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    Posted: 30 Jun 2020 at 6:29pm
posted in the wrong area. wanted to delete this whole post but I guess we can only edit?

redid the post in the right one ...




Edited by ykchris - 01 Jul 2020 at 1:28am
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Hiii Heatmate! Stopping by to read and give you some thoughts! 

I think its an interesting enough setting but for me it feels too big for the small space,  and raises a lot of questions that stay unanswered. 

I also struggled a little with the genre in it because the turmoil and action seem  kind of surface level? 

I think you found a distinct voice for the MC though,  and a unique take on the prompt. 

Good luck with the judges!
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