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Nehasrivi
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Group 61, Romance/ Fairground/ No Treapassing
Title - Khumb, synopsis - when Janeshan goes to cover the kumbh fair that is registered in the genius Book for the maximum number of visitors, he realises that only one person in this human sea, mattered to him... he has to find her in a crowd of 30 million Edited by Nehasrivi - 21 Jul 2019 at 1:37am |
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GaleGirl
NYC Midnight Addict Joined: 26 Jan 2019 Location: Lancaster, PA Status: Offline Points: 1025 |
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Hello KK, I don't know if you were addressing me about my story, but I read your story. I thought the premise was very provocative and interesting. It seemed like such a rich story, chock full of details about life in that age and time. It as frightening to think young people who had been once cured from disease would be sold out by their family for money. I liked the idea of every young person having a bird and it was quite moving to learn that all those birds were exterminated and removed from the circle of life. One suggestion I can offer is that the bird is a character itself, and I wanted it to play a bigger role in your protection, especially against the Grays. Do you like writing Sci Fi or you just rose to the challenge?
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GaleGirl
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Hello KK, I am not certain whether you were reaching out to me, but I read your story regardless. I liked it a great deal. It was an intriguing concept and you executed it well. It was so full of rich details and such a gripping story, it's difficult to believe you accomplished all that in l,000 words. It was shocking that they would rob a 17-year-old girl of her life just for having a disease she'd been cured of. Or that her parents would sell her body for money. But that is what it made your tale so compelling. I liked the idea of each child having a kestrel. I think you could make the story even stronger at the end by giving the kestrel something to do to show the bird's loyalty to your viewpoint character...to have the bird actually do something so it becomes more than a cool idea in the piece. Best of luck to you. If you meant this for me, thank you for stopping in on my work. |
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LIVINGSTON
NYC Midnight Newbie Joined: 18 Jul 2019 Status: Offline Points: 20 |
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Flash Fiction 2019 - Challenge 1
Group 64 - Horror/A ship graveyard/A canoe Synopsis: A tortured man looks for his missing soul in a sea of black water.
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Flash Fiction
Challenge 1: Soul Searching (HORROR) |
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LIVINGSTON
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Flash Fiction 2019 - Challenge 1
Group 64 - Horror/A ship graveyard/A canoe Synopsis: A tortured man looks for his missing soul in a sea of black water.
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Flash Fiction
Challenge 1: Soul Searching (HORROR) |
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JessBarratt
NYC Midnight Groupie Joined: 16 Jul 2017 Location: Edmonton Status: Offline Points: 180 |
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Group 110: Political Satire // An All-You-Can-Eat Restaurant // A Firehose All-You-Can-Eat Special Synopsis: Two men watch a parade from the window of a forgotten restaurant, hoping that nothing new finds its way inside. This community is amazing! Thank you all so much for your stories, perspectives, and feedback! xo |
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FFC 2019 CH1 All-You-Can-Eat Special
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GillenLiam
NYC Midnight Groupie Joined: 16 Jul 2019 Location: Maidstone Status: Offline Points: 104 |
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Hey, I have actually posted this now, in the right place hopefully (I have no idea what im doing!) If you could take a look id really appreciate it
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mhiggins
NYC Midnight Newbie Joined: 15 Jul 2019 Location: KC Status: Offline Points: 34 |
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Flash Fiction 2019 - Challenge 1 Group 58: Horror, A Cake Shop, A Weight Lifting Belt. Title: Stay Hungry Synopsis: What happens when a man realizes he’s gone too far in a search for perfection… This is my first time with NYC Midnight, and man am I rusty! Fun to belt out a short one in a few hours, though! Enjoying reading all of the other efforts, too. This is good for all of us. Shout out to my old friend Karlynn who nudged me toward entering. Edited by mhiggins - 24 Jul 2019 at 10:22pm |
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steph9289
NYC Midnight Black Belt Joined: 23 Jan 2016 Location: Brooklyn, NY Status: Offline Points: 8966 |
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Make sure you post this in the Flash Fiction Challenge 2019 Review forum!! This part of the forum is public. You will want to create a "New Topic" in the private part of the forum. :)
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#amrevising
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BleuSky
NYC Midnight Groupie Joined: 26 Jul 2017 Status: Offline Points: 232 |
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Group 21/An Ice Cream Truck/a dart Let’s Taco ‘Bout Love After a bad break up Rosa finds out if ice cream really can solve all her problems. |
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