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rangesa ![]() NYC Midnight Addict ![]() ![]() Joined: 05 Dec 2019 Status: Offline Points: 549 |
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G21 Horror / Watching a parade / over
- I'm really bad at writing horror, but I tried my best! Do leave your feedback so I can improve my writing! I'll return reads :) A PARADE TO MISS “It’s starting, wake up, dad!” she yelled yanking me off the bed. “Alright, inside voice please!” I groaned clumsily getting up to follow her. Ma was in hot pursuit of Sam trying to get her to put on her jacket. But she’d already bolted through the balcony doors, and now stood craning her neck over the wall to see the massive floats. It had become a tradition to spend Thanksgiving with my parents since Leela passed. Their central park west apartment always made watching the parade a joyous spectacle. As I hobbled over to Sam a loud commotion erupted in the crowd. Floats crashed against the sides of buildings as hordes of people awkwardly scaled them into neighboring balconies. We watched in bewilderment, as chaos enveloped the entire street. It felt like a sudden unbridled rage had overcome everyone. “Dad, they’re zombies” Sam screamed, pointing to a turkey float collapsed by our balcony. People were shrouding it like termites on wood. I dragged Sam and Ma inside, before shutting the doors and drawing the curtains. “Bedroom…balcony” she muttered. I pushed Sam and Ma into the bathroom and ran over to the bedroom just as zombies crashed into the living room. “DRIINNN” I jolted awake to the shrill alarm noise as my premonition dawned on me. “It’s starting, wake up, dad!” Edited by rangesa - 25 Nov 2020 at 1:09am |
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daniellemari ![]() NYC Midnight Newbie ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 Oct 2020 Location: Katy Status: Offline Points: 91 |
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Scariest Groundhog day ever!
Nice job working in a genre you don't normally enjoy. I'd never have known it!
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Alyxbee ![]() NYC Midnight Addict ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 Oct 2019 Location: UsA Status: Offline Points: 720 |
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I think you may have posted in the wrong place? I think this is just the general CWC rather than 250 subforum
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rangesa ![]() NYC Midnight Addict ![]() ![]() Joined: 05 Dec 2019 Status: Offline Points: 549 |
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Thank you for letting me know! I didn't realize I made that mistake. Do you know how I can delete this post here.
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