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    Posted: 19 May 2018 at 1:46am
Have decided to change my first commercial screenplay to a porno as there is way less dialog.
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You could always do what they did in "A Quiet Place." Though if you were working on a musical it would be a challenge.
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Suave Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 May 2018 at 11:18am
Originally posted by JeffreyHowe JeffreyHowe wrote:

You could always do what they did in "A Quiet Place." Though if you were working on a musical it would be a challenge.


Haha, the musical sounds interesting, humming?
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Give me dialogue over exposition any day. I think I'm the opposite of most.
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Originally posted by Suave Suave wrote:

Have decided to change my first commercial screenplay to a porno as there is way less dialog.


It's not a lack of dialog, it's a lack of expectations by the target audience. 

Now, I challenge you to write the vocalizations required to meet the expectations of the target audience...
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Originally posted by Random Random wrote:

Originally posted by Suave Suave wrote:

Have decided to change my first commercial screenplay to a porno as there is way less dialog.


It's not a lack of dialog, it's a lack of expectations by the target audience. 

Now, I challenge you to write the vocalizations required to meet the expectations of the target audience...
Clap oh my sh*t, that's funny. 
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Originally posted by Random Random wrote:

Originally posted by Suave Suave wrote:

Have decided to change my first commercial screenplay to a porno as there is way less dialog.


It's not a lack of dialog, it's a lack of expectations by the target audience. 

Now, I challenge you to write the vocalizations required to meet the expectations of the target audience...


Could make it a musical porno....
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Originally posted by Suave Suave wrote:

Could make it a musical porno....


Didn't Fleetwood Mac do that already?
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Suave Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 May 2018 at 3:02am
Originally posted by Random Random wrote:

Originally posted by Suave Suave wrote:

Could make it a musical porno....


Didn't Fleetwood Mac do that already?


Then the ice has been broken and my audience awaits.
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