to Be a Bad Teacher")


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Posted By: Lexiconundrum
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:41pm
Originally posted by Malhearst Malhearst wrote:

Lexi, likewise!

Goblin market, pre-Raphaelite, and poetry really got me tickled pink. If you want to do a swap, send me a PM! I'd love to read it.

I'll post it in the forum, when we get the email :) I hope you'll share yours as well - the idea of a Francis Abenthy-esque character has me intrigued!


Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:43pm
You’ve really got me curious to read your story now. What heat are you so I can find yours in the master list when they’re posted?

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Posted By: Zblugg
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:53pm
I was in bed when I got my prompts (AA, Marina, Spare tire). I immediately pictured some guy lying on his back, a flaming spare tire flying up above. Then I slept.

Next morning, the name Narco Joe popped in my brain, and that was that.

Also, it seems I hate Jens (I don't, really).


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Posted By: jennifer.quail
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 11:57pm
I got 'action adventure, a temporary office trailer, and broccoli.'

As I am prone to do, I went to my stable of characters and pulled out Aleksandra and Mattias (he only appears via text message) and sent her on another quest for priceless art. The hardest part was the broccoli. The setting came from my deciding to go randomly traipsing down alleys in Sweden's second-largest city during an hour of free time on a cruise excursion (all I found was a chocolate shop that sold ice creams and the city's oldest building), and I picked Belorussian gangsters because it sounds funnier than Russian. 


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Posted By: patsy
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 12:39am
Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

Ooh, fun topic. I got comedy for genre and started thinking about my favorites. My number one favorite is Frasier and the funniest episodes to me always involve a misunderstanding or mixup so I knew I wanted something like that. I also got caviar as my object so I thought about all the different ways I could have caviar play a role.

I actually wrote down three possible ideas:
1) some caviar is delivered to a penthouse apartment and the occupants mistake it for drugs, which they decide to “take” and then begin acting out in outlandish ways as they believe the “drugs” are taking affect lol.

2) 2 sisters pet sit for a Rich relative and they find a container of caviar and think it’s a charcoal face mask and decide to give themselves facials with it �£.

I finally settled on idea number 3 (which may or may not be better than the above two) but I don’t want to divulge the story here - I want to everyone to come at it fresh when we post them 😊
I love Frasier!  My favorite episode of all time is the one where Niles keeps seeing blood and passing out, lol.




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Posted By: Lookit There
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 12:44am
I was spinning my wheels and trying to come up with something. It wasn't until I googled the definition of "detoxification" that I got a spark: the process of removing toxic substances or qualities.

OR QUALITIES was all it took. What sort of "qualities" would be considered toxic? By whose standards? It still took me about 40 hours to come up with a first draft, but I knew where I wanted to go. 

And I didn't answer the questions... I've left it up to the reader to decide.


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Posted By: justmel
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 12:47am
Before the prompts dropped, my husband said if I got ghost story I should write about Gravity Hill, which is a real place we used to go to when we were teenagers.  Once I got my prompts, I forgot all about that conversation and had already started my draft when I remembered it, and lo and behold, it fit in well with what I already had, so in it went.  The rest of the story is also inspired by a real place, though I slightly altered the name and location.  This story came together almost too easily--the majority of my time this weekend was spent cutting and finessing, since the first draft was 1552 words long--so I'm kind of terrified it's crap.


Posted By: Mumser
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 12:53am
S&G The Sounds of Silence  Love that song.

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Posted By: S.L. Hill
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:02am
My prompts were rom-com / ice cream truck / a dart

I started by thinking about all the different things you can do in and around an ice cream truck. Obviously, you can work inside one or buy ice cream from one, but I based my story around the idea that you can also steal an ice cream truck.

I felt like I didn't know ANYTHING about rom-com, and I'm definitely not a very humorous writer normally, but I did have a set of characters I was familiar with and already really liked from a short story I wrote a while back so I threw them into this new setting and situation and wrote until I figured out where they wanted to go with the story.

The required location being an ice cream truck helped me establish a broader setting as well. Ice cream trucks are most prevalent on the streets in summer, and I decided to set the story up in the desert to heat things up a little. The contrast of hot climate/environment and cold location made for some fun moments to write about as well. 


Posted By: miwseshat
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:05am
I got held up in a tunnel on Friday and the car in front of me, some slope-y c-class Mercedes, was blasting his horn. When he got out to see why he couldn’t move, (there was an accident just north of the tunnel that had to be cleared) I saw he was dressed in a custom silk suit, fancy shoes, and had so much anger radiating all around him. 

He became the inspiration for my antagonist after I got my prompt. 
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Posted By: nixie
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:16am
Originally posted by justmel justmel wrote:

since the first draft was 1552 words long--so I'm kind of terrified it's crap.

I've read it. It's totally not crap


Posted By: Mr. Blonde
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:18am
What inspired my story (I'm guessing besides the parameters)? I love the themes of dystopian sci-fi and westerns, much more than the typical execution of those two styles. So, for most of my stories, I will integrate western or dystopian themes behind whatever the script is.

In this case (sci-fi, casino, paper shredder), my first inclination was a sort of intergalactic casino where aliens could apply for "citizenship", by putting up their family members up as collateral. He goes on a losing streak, losing his family to the casino in the process. I didn't like the way it played out (if you want to steal this, be my guest. I'm not doing anything with it).

New idea was to come up with somebody who has no hope. Somebody with lots of tragedy and nobody to disappoint. Tricky part was giving him something to live for: replacing his bad memories with good ones. The obvious, being a casino, is that he risks losing the precious few good memories he already has.

As I wrote, I wanted to have more words to work with, though, because I wanted to really bring out the darkness in the story. Unfortunately, it had to be cut due to time constraints. I don't want to spoil what it was, but it was a story running parallel to the main one.

Still, fun times. Looking forward to round 2.


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Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:20am
Originally posted by patsy patsy wrote:

Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

Ooh, fun topic. I got comedy for genre and started thinking about my favorites. My number one favorite is Frasier and the funniest episodes to me always involve a misunderstanding or mixup so I knew I wanted something like that. I also got caviar as my object so I thought about all the different ways I could have caviar play a role.

I actually wrote down three possible ideas:
1) some caviar is delivered to a penthouse apartment and the occupants mistake it for drugs, which they decide to “take” and then begin acting out in outlandish ways as they believe the “drugs” are taking affect lol.

2) 2 sisters pet sit for a Rich relative and they find a container of caviar and think it’s a charcoal face mask and decide to give themselves facials with it �£.

I finally settled on idea number 3 (which may or may not be better than the above two) but I don’t want to divulge the story here - I want to everyone to come at it fresh when we post them 😊
I love Frasier!  My favorite episode of all time is the one where Niles keeps seeing blood and passing out, lol.



Haha I know that episode - each of the Crane men have a Valentine’s Day segment. It’s so hard for me to pick a favorite but some that come to mind are the one where Niles carries a flour sack around as a child, the one where Martin pretends he’s gay and that Niles is his boyfriend, the one where Daphne pretends she’s married to Niles and they say Frasier is married to Maris and Roz plays Maris...Omg there are just so many! I have the whole series on DVD and watch it alllllllllll the time. Glad to find a fellow Frasier enthusiast 😊😊😊


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Posted By: nixie
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:22am
SciFi   A Canal   A Rubber Duck

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Posted By: Lookit There
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:25am
Originally posted by nixie nixie wrote:

SciFi   A Canal   A Rubber Duck

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Well, now, *that* rings a bell Wink


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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:31am
Originally posted by patsy patsy wrote:

Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

Ooh, fun topic. I got comedy for genre and started thinking about my favorites. My number one favorite is Frasier and the funniest episodes to me always involve a misunderstanding or mixup so I knew I wanted something like that. I also got caviar as my object so I thought about all the different ways I could have caviar play a role.

I actually wrote down three possible ideas:
1) some caviar is delivered to a penthouse apartment and the occupants mistake it for drugs, which they decide to “take” and then begin acting out in outlandish ways as they believe the “drugs” are taking affect lol.

2) 2 sisters pet sit for a Rich relative and they find a container of caviar and think it’s a charcoal face mask and decide to give themselves facials with it �£.

I finally settled on idea number 3 (which may or may not be better than the above two) but I don’t want to divulge the story here - I want to everyone to come at it fresh when we post them 😊
I love Frasier!  My favorite episode of all time is the one where Niles keeps seeing blood and passing out, lol.


That, and the radio show episode. I split a gut every time I watch it.


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Posted By: Chuzo
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:31am
Originally posted by ChillyToez ChillyToez wrote:

My story was pretty much art imitating life with a fairy tale twist.

When I got divorced I moved to a spectacular little cabin in the middle of the woods. Unfortunately, there were no laundry hookups, so to the laundromat I went. Little did I know that laundromats were "hookup central" where cougars could smell the divorce on me...

Also, the thing at the end is super true, but I don't want to give it away.  Wink 

I based mine on personal experiences in the laundromat too! 

The first apartment I rented when I moved to NZ didn't come with a washing machine, so the first weeks until I bought one involved some laundromat time. As it was boring as hell I used to read a lot in there, so this part of the story came to me easily. And reading the description of the genre, I read about talking animals so I put that on the mix, and I got myself a fairy tale from there. 


Posted By: NKurt
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:32am
I got my prompt on the day I was moving houses. Basically, between driving trailer-loads of stuff between houses, I recorded in-depth conversations with myself talking through the prompt and how different parts could blend together. That got me to the first draft, which I slept on. The next day, I made some big changes and was satisfied.

First timer for me. Fingers crossed it's enough :) 


Posted By: northernwriter
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:33am
Honestly? I have no idea!

Most of the time I just come up with something random. 

Then I brainstorm with my husband. He gives me great ideas which don't ring true for my narrative voice. I tell him what I'm thinking. He pokes holes in it and explains why it can't work, which makes me dig my heels in and clarify my idea - to him and myself. 

Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. 


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Posted By: nadroj93
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:35am
I had sci-fi/a school principal's office/birdcage.

The prompt specified a school principal, so I didn't try to think of any out-of-the-box interpretations of that. I knew I'd be working with a school.

Sci-fi needs some sort of a gimmick. What's the new tech, or how has society advanced beyond our norms? I was having trouble moving past the stereotypical images of a sort of dome-shaped birdcage (probably in the corner of some Victorian parlor), and that wasn't getting me anywhere.

So I stuck with the school, and asked myself "Why would a school need to keep birds?" And that got me down the path to find a sci-fi setting and a plot! 

It might have been fun to think of a birdcage that could only exist in sci-fi, but this was my first contest in a long time, and the shortest deadline I've ever had, so I focused with what I had. Might try to write that in the future!

Then again, might not; sci-fi was not a genre I was hoping for.


Posted By: EllaKStahr
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 2:23am
My genre was crime caper in a sewer so what really inspired me was having to fill out my student loan application for my senior year. I'm going to be poor forever Cry Then I thought, is there a better reason to turn to crime? Also, had sibling drama and sibling drama = pettiness and pettiness = sewer. Haha


Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 2:26am
Originally posted by stephenmatlock stephenmatlock wrote:

Originally posted by patsy patsy wrote:

Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

Ooh, fun topic. I got comedy for genre and started thinking about my favorites. My number one favorite is Frasier and the funniest episodes to me always involve a misunderstanding or mixup so I knew I wanted something like that. I also got caviar as my object so I thought about all the different ways I could have caviar play a role.

I actually wrote down three possible ideas:
1) some caviar is delivered to a penthouse apartment and the occupants mistake it for drugs, which they decide to “take” and then begin acting out in outlandish ways as they believe the “drugs” are taking affect lol.

2) 2 sisters pet sit for a Rich relative and they find a container of caviar and think it’s a charcoal face mask and decide to give themselves facials with it �£.

I finally settled on idea number 3 (which may or may not be better than the above two) but I don’t want to divulge the story here - I want to everyone to come at it fresh when we post them 😊
I love Frasier!  My favorite episode of all time is the one where Niles keeps seeing blood and passing out, lol.


That, and the radio show episode. I split a gut every time I watch it.

The one where they do the old murder mystery “Nightmare Inn”? Another great one for sure 😊


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Posted By: Vernacula
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 2:30am
Saying too much about it will give away my reveal, but I'd written two outlines (I never write outlines), one was very long, and I just knew it was time wasting because I didn't want to write either story I was outlining. Then a thought popped into my head: OMG, that's a firehouse! I could set a whole story in my location and write about something kind of magical for historical fiction. I even went first person, present. I have no idea if it actually works, but it made me happy to think about and write. I hope people get it and like it, but even if not it was a fun ride and I hate this genre. :-)

ETA: I hate writing this genre, though it's the one I most consume!


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Posted By: roccapia
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 2:34am
i just thought about my years living in Japan, and the story came pretty quick. In fact, I think it was the fastest I've ever finished a flash fiction piece. Which I suppose might come back to bite me in the butt.

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Posted By: oldmilkdud
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 2:45am
I'd actually just seen Cirque du Soleil in Las Vegas! Thank god, because I don't think I could've written a fairytale if I hadn't. It was some magical ish, I'll tell you what. 

Cheers to having religious experiences in Vegas!  LOL


Posted By: ziskandra
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 4:06am
I had suspense / a pottery studio / a shovel, and I've been listening to a lot of true crime podcasts lately... and that's basically all I can say about that! 


Posted By: SDWatts
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 5:51am
I had Action/Adventure - Temporary Office Trailer - Broccoli

About 12 years ago I helped a friend load up a U-Haul and leave her abusive ex while he was out of town. She had waited awhile for the opportunity. She had some pretty deep thoughts on what we sacrifice for the time being... for the Time Being. 

I took a more light hearted approach, but I explored what kind of sacrifices a Time Being might require and how they might differ from what we think we need to sacrifice. 


Posted By: kenshomo
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 7:36am
The Twilight Zone.

Having never written a mystery story in my life, I remembered that a friend told me old episodes of The Twilight Zone (we're both fans) represented the mystery genre's story development pretty well. When I was without an idea by Sunday morning, that line of thinking served me well. 

Or not. 

This is my first entry ever, so we'll see!

(Just to be clear: I wasn't thinking of any specific episode of TZ. Just the type of predicament, and the way it moves along until its turn at the end.)






Posted By: Tim G
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 7:50am
The prompts, pure and simple. Plus my compulsion to add a twist of some kind into as much of my work as possible.

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Posted By: GaleGirl
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 7:56am
I went looking for an image of an android online. All these sexy female android getups or Photoshopped images of mannequins made to look like android hookers popped up. Such a thing would surely be the object of sexual fantasy. Since the setting was honeymoon suite, I capitalized on those female android images.

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Posted By: NotMyBestWork
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 8:15am
I got:
 Ghost Story / Gymnasium/ Motion sensor light

With the whole gymnasium/ ghost vibe, my first thought actually went to Teen Wolf ( I binged watched it a few months ago) - so I ended up setting it in a high school gymnasium. This seemed like maybe too obvious an interpretation, so I am interested to see what others have done with this prompt.

Wanted to have a subversion, but am not really acquainted with ghost stories (as I tend to avoid true horror at all costs). I googled 'subverted ghost stories' and a thesis on a Lewis Carroll poem came up - social class satire via a ghost story. Though I ended up not trying to subvert the genre too much (who knows how much the judges will tolerate). But the thesis did go into actual elements of the genre which helped give me ideas.

I also added a bit of a double meaning to the ending, but I won't go into that as not to give it away.



Posted By: chrissie0707
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 8:19am
I wasn’t thrilled to pull Mystery as my genre, and wasn’t very inspired right off that bat. I initially wanted to rock a genre mash and do a Comedy/Mystery combo, but I also wanted to make sure I had a developed MC because in my experience, that’s super important for doing well in these comps. As I worked on my character, small nuggets of plotty mystery ideas began to build, and all of that comedic intent was sucked right out. What I ended up with checks off the required boxes for mystery (at least I’m hoping so) but is mainly character-driven. We’ll see how that goes!

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Posted By: justmel
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 8:52am
Originally posted by nixie nixie wrote:

Originally posted by justmel justmel wrote:

since the first draft was 1552 words long--so I'm kind of terrified it's crap.

I've read it. It's totally not crap
 
Aww, thanks, Nix.  From your fingers to the judges' eyes.


Posted By: EricM
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 9:12am
Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

Ooh, fun topic. I got comedy for genre and started thinking about my favorites. My number one favorite is Frasier and the funniest episodes to me always involve a misunderstanding or mixup so I knew I wanted something like that. I also got caviar as my object so I thought about all the different ways I could have caviar play a role.

I actually wrote down three possible ideas:
1) some caviar is delivered to a penthouse apartment and the occupants mistake it for drugs, which they decide to “take” and then begin acting out in outlandish ways as they believe the “drugs” are taking affect lol.

2) 2 sisters pet sit for a Rich relative and they find a container of caviar and think it’s a charcoal face mask and decide to give themselves facials with it �£.

I finally settled on idea number 3 (which may or may not be better than the above two) but I don’t want to divulge the story here - I want to everyone to come at it fresh when we post them 😊

Ah, you sound like a fellow 113er! Great to see another one around here! Look forward to reading your story!

And of course now that you say it, it dawns on me that a Frasier-style story could have been perfect for our prompt. But instead, I chose to write about...a housefly in a super-villain's top floor lair. Hmmm.


Posted By: ChristiLB
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 9:16am
Originally posted by EricM EricM wrote:

Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

Ooh, fun topic. I got comedy for genre and started thinking about my favorites. My number one favorite is Frasier and the funniest episodes to me always involve a misunderstanding or mixup so I knew I wanted something like that. I also got caviar as my object so I thought about all the different ways I could have caviar play a role.

I actually wrote down three possible ideas:
1) some caviar is delivered to a penthouse apartment and the occupants mistake it for drugs, which they decide to “take” and then begin acting out in outlandish ways as they believe the “drugs” are taking affect lol.

2) 2 sisters pet sit for a Rich relative and they find a container of caviar and think it’s a charcoal face mask and decide to give themselves facials with it �£.

I finally settled on idea number 3 (which may or may not be better than the above two) but I don’t want to divulge the story here - I want to everyone to come at it fresh when we post them 😊

Ah, you sound like a fellow 113er! Great to see another one around here! Look forward to reading your story!

And of course now that you say it, it dawns on me that a Frasier-style story could have been perfect for our prompt. But instead, I chose to write about...a housefly in a super-villain's top floor lair. Hmmm.

Hello heat mate!!! Sounds like you took the prompts in a whole different and fun direction. I look forward to reading yours as well!


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Posted By: salgal80
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 10:27am
Crime Caper/Sewer/Piggy Bank

Thought progression:
Eewwwew, sewer
Who goes down there?
Dumb people looking for flushed alligators 
Ewwwww, sewers
Research sewers
NYC sewers aren’t creative enough 
Let me start with the dumb main character
No one would go into a sewer alone
Eewwwww, sewers
What crime can take place in a sewer other than robbery or kidnapping because they’re obvious.
Oh crap, I’ve never written crime caper
Research crime caper
Decide to go dumb crime route 
Something valuable has to be in the sewers 
Eewwwww, sewers
Research things in sewer
Inspiration = a second urban legend NY White
Got it: the reason for two not-so-smart people to go down into a sewer that’s illegal
Too late to not use NYC sewers so screw it
Good lord, how will I use a piggy bank?
Worst case, it’s laying in the ground in the sewer.
OK, stop this and write 
Eewwwww, sewers


Posted By: MonsterFail
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 10:29am
My inspiration was the short little man yelling in the bagel shop.


Posted By: haole
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 10:32am
This time it was all just the prompts


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Posted By: MonsterFail
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 10:35am
Originally posted by ChillyToez ChillyToez wrote:

My story was pretty much art imitating life with a fairy tale twist.

When I got divorced I moved to a spectacular little cabin in the middle of the woods. Unfortunately, there were no laundry hookups, so to the laundromat I went. Little did I know that laundromats were "hookup central" where cougars could smell the divorce on me...

Also, the thing at the end is super true, but I don't want to give it away.  Wink 

This sounds amazing! Can't wait to read it


Posted By: BarbaraFL
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 12:20pm
The prompts put a very clear weird image in my head immediately, though the circumstances changed a bit as I was figuring it out. That was helpful though I still waited until the next day to start writing it! Arrgghh. Wish I'd start it right away.


Posted By: ludakitty
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 12:24pm
A few weeks ago, I was traveling in London with my kids. We were walking down a busy street in Shoreditch when we passed this scruffy-looking dude sitting on a bulkhead talking on his phone. I caught his end of the convo as we walked by (very slowly, as my 3yo was stopping to examine every crack in the pavement, LOL).

"She's twenty-six, mum of two. But, you know...fit. What else could you ask for?" [pause] "And did I mention, she's SOBER?" 

And I thought to myself, what position could this dude "selling" this woman for? It was just kind of weird and almost a little funny and it stuck in my brain. Are most of the candidates for this job, whatever it is, NOT sober?

So that was the original opening line of this story (dystopian sci fi in which women are "matched" away). It got changed a ton by the final, of course. My early beta readers were like, "what's the deal with the sober thing?" Obviously that got nixed in the end!


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Posted By: patsy
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 12:37pm
Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

Originally posted by patsy patsy wrote:

Originally posted by ChristiLB ChristiLB wrote:

Ooh, fun topic. I got comedy for genre and started thinking about my favorites. My number one favorite is Frasier and the funniest episodes to me always involve a misunderstanding or mixup so I knew I wanted something like that. I also got caviar as my object so I thought about all the different ways I could have caviar play a role.

I actually wrote down three possible ideas:
1) some caviar is delivered to a penthouse apartment and the occupants mistake it for drugs, which they decide to “take” and then begin acting out in outlandish ways as they believe the “drugs” are taking affect lol.

2) 2 sisters pet sit for a Rich relative and they find a container of caviar and think it’s a charcoal face mask and decide to give themselves facials with it �£.

I finally settled on idea number 3 (which may or may not be better than the above two) but I don’t want to divulge the story here - I want to everyone to come at it fresh when we post them 😊
I love Frasier!  My favorite episode of all time is the one where Niles keeps seeing blood and passing out, lol.



Haha I know that episode - each of the Crane men have a Valentine’s Day segment. It’s so hard for me to pick a favorite but some that come to mind are the one where Niles carries a flour sack around as a child, the one where Martin pretends he’s gay and that Niles is his boyfriend, the one where Daphne pretends she’s married to Niles and they say Frasier is married to Maris and Roz plays Maris...Omg there are just so many! I have the whole series on DVD and watch it alllllllllll the time. Glad to find a fellow Frasier enthusiast 😊😊😊

That show was golden.  I also love the murder mystery game one where the guy actually dies!  And the one where they try to get rid of the dead whale and someone thinks they murdered someone, lol.  


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Posted By: ludakitty
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 12:39pm
Originally posted by SDWatts SDWatts wrote:

I had Action/Adventure - Temporary Office Trailer - Broccoli

About 12 years ago I helped a friend load up a U-Haul and leave her abusive ex while he was out of town. She had waited awhile for the opportunity. She had some pretty deep thoughts on what we sacrifice for the time being... for the Time Being. 

I took a more light hearted approach, but I explored what kind of sacrifices a Time Being might require and how they might differ from what we think we need to sacrifice. 

How clever! I'm intrigued to read this, I hope you'll share it!


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Posted By: Tess2019
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:06pm
I received thriller/school bus/milkshake.
Ugh!
I had to do some twisting but settled on a bully (who entices his mark with a milkshake) to the remains of a school bus accident in a game of truth or dare. I used an urban legend out of Salt Lake City about a bus that got stuck on railroad tracks. I think it was 27 out of 54 died. The milkshake was a “out in left field prompt for me.


Posted By: LyndaD
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:19pm
I had spy/hospital cafeteria/bowling ball (group 99, where are you?)

My son is a chef who makes cheesecake that, if mass-produced, could bring world peace to the planet. He used to manage a local restaurant, and when he left, they tried to get him to divulge his cheesecake recipe. He refused, and since then the quality of food in the restaurant has deteriorated tremendously.
Also, after eating one of his cheesecakes, a student told me, "Pie is just pie. Cheesecake is heaven."


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Posted By: jennifer.quail
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:44pm
Originally posted by SDWatts SDWatts wrote:

I had Action/Adventure - Temporary Office Trailer - Broccoli

About 12 years ago I helped a friend load up a U-Haul and leave her abusive ex while he was out of town. She had waited awhile for the opportunity. She had some pretty deep thoughts on what we sacrifice for the time being... for the Time Being. 

I took a more light hearted approach, but I explored what kind of sacrifices a Time Being might require and how they might differ from what we think we need to sacrifice. 

Oh good, another Gr 40 person, Eggcorn and I aren't alone! (Worst round of any of these contests was round 1 of the last SS--I was the only one in my group who posted. So depressing.) 

Action-adventure kind of has to be light-hearted, or it winds up being suspense or thriller. (Indiana Jones wouldn't be half as good if Indy was obviously taking things TOO seriously.)


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Posted By: thebrokegamer
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 1:51pm
So glad you asked!

I give all inspiration credit to Paul Shapera, a super cool underground composer. He has a three-album series called New Albion which is about a woman who discovers a way to bring back the dead and put them in voodoo-like dolls, and the repercussions it means for her world over the next 100 years. The albums themselves each tackle a new era through different musical styles; the first album is 1890s - 1930s steampunk, the second is 1940s dieselpunk, and the third is 1950s-90s atompunk. https://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/the-dolls-of-new-albion-a-steampunk-opera" rel="nofollow - Here's his work, if you're interested.

Anyway, when I drew Crime Caper, I asked myself why someone would commit a crime besides "get rich quick". There's a song off his second album, "The Thief", which gave me the perfect answer: a woman who helps screwed-over divorced women take back what's theirs. Highly recommend listening https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QXg0hiaP0VU" rel="nofollow - here .

So immediately I had my MC (the thief), the motive (the divorcee), the bad guy (the ex-husband), and a jazzy noir-esque vibe. From there, everything fell into place. Can't wait to share it soon!


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Posted By: BlackGate
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 2:11pm
The classic short ghost story, https://commapress.co.uk/resources/online-short-stories/the-signalman-charles-dickens" rel="nofollow - The Signalman , by Charles Dickens.

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Posted By: Dvmason
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 3:57pm
Okay- THIS is a great synopsis. Can't wait to read it! What group are you? Sincerely, a group 88-er

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Posted By: skifter22
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 5:07pm
So... Romance, Conference Room, Sea Urchin

Romance is NOT my "comfort genre"... so when I got it My first thought was... 'this is a disaster'... which led to my setting (A conference Room) being destroyed by an earthquake.

2187 words later...

The Sea Urchin was originally going to be served as food, but my wife convinced me I was over-thinking it and instead it went into an aquarium in the conference room (swanky office building...). She was right; of course, and it simplified the plot by a ton!

The rest of it (as cheesy as it sounds) was very much inspired by my feelings for my wife; who asked me the same question when she looked at my first draft. When I answered, she promptly replied, "What does a young and fit American business executive falling in love with a black-haired Japanese woman have to do with a middle-aged engineer and his blue-eyed, blonde-haired wife?!"

To which I responded, "ya gotta read the story to understand the allegory!"LOLLOL

...aaaaaand queue the rim-shot.


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Posted By: Ghislainium
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 5:18pm
yeah so I'm group 10 and got suspense, oil rig and a toy soldier. first thoughts were WTF seriously? but actually the toy soldier was the key to the story.

I wrote the last paragraph first because that's the key to the whole thing then tried to get to the end with words.


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Posted By: Maddoris
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 9:47pm
When I got laundromat, I immediately thought of this place in my hometown called the Wash N' Slosh.  It was half laundromat and half bar, and 25 years ago (when I was a university student) I spent a lot of time there.  So my story grew out of that memory.

When I started researching actual names of fairy tale characters, I found the following quote, which gave my character a name and some of her backstory.
According to Marelle, the girl's real name is Blanchette. She becomes known as ILittle Goldenhood because of the hooded cloak the color of gold and fire that her grandmother gave her. Blanchette's grandmother is so old that she does not know how old she is. She is also rumored to be a witch. She tells Blanchette that her golden cloak is made of a ray of sunshine. Blanchette's cloak is rumored to have magical powers."

And then I watched a half dozen episodes of Rocky & Bullwinkle's Fractured Fairy Tales Wink





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Posted By: yubsie
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 9:57pm
I got horror, a surprise birthday party and a loudspeaker. I've never written horror before so I looked over the genre description and saw Frankenstein listed. I then remembered I'm angry at Victor Frankenstein and from there the surprise birthday party did the rest.


Posted By: TammyB
Date Posted: 16 Jul 2019 at 11:29pm
Originally posted by salgal80 salgal80 wrote:

Crime Caper/Sewer/Piggy Bank

Thought progression:
Eewwwew, sewer
Who goes down there?
Dumb people looking for flushed alligators 
Ewwwww, sewers
Research sewers
NYC sewers aren’t creative enough 
Let me start with the dumb main character
No one would go into a sewer alone
Eewwwww, sewers
What crime can take place in a sewer other than robbery or kidnapping because they’re obvious.
Oh crap, I’ve never written crime caper
Research crime caper
Decide to go dumb crime route 
Something valuable has to be in the sewers 
Eewwwww, sewers
Research things in sewer
Inspiration = a second urban legend NY White
Got it: the reason for two not-so-smart people to go down into a sewer that’s illegal
Too late to not use NYC sewers so screw it
Good lord, how will I use a piggy bank?
Worst case, it’s laying in the ground in the sewer.
OK, stop this and write 
Eewwwww, sewers
The prompt made me think of Las Vegas. They had a story several years back talking about the homeless who lived in the sewers of LV. 


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Posted By: anotherguitarist101
Date Posted: 17 Jul 2019 at 12:58am
I was given "historical fiction," "a coat hanger" and "a fish market."

It immediately made me think of the Jack the Ripper killings, and the theory some people have that "Jack" may have in fact been a midwife due to the knowledge of women's reproductive anatomy. A secondary theory is that the mutilations may have been to hide the fact that the deaths were actually from failed abortions, as many midwives moonlighted as abortionists back then when it was highly illegal.

Mary Jane Kelly, one of the victims, had a boyfriend who worked at Billingsgate fish markets, which was the largest one in London at the time.

My piece kind of came together based on that.

Also, when will we be able to post our stories for other people to review?


Posted By: Lexiconundrum
Date Posted: 17 Jul 2019 at 1:05am
Originally posted by anotherguitarist101 anotherguitarist101 wrote:

I was given "historical fiction," "a coat hanger" and "a fish market."

It immediately made me think of the Jack the Ripper killings, and the theory some people have that "Jack" may have in fact been a midwife due to the knowledge of women's reproductive anatomy. A secondary theory is that the mutilations may have been to hide the fact that the deaths were actually from failed abortions, as many midwives moonlighted as abortionists back then when it was highly illegal.

Mary Jane Kelly, one of the victims, had a boyfriend who worked at Billingsgate fish markets, which was the largest one in London at the time.

My piece kind of came together based on that.

Also, when will we be able to post our stories for other people to review?

Brilliant! I love reading historical fiction about jack the ripper.

Also, soon. Probably tomorrow. 



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