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annemarie
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FireHorse
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Sorry you're not going through Annemarie - although selfishly it does mean I can ask you to beta for me.
Taking a look at the judges' feedback, it does seem like the issue was confusion between Dirk and the Goblin King fighting vs drinking. Rework that and take this elsewhere. It deserves a wider audience!
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annemarie
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Thanks FireHorse. Yes, seems it was a bit too ambiguous - such is the curse of a 250 word limit. Happy to beta for you, just send through whenever you have a draft. Google docs with suggesting access preferred. Good luck!
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