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    Posted: 02 Aug 2021 at 12:01pm
I have a general flash piece I would like a bit of feedback on, and this is a community of people that I know give great feedback! If anyone is interested in Beta reading it, I would love to share the link. Just respond here and I'll PM it to you!

Thanks in advance!



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I can read it later this evening (I’m on California time) and give feedback either tonight or tomorrow if that works for you. 
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote LadyArkham Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 Aug 2021 at 12:55pm
Absolutely! Also let me know what kind of crit you are looking for. :)
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Suave Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 Aug 2021 at 1:33pm
Sure! But won't get to it for 8 hours, bed time right now and I need any beauty sleep I can get...
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote BethanyDawn Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 Aug 2021 at 4:04pm
Thank you thank you friends! I'm in no rush, so just whenever you can get to it. I'm fairly thick skinned so any type of feedback is helpful. Just want to be sure the story flows well and the underlying plot comes across well. Suggestions for tightening prose are helpful too.
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If you need or want another pair of eyes. Otherwise I think you have a good group of betas.
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If you need another set of eyes, I'm happy to take a look.
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If you need a 42nd set of eyes, (lol) I'm up for it! 
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (1) Thanks(1)   Quote BethanyDawn Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 Aug 2021 at 4:07pm
Thank you thank you thank you all for your feedback! It really helped me tighten things up!
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