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Sorry you're not going through Annemarie Cry - although selfishly it does mean I can ask you to beta for me.Tongue

Taking a look at the judges' feedback, it does seem like the issue was confusion between Dirk and the Goblin King fighting vs drinking.
Rework that and take this elsewhere. It deserves a wider audience!
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Originally posted by FireHorse FireHorse wrote:

Sorry you're not going through Annemarie Cry - although selfishly it does mean I can ask you to beta for me.Tongue

Taking a look at the judges' feedback, it does seem like the issue was confusion between Dirk and the Goblin King fighting vs drinking.
Rework that and take this elsewhere. It deserves a wider audience!

Thanks FireHorse.  Yes, seems it was a bit too ambiguous - such is the curse of a 250 word limit.

Happy to beta for you, just send through whenever you have a draft.  Google docs with suggesting access preferred.

Good luck!
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