Challenge 1 Titles and Synopses
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Topic: Challenge 1 Titles and Synopses
Posted By: steph9289
Subject: Challenge 1 Titles and Synopses
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 12:56am
Starting this early because I am ready for BED! Haha. List your group, title, and synopsis below!
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Posted By: steph9289
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 12:59am
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Group 3: Sci-Fi / A camping site / A sewing machine
Sew Out of Time Can a teenage boy mend the time-meddling mistakes of his peers before it's too late?
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Posted By: Mr. Blonde
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 12:59am
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Group 111: Sci-Fi, Casino, Paper Shredder.
Title: I Remember Tomorrow.
Synopsis: A suicidal gambler with a tragic history tries to gamble for good memories, but finds that no matter how bad things are, they can always get worse.
Good luck to everyone who entered. For my first time doing this one, this was really fun. =)
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Posted By: spicklerbalt
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:01am
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Group 116: Fairy tale/A family reunion/A fireplace
The Servant and Two Masters
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Posted By: TrishArrowsmith
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:01am
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Group 121:Genre: Thriller Location: An Underpass Object: A Suitcase
Night
of the Cobra Johnny is a bachelor,
a hit with the ladies, and considers himself lucky in life. Tonight, his luck
will run out.
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Posted By: BeckyG515
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:03am
Group 110: Political Satire / All you can eat restaurant / a fire hose
America’s Least Racist Restaurant
A New York businessman is bringing the old American buffet back into vogue with a new fancy twist, inspired by our lady president. His newest hire will be key in making The Greatest American Buffet a welcome place for all Americans.
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Posted By: reiale
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:03am
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Group 106: Sci-fi, A Beauty Pageant, Goggles
Eye of the BeholderOnce a year, society’s wealthy and elite gather for a pageant showcasing the latest in cosmetic augmentation. Physician Aleksandar is delighted to present his surgical masterpiece, a model named Topaz.
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Posted By: piedraven
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:03am
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Group 30: Drama/an operating room/ravioli
Sea Star A story about the sea, the stars and those who are curious about the deep.
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Posted By: astridmarx
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:04am
Group 108: Ghost story / music festival / rubber glovesTitle: Welcome to Paradise
Synopsis: The Paradise Music Festival: Where the drinks are free and the music is haunting
Harder than I thought!
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Posted By: spicklerbalt
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:04am
BeckyG515 wrote:
Group 110: Political Satire / All you can eat restaurant / a fire hose
America’s Least Racist Restaurant
A New York businessman is bringing the old American buffet back into vogue with a new fancy twist, inspired by our lady president. His newest hire will be key in making The Greatest American Buffet a welcome place for all Americans.
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I can’t wait to read this.
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Posted By: hanalyst
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:04am
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Group 27: Historical Fiction / Fire Station / Mosquito Net
Fall of the Angels
In the wake of a Catholic school fire, a reporter finds the truth reduced to ash.
My brain really hurts after cramming so much research, but I found out my mom's friend's brother died in this fire--AFTER I chose to write about it. 
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Posted By: Steve I
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:05am
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Group 26: A Crime Caper - An auto-parts store - a pug
Heat Wanda knows that champions are born, not made, and she will do whatever it takes to achieve her goals.
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Posted By: td333777
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:06am
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Group 94: Ghost story/car rental center/mousetrap
Upgrade
"The customer is always right" has limits.
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Posted By: lisafox10800
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:07am
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111: Sci-Fi / Casino / Paper Shredder
The Odds Are Even As they turn eighteen, half of
humanity’s lowest-caste females will be subject to forced sterilization, the
others offered a limited window to pursue motherhood. Chance will determine their fate –
will the odds be in Allie’s favor?
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Posted By: bchabek
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:07am
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Group 116: Fairy tale/A family reunion/A fireplace “For the Wealth of Family” A man forgets that asking a witch for help with money can come at a price too steep to pay.
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Posted By: BeckyG515
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:07am
Posted By: Lookit There
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:08am
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Group 105: Suspense, A detoxification center, A blackboard
Graduation
Welcome to Graduation Day at The Institute. No cake or party hats, just armed guards and paranoia.
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Posted By: lisafox10800
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:08am
Mr. Blonde wrote:
Group 111: Sci-Fi, Casino, Paper Shredder.
Title: I Remember Tomorrow.
Synopsis: A suicidal gambler with a tragic history tries to gamble for good memories, but finds that no matter how bad things are, they can always get worse.
Good luck to everyone who entered. For my first time doing this one, this was really fun. =)
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Heatmate! This sounds awesome. Hope you post to the forum when we get the all-clear. 
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Posted By: jpronovost523
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:09am
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93- Thriller, Hotel, Calculator
Coordinates
An ICE agent catches up with a sex trafficker- if only she had brought backup.
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Posted By: Viktrune
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:10am
Group 9: Suspense/Morgue/A Remote Control
Title: The Caldwell Dragon
Synopsis: A young man goes searching for clues to his Aunt’s mysterious death, and finds himself at the discovery that the tales he’d been told as a child were true.
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:10am
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All the Years Like Yesterdays Departed Fantasy | Railroad Dining Car | Toy Giraffe
Synopsis: The Queen of Clouds is wearied by life and by grief. Her loyal bard will give her surcease from her pains, if she but lets him minister.
First Line: On Midsummer Day my queen was taken to live in blessed harmony with the ancestors...
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Posted By: lisafox10800
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:10am
Lookit There wrote:
Group 105: Suspense, A detoxification center, A blackboard
Graduation
Welcome to Graduation Day at The Institute. No cake or party hats, just armed guards and paranoia. |
Missed you this time in beta! Can't wait to read!
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Posted By: NYCNewbie
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:10am
Group 26 Crime Caper / An auto parts store / A pug
The Things We Do for Love    In an attempt to save both his failing business and his marriage, an auto parts store owner takes drastic action. However, is it one step too far?
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Posted By: Noel Alcoba
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:10am
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Group 18 Mystery / A dog show / A stethoscope
ROUND UP THE USUAL SUS-PETS
A retired police dog sniffs his way through the Westminster Dog Show to track down an old friend. He discovers that slobbering after the Best in Show award is a bone of contention that could land someone in the doghouse.
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Posted By: Mr. Blonde
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:11am
lisafox10800 wrote:
Mr. Blonde wrote:
Group 111: Sci-Fi, Casino, Paper Shredder.
Title: I Remember Tomorrow.
Synopsis: A suicidal gambler with a tragic history tries to gamble for good memories, but finds that no matter how bad things are, they can always get worse.
Good luck to everyone who entered. For my first time doing this one, this was really fun. =)
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Heatmate! This sounds awesome. Hope you post to the forum when we get the all-clear.  |
Looks like we'll have to swap. My money's (see what I did there?) on you to come out on top of me here. =)
EDIT: That said, I really lamented not having another 1,000 words. This was so much darker in the original version.
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Posted By: sinister
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:12am
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Thriller, mask, bridge
A Manifestation
Synopsis: A man leaves a protest. Darkness follows.
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Posted By: jeanbrown
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:12am
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46 -Fantasy, A market, A rope swing The
Witching Hour
Synopsis:
When her daughter is put under a spell, a mother seeks out a pirate's treasure
to break the curse.
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Posted By: Lookit There
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:12am
lisafox10800 wrote:
Lookit There wrote:
Group 105: Suspense, A detoxification center, A blackboard
Graduation
Welcome to Graduation Day at The Institute. No cake or party hats, just armed guards and paranoia. |
Missed you this time in beta! Can't wait to read! |
About ten minutes after I submitted, I thought, "Wait, I never sent this to Lisa." We'll beta swap next round, promise!
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Posted By: Talia
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:12am
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Group 110 Prompts: Political Satire, an all-you-can-eat restaurant, and a fire hose.
Title: Girl on Fire: A Story from the Pro-Life Generation Brief Synopsis: The youngest of fourteen children catches fire while her family is eating lunch and pocketing dinner rolls at an all-you-can-eat restaurant. After the fire goes out, it takes more than just a Mamma to take care of all her children.
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Posted By: miwseshat
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:13am
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Group 87 - Thriller, Bridge, Mask
Nyla
A woman risks injury and death to get needed information to her colleagues.
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Posted By: Splinker
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:14am
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Group 25 Scifi airport control
Relation Chips
Tim has been alone all its life, but now the lonely air traffic control tower finally has a chance at love.
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Posted By: manifestlynot
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:14am
BeckyG515 wrote:
Group 110: Political Satire / All you can eat restaurant / a fire hose
America’s Least Racist Restaurant
A New York businessman is bringing the old American buffet back into vogue with a new fancy twist, inspired by our lady president. His newest hire will be key in making The Greatest American Buffet a welcome place for all Americans.
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Love it!!
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Posted By: sinister
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:14am
miwseshat wrote:
Group 87 - Thriller, Bridge, Mask
Nyla
A woman risks injury and death to get needed information to her colleagues.
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Hello heat-mate! Looking forward to reading yours. :)
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Posted By: Sammayne
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:15am
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Group 7 Romantic Comedy/ A bistro/ A pump
RCFLSMEP
Joseph is sitting in an Italian Bistro, Joseph is in love with a waitress named Stephanie. In fifteen minutes, Joseph will be dead.
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Posted By: lisafox10800
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:15am
Mr. Blonde wrote:
lisafox10800 wrote:
Mr. Blonde wrote:
Group 111: Sci-Fi, Casino, Paper Shredder.
Title: I Remember Tomorrow.
Synopsis: A suicidal gambler with a tragic history tries to gamble for good memories, but finds that no matter how bad things are, they can always get worse.
Good luck to everyone who entered. For my first time doing this one, this was really fun. =)
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Heatmate! This sounds awesome. Hope you post to the forum when we get the all-clear.  |
Looks like we'll have to swap. My money's (see what I did there?) on you to come out on top of me here. =)
EDIT: That said, I really lamented not having another 1,000 words. This was so much darker in the original version.
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1000 word Sci-Fi is tough, for sure. Love your title and logline. Will look for you once we get the ok to post!
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Posted By: Vernacula
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:15am
stephenmatlock wrote:
All the Years Like Yesterdays Departed Fantasy | Railroad Dining Car | Toy Giraffe
Synopsis: The Queen of Clouds is wearied by life and by grief. Her loyal bard will give her surcease from her pains, if she but lets him minister.
First Line: On Midsummer Day my queen was taken to live in blessed harmony with the ancestors...
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This sounds FANTASTIC. You are a master!
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Posted By: rachelm
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:15am
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An Extremely Ordinary Night at the Opera Fantasy, an auditorium, a lollipop
Captain Smith, a by-the-book soldier, and Herrick, an eccentric mage, must work together to guard the Crown Prince during a night at the opera. They’ll need both muscle and magic to do it without making a scene of their own.
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Posted By: jdadams1
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:16am
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Group: 82 / Genre: Crime Caper / Location: A limousine / Object: A sandbag
Even Bad Guys Have Good Days in Excelsior City
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superhero-gone-wrong battles sidekicks, snakes, and sandbags when he attempts
to kidnap America’s Sweetest Grandma.
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Posted By: Vernacula
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:17am
sinister wrote:
Thriller, mask, bridge
A Manifestation
Synopsis: A man leaves a protest. Darkness follows.
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Eek! I'm scared already!
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Posted By: Lexiconundrum
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:17am
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Group 88 Fantasy/a flower show/ a tricycle
The Fairyland Flower Show When Lizzie's twin sister falls into a coma after sampling the Goblin King's fruit, it's up to Lizzie to find hope for her whole family.
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Posted By: KLNorman
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:17am
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107: rom com/ house boat/ user’s manual
Love and Manual Toilets Synopsis: Best friends and roommates, Hillary and Kara, go for a weekend getaway on a houseboat where they meet a charming and eligible liveaboard, Jason.
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Posted By: northernwriter
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:17am
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Group 4: Spy, spa, licorice
Last But Not Leashed
Retired
canine operative Max has set up a slick spy operation. But when he has a ruff
day, will he end up barking up the wrong tree or will he flea to live the pug
life?
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Posted By: Noel Alcoba
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:18am
jdadams1 wrote:
Group: 82 / Genre: Crime Caper / Location: A limousine / Object: A sandbag
Even Bad Guys Have Good Days in Excelsior City
A
superhero-gone-wrong battles sidekicks, snakes, and sandbags when he attempts
to kidnap America’s Sweetest Grandma.
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Loved this one. All y'all will too!
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Posted By: manifestlynot
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:18am
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Group 28 - Romance / A porch / A tractor
Treasure Valley
Shirley and Jerry fell in love against the backdrop of idyllic Idaho farmland. Can their love withstand fifty years apart?
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Posted By: NYCNewbie
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:18am
lisafox10800 wrote:
The Odds Are Even As they turn eighteen, half of humanity’s lowest-caste females will be subject to forced sterilization, the others offered a limited window to pursue motherhood. Chance will determine their fate – will the odds be in Allie’s favor?
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Posted By: emilymroth
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:19am
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Group 108: Ghost story/a music festival/rubber gloves
Holding Tenderly to What Remains Two years ago, Riley’s friend Cam died in a freak accident at a local music festival – before Riley could admit her true feelings for him. Will a visit to the festival bring Riley the closure she won’t admit she’s seeking?
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Posted By: Noel Alcoba
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:19am
northernwriter wrote:
Group 4: Spy, spa, licorice
Last But Not Leashed
Retired
canine operative Max has set up a slick spy operation. But when he has a ruff
day, will he end up barking up the wrong tree or will he flea to live the pug
life?
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Love it! Used a bunch of dog-puns in mine too! SO FUN!
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Posted By: manifestlynot
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:20am
northernwriter wrote:
Group 4: Spy, spa, licorice
Last But Not Leashed
Retired
canine operative Max has set up a slick spy operation. But when he has a ruff
day, will he end up barking up the wrong tree or will he flea to live the pug
life?
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Can't wait to read this one if the puns are any indication!!
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Posted By: northernwriter
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:21am
Noel Alcoba wrote:
Group 18Mystery / A dog show / A stethoscope
ROUND UP THE USUAL SUS-PETS
A retired police dog sniffs his way through the Westminster Dog Show to track down an old friend. He discovers that slobbering after the Best in Show award is a bone of contention that could land someone in the doghouse.
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I was just thinking ours sound similar, but you actually were assigned a dog show! I just included dogs in mine. Can't wait to read it. I'm glad you ended up signing up this round!
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:21am
Vernacula wrote:
stephenmatlock wrote:
All the Years Like Yesterdays Departed Fantasy | Railroad Dining Car | Toy Giraffe
Synopsis: The Queen of Clouds is wearied by life and by grief. Her loyal bard will give her surcease from her pains, if she but lets him minister.
First Line: On Midsummer Day my queen was taken to live in blessed harmony with the ancestors...
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This sounds FANTASTIC. You are a master!
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I wrote the first line Friday.
I wrote the other 950 words today starting at tea time.
It went a direction I didn't intend but the queen and the bard told the story.
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Posted By: Talia
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:22am
Posted By: NLG Potter
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:22am
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First time in this comp, hey hi hello
Group 92: Historical Fiction/a bunkhouse/a razorOne, The Other,
Neither, Either
In the late 1800s, Amelia James Walker prepares
for her wedding in the only way that matters: giving herself a brand new
haircut.
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Posted By: Vernacula
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:22am
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[This SUCKED. Holy cannoli.]
HistFic / Fire Station / Mosquito Net [Bless everyone in this group]
Fire Station No. 1
A man in a very special firehouse reflects on a life
lived well.
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Posted By: northernwriter
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:22am
manifestlynot wrote:
Group 28 - Romance / A porch / A tractor
Treasure Valley
Shirley and Jerry fell in love against the backdrop of idyllic Idaho farmland. Can their love withstand fifty years apart?
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We missed reading for each other this round! I can't wait to see what you came up with!
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:23am
northernwriter wrote:
Group 4: Spy, spa, licorice
Last But Not Leashed
Retired
canine operative Max has set up a slick spy operation. But when he has a ruff
day, will he end up barking up the wrong tree or will he flea to live the pug
life?
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Just that title alone! I can't wait, and I'm Sirius!
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Posted By: Steve I
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:23am
Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:24am
Vernacula wrote:
[This SUCKED. Holy cannoli.]
HistFic / Fire Station / Mosquito Net [Bless everyone in this group]
Fire Station No. 1
A man in a very special firehouse reflects on a life
lived well. |
I'm interested in reading it because you always take the story in an unexpected direction.
Not just a firehouse, but a very special firehouse.
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Posted By: jdadams1
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:24am
northernwriter wrote:
Group 4: Spy, spa, licorice
Last But Not Leashed
Retired
canine operative Max has set up a slick spy operation. But when he has a ruff
day, will he end up barking up the wrong tree or will he flea to live the pug
life?
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OOOOH! Excellent title!
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Posted By: AndrewShootsScores
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:25am
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Group 42: Mystery / A surveillance vehicle / A helmet
The Summer Camp Crux
When Tina's over-scheduled life reaches a tipping point, she unwinds by spying on the occupants of a quiet street. But when things come to a boil, was she paying close enough attention?
(Got some great beta feedback... which prompted me to re-write a chunk of the story... with less than two hours till the deadline. Submitted with seconds to spare.)
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Posted By: jdadams1
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:25am
Noel Alcoba wrote:
jdadams1 wrote:
Group: 82 / Genre: Crime Caper / Location: A limousine / Object: A sandbag
Even Bad Guys Have Good Days in Excelsior City
A
superhero-gone-wrong battles sidekicks, snakes, and sandbags when he attempts
to kidnap America’s Sweetest Grandma.
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Loved this one. All y'all will too! |
Thank you!
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Posted By: NYCgirl
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:25am
118 Horror/The wreckage of a plane crash/X-ray machine
Don’t Scream
A woman tries to keep her calm after her plane gets downed.
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Posted By: Vernacula
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:26am
stephenmatlock wrote:
Vernacula wrote:
stephenmatlock wrote:
All the Years Like Yesterdays Departed Fantasy | Railroad Dining Car | Toy Giraffe
Synopsis: The Queen of Clouds is wearied by life and by grief. Her loyal bard will give her surcease from her pains, if she but lets him minister.
First Line: On Midsummer Day my queen was taken to live in blessed harmony with the ancestors...
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This sounds FANTASTIC. You are a master!
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I wrote the first line Friday.
I wrote the other 950 words today starting at tea time.
It went a direction I didn't intend but the queen and the bard told the story.
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 I can't wait to read it all the same! And I so relate.
Once again, I started mine about six hours ago...because I like ulcers.
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:26am
Sammayne wrote:
Group 7
Romantic Comedy/ A bistro/ A pump
RCFLSMEP
Joseph is sitting in an Italian Bistro, Joseph is in love with a waitress named Stephanie. In fifteen minutes, Joseph will be dead.
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Gotta say, a dark romantic comedy has my interest.
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Posted By: Sengarden
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:26am
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Group # 54: Crime Caper / Library / A Sprinkler
Fate Will Unwind On a quest to win glory before death, a prodigious thief finds herself pinned against the ultimate obstacle - a betrayal of honor. What hope yet lies within this shadowed den when there are no words left unspoken and all but wit has run dry?
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Posted By: jdadams1
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:27am
Noel Alcoba wrote:
Group 18Mystery / A dog show / A stethoscope
ROUND UP THE USUAL SUS-PETS
A retired police dog sniffs his way through the Westminster Dog Show to track down an old friend. He discovers that slobbering after the Best in Show award is a bone of contention that could land someone in the doghouse.
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Love the puns! Ready to read this one!
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:27am
NYCNewbie wrote:
Group 26 Crime Caper / An auto parts store / A pug
The Things We Do for Love In an attempt to save both his failing business and his marriage, an auto parts store owner takes drastic action. However, is it one step too far?
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Can't wait to see what you did with an automobile pug as the object. Not a lot of people write about those, but they hold the transmission together.
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Just kidding. They're a dog, of course. :)
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Posted By: Vernacula
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:28am
stephenmatlock wrote:
Vernacula wrote:
[This SUCKED. Holy cannoli.]
HistFic / Fire Station / Mosquito Net [Bless everyone in this group]
Fire Station No. 1
A man in a very special firehouse reflects on a life
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I'm interested in reading it because you always take the story in an unexpected direction.
Not just a firehouse, but a very special firehouse.
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Oh, I really hope you like it. I think it has a whimsy you might enjoy. I hope so, at least.
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Posted By: Lookit There
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:28am
Sammayne wrote:
Group 7Romantic Comedy/ A bistro/ A pump
RCFLSMEP
Joseph is sitting in an Italian Bistro, Joseph is in love with a waitress named Stephanie. In fifteen minutes, Joseph will be dead. |
I'm so there!
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Posted By: aqma
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:28am
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Group 13: Romantic Comedy / A tourist info center / A slice of pizza
The Detour
When a small-town visitor center and gas station is overrun with tired, hungry crowds, can a fateful late-night snack become the catalyst for a budding romance?
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:29am
lisafox10800 wrote:
111: Sci-Fi / Casino / Paper Shredder
The Odds Are Even
As they turn eighteen, half of humanity’s lowest-caste females will be subject to forced sterilization, the others offered a limited window to pursue motherhood. Chance will determine their fate – will the odds be in Allie’s favor?
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This sounds wonderfully dark.
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Posted By: Sammayne
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:29am
Posted By: DocI
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:29am
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Group 70: Comedy / a steakhouse / liquid soap
No Soap Radio Mary
is trapped on a terrible date, but she’s got a plan for how to
escape. Once she can defeat an empty soap dispenser, that is.
(first time in this contest. tons of fun! thanks to everyone who helped beta read for me.)
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Posted By: Sammayne
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:30am
stephenmatlock wrote:
Sammayne wrote:
Group 7
Romantic Comedy/ A bistro/ A pump
RCFLSMEP
Joseph is sitting in an Italian Bistro, Joseph is in love with a waitress named Stephanie. In fifteen minutes, Joseph will be dead.
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Thank you!
Rom com is about as far from what I normally write as you could get, so I figured I had to make it my own somehow.
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:30am
Lookit There wrote:
Group 105: Suspense, A detoxification center, A blackboard
Graduation
Welcome to Graduation Day at The Institute. No cake or party hats, just armed guards and paranoia.
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What a great logline/synopsis!
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:31am
BeckyG515 wrote:
Group 110: Political Satire / All you can eat restaurant / a fire hose
America’s Least Racist Restaurant
A New York businessman is bringing the old American buffet back into vogue with a new fancy twist, inspired by our lady president. His newest hire will be key in making The Greatest American Buffet a welcome place for all Americans.
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This sounds like a delightful romp! WHO COULD IT BE ABOUT?
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Posted By: Sammayne
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:32am
DocI wrote:
Group 70: Comedy / a steakhouse / liquid soap
No Soap Radio Mary
is trapped on a terrible date, but she’s got a plan for how to
escape. Once she can defeat an empty soap dispenser, that is.
(first time in this contest. tons of fun! thanks to everyone who helped beta read for me.)
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This sounds so enjoyably absurd, I hope you post it when the time comes.
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Posted By: Lookit There
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:33am
stephenmatlock wrote:
Lookit There wrote:
Group 105: Suspense, A detoxification center, A blackboard
Graduation
Welcome to Graduation Day at The Institute. No cake or party hats, just armed guards and paranoia.
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What a great logline/synopsis!
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Thanks! I was so worried it would sound too comedic. Because - the paraphrase a beta - the story's not. At all. Like, AT ALL.
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Posted By: RachRanton
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:34am
Group #88 FANTASY | A FLOWER SHOW | A TRICYCLE
Worthy Women
Formidable Valkyrie women prowl the pavilions, each determined to take home the best Flower from the show.
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:34am
DocI wrote:
Group 70: Comedy / a steakhouse / liquid soap
No Soap Radio Mary is trapped on a terrible date, but she’s got a plan for how to escape. Once she can defeat an empty soap dispenser, that is.
(first time in this contest. tons of fun! thanks to everyone who helped beta read for me.)
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I'm thoroughly intrigued by this synopsis. Can't wait to read it!
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Posted By: regannoelle
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:35am
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Group 15: Historical fiction / cattle ranch / wedding dress
The Boy Born of Hellfire During the 17th and 18th centuries, it has been estimated that nearly 4,000 alleged witches were burned to death in Scotland alone. This is the story of the boy who burned back.
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Posted By: NYCNewbie
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:35am
stephenmatlock wrote:
NYCNewbie wrote:
Group 26 Crime Caper / An auto parts store / A pug
The Things We Do for Love In an attempt to save both his failing business and his marriage, an auto parts store owner takes drastic action. However, is it one step too far?
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Can't wait to see what you did with an automobile pug as the object. Not a lot of people write about those, but they hold the transmission together.
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Just kidding. They're a dog, of course. :)
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Posted By: Lookit There
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:36am
regannoelle wrote:
Group 15: Historical fiction / cattle ranch / wedding dress
The Boy Born of Hellfire During the 17th and 18th centuries, it has been estimated that nearly 4,000 alleged witches were burned to death in Scotland alone. This is the story of the boy who burned back. |
CANNOT WAIT to read the final draft! It was so good!
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Posted By: TrishArrowsmith
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:36am
regannoelle wrote:
Group 15: Historical fiction / cattle ranch / wedding dress
The Boy Born of Hellfire During the 17th and 18th centuries, it has been estimated that nearly 4,000 alleged witches were burned to death in Scotland alone. This is the story of the boy who burned back. |
Ooh! I hope you're posting once we're able. This sounds like something I would love to read.
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Posted By: Noel Alcoba
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:36am
regannoelle wrote:
Group 15: Historical fiction / cattle ranch / wedding dress
The Boy Born of Hellfire During the 17th and 18th centuries, it has been estimated that nearly 4,000 alleged witches were burned to death in Scotland alone. This is the story of the boy who burned back. | Oooh this sounds so cool!!!
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Posted By: Sephira
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:38am
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Group 122: Drama / A foreclosed home / A prosthetic
Semper Fi A disabled veteran in a small town struggles to come to terms with change and learns the value of true friendship when a sleazy banker looks to foreclose on the family farm.
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Posted By: Plywoodkid
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:39am
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A Thriller/Hotel Room/Calculator
"The Validation"
When the opportunity for a dream job arises, a man finds that his past life calls for the ultimate sacrifice.
Good Luck Everyone
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:39am
regannoelle wrote:
Group 15: Historical fiction / cattle ranch / wedding dress
The Boy Born of Hellfire
During the 17th and 18th centuries, it has been estimated that nearly 4,000 alleged witches were burned to death in Scotland alone. This is the story of the boy who burned back.
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Oh yeah, I'm here for this!
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:40am
I'm so sorry--I'm so mean, but I just HAD to pull your leg on this one!
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Posted By: Lisa_Who
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:41am
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Group 24: Fairy tale/classroom/a stalk of celery
THE MAGIC
CELERY STALK
Not all celery are
created equal—one enchanted stalk can fulfill a child’s most treasured dreams.
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Posted By: charleycheval
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:44am
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Group 38: drama / obedience school / cotton candy
I just could not get my plot to come together and I really struggled with how much "drama" needed to be added. Oh well. Time will tell! I wrote in a different style than I normally do AND a different tense AND I took the location in a different way than I hoped other people would (fingers crossed!). Hoping to get some great feedback from the forum later this week.
The Price of Dedication
Sometimes, dreams can cloud reality.
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Posted By: Azuu
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:44am
Group 83: Comedy/A Mailroom/A Lawnmower
Eine An
eccentric mailroom technician experiences his favourite day of the
week.
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Posted By: S.L. Hill
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:45am
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Loving reading everyone's synopses!
I'm in group #21: Rom Com / an Ice Cream Truck / A Dart !!
ONE SWEET GETAWAY A reckless game of darts, a split-second decision, and an accidental kidnapping culminate in a surprisingly sweet meeting between two women.
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Posted By: hanalyst
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:45am
northernwriter wrote:
Group 4: Spy, spa, licorice
Last But Not Leashed
Retired
canine operative Max has set up a slick spy operation. But when he has a ruff
day, will he end up barking up the wrong tree or will he flea to live the pug
life?
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ALL OF THE TITLE PUN POINTS!
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Posted By: Mystic Platypus
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:46am
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This was an...interesting challenge
Group 43: Historical Fiction/ An Abandoned Factory/ A Bearskin rug
The Falling Sickness In 1794 New Orleans, a desperate mother seeks the help of a voodoo priest, who claims that her daughter’s illness is the result of demonic possession.
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Posted By: TrishArrowsmith
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:48am
Mystic Platypus wrote:
This was an...interesting challenge
Group 43: Historical Fiction/ An Abandoned Factory/ A Bearskin rug
The Falling Sickness In 1794 New Orleans, a desperate mother seeks the help of a voodoo priest, who claims that her daughter’s illness is the result of demonic possession. |
I would love to read this one. My mind never would have gone in that direction.
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Posted By: lnLala
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:48am
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Group 19: Suspense / A petting zoo / a fog machine
Rabbits Bite
A young woman searches a petting
zoo for her twin, but the animals she finds aren’t what she expected.
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Posted By: ROS
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:56am
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Group 91: Mystery/a coffee shop/a cactus
Time's Up A brusque Detective, forced into an intense encounter, must battle his natural instincts as he fights for survival and justice - before it's too late.
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Posted By: stephenmatlock
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:57am
Mystic Platypus wrote:
This was an...interesting challenge
Group 43: Historical Fiction/ An Abandoned Factory/ A Bearskin rug
The Falling Sickness
In 1794 New Orleans, a desperate mother seeks the help of a voodoo priest, who claims that her daughter’s illness is the result of demonic possession.
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Oooh! I'm looking forward to reading this!
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Posted By: Schrifty
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 1:57am
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32: Comedy a Movie Theater with a Sword:
Clash of the Fandoms
When two fan-favorite films
premiere on the same night, Kyle chooses his cosplay-loving girlfriend over his
best friend Dave, not knowing that Dave is attending his movie at the same
theater. Will their friendship withstand
his betrayal, or is all fair in love and war?
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Posted By: Mumser
Date Posted: 15 Jul 2019 at 2:00am
Mystic Platypus wrote:
This was an...interesting challenge
Group 43: Historical Fiction/ An Abandoned Factory/ A Bearskin rug
The Falling Sickness In 1794 New Orleans, a desperate mother seeks the help of a voodoo priest, who claims that her daughter’s illness is the result of demonic possession. |
Good to see that you came out of this weekend's weather with such an inventive story, Mystic. Can't wait to read it. Hope all is well.
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