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I don't include anything in any description that's not important to the story, and don't include that description until it becomes important. In one case you find out the character's eye color 50,000 words in, because it didn't matter until then. Most of my characters feel honored just to have a name.
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I know this has been answered but I’ll put my two cents in! Honestly, I think it’s a sign of a very mature writer that you automatically don’t describe the irrelevant details. Pretty much every author piece of advice I’ve seen on this subject says to never describe a character’s appearance unless it serves a purpose (that includes characterization or setting the vibe for a character, but it can also be details that are relevant to the story). I am a strong subscriber to that theory; it’s not poor writing at all, you are actually ahead of the game!
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Submitted. Twice. The delta was three characters, which is the only difference between two character's names if I use the right versions. Bah! I knew about that and thought I had fixed it. What I haven't fixed is the title, because that's awful, and the synopsis, which is so bad I might get disqualified before the judges get to the actual story. Now I get a few hours of blissful relaxation before self-loathing kicks in, because would could possibly think such a mismatched pile of unrelated grunts is a worthy submission?
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LBremer
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I'm struggling... and I mean really struggling. I'm over thinking all of it and changed my idea 5 times. I just can't seem to actually start writing anything.
I've got SPY/COLLATERAL DAMAGE/A RIFLEMAN but I don't want to write something predictable arghhhh. Any ideas for starting to type? I'm just staring at a blank word doc. 😳
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Haha, I have unleashed the words!!! I was trapped in screenwriting mode. Had completely forgotten how to write prose - very strange feeling.
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I am maybe halfway done and I was SO proud of myself because usually I am writing/editing up until Friday 11:59:58 but then I remembered I have DnD on Friday all night which means I have to be done by Thursday which means I am essentially back to writing last minute
also this story is 80% dialogue and 20% "[insert plot and description here]" so if someone could make these characters less chatty that would be great Edited by legendberry - 25 Jan 2023 at 10:09pm |
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Write something predictable. It'll still be your thoughts and I can guarantee words will flow after your first few sentences. I'm in the same situation as you. I'm overthinking and freaking myself out and have started and stopped multiple times.
Think about something you're interested in. A store you passed by recently or the woman you saw standing at the bus stop. Words will come. You still have lots of time.
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Have the spy on a mission to disable a new type of rifle. He gets to the rifle and disables it. He's then chased around the base and somehow comes across a rifle dropped by one of the riflemen. He picks it up and fires it. At the last moment he discovers it was the rifle he sabotaged and it blows up, making him the collateral damage.
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Short story Fairyland detective agency
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My blank document gets filled, usually first, with snippets of dialog or description Chuck fired the rifle from the hip. The round went through the center of the washer and tore a perfect hole through the tape, the grease ring clear proof this was no sleight of hand. The bullet tore through the building, but ricocheted off the edge of a roofing nail and landed in the general store, where a cask of black powder fell into a basket of flints. The explosion set off the rest of the powder, and a mushroom cloud filled the space where once the only supply of Red Man chewing tobacco once stood. MacDingus MacArthur looked at Chuck. "You gonna pay fer that, mister."
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Oh, I know that feeling. At least I did until I realized I don't like screenplay, which is what originally got me into writing oddly enough. My prose was always written with screenplay in mind, so everything had to be show and tell; no inner conflict or thoughts allowed. Then I found out inner dialog is cool.
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