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phantasm3
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Posted: 15 Jul 2020 at 9:39pm |
I feel pretty confident in mine.
Edited by phantasm3 - 16 Jul 2020 at 12:11am |
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BarbaraFL
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Edited my post because my response looked deranged after you edited yours, haha!
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KLNorman
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I like it but I think it’s a lot more clear in my mind then in the reader’s.
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phantasm3
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I didnt know I could get dq for that. Thankyou
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BarbaraFL
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You're welcome! I could be wrong, but I think they want us to post them only in the forum that isn't open to the public. Good luck !
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lnLala
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I fluctuate between "meh" and "that's actually not bad!" I don't hate it, but I suspect I will like it better upon revision.
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FF23 Ch3 Gr13 Confession (thriller)
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eldarcj
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Ugh. Not good. I set mine in a cafe, and just now realized it's supposed to be a sidewalk cafe. But, it was set in the winter, and she was looking out a window, so... <sigh> oh well. There's always the next round.
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charmyd
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Was disappointed when I first submitted. But I've read and re-read it obsessively since then. Now, I love it!
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Read my 1st round 2023 Rhyming Story here: Zadie, Out of Reach
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TheFreshPen
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I got to start leaving things to the last minute because I feel like I'm going to get knocked on simple edits again.
As far as the story goes I think I did well with bringing the prompts to life in a horror fashion. But my initial draft was over 2500 words. So a lot of the nuances I had in the story got left on the cutting room floor.
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lmcollins
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I just found two errors i thought I fixed. I edited so much to get to the word count and it was so late. I am so disappointed with myself.
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