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Group 6 - Comedy/Automation/Hitman

WORK FOR HIRE

A misunderstanding leads to chaos when two women suspect a robotics engineer of being a hitman. 



I actually (gasp!) enjoyed this round. A HUGE thank you to some incredible betas!
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RomCom
Speed Dating
Pizza Maker

LOVE-STUCK
Newly single Chloe is ready for a brand new dating life.
If only her ex would finally move on.
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GROUP 11: Ghost Story / Discipline / A Sea Captain

A Dish Served Cold

A tyrannical Sea Captain learns that
sometimes the meek don't want to inherit the earth.


Edited by NYCNewbie - 17 Jun 2019 at 12:31am
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Originally posted by jdadams1 jdadams1 wrote:

Heat 11 - Ghost story / Discipline / A sea captain

SHARDS OF DISCIPLINE 

A man inherits the home he spent time in as a child. But is it too late to stop himself from following in his family's footsteps?

And here I had happily forgotten you're in my heat!  Glad there is room for you, me and Paula in the next top five!!

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Originally posted by NYCNewbie NYCNewbie wrote:

GROUP 11: Ghost Story / Discipline / A Sea Captain

A Dish Served Cold

A tyrannical Sea Captain learns that
sometimes the meek don't want to inherit the earth.

Oh, my!  This sounds wonderful, Paula.  Can't wait to read!  :D
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Group 10: Thriller/A Backup Plan/A Financial Planner

KAYENDAR

When the CEO of a tech startup opens a Latin American headquarters in 

Rio de Janiero, he and his financial planner are abducted by bandits.

When the kidnapping goes awry, his financial planner must act 

quickly to save himself, his boss... and Rio itself.



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Heat 12
Rom-com/speed dating/ a pizza maker

Deep Cover Deep Dish
Logline: A government spy almost blows a mission with the wrong codename, but at least he lands himself a date.



Edited by myrhapsody - 17 Jun 2019 at 5:23pm
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Originally posted by MissKeister MissKeister wrote:

Originally posted by jdadams1 jdadams1 wrote:

Heat 11 - Ghost story / Discipline / A sea captain

SHARDS OF DISCIPLINE 

A man inherits the home he spent time in as a child. But is it too late to stop himself from following in his family's footsteps?

And here I had happily forgotten you're in my heat!  Glad there is room for you, me and Paula in the next top five!!


Haha! Well, don't count me in it too early. It's very different than what I normally write, and I'm still not sure about it. But I very much appreciate my beta readers (especially @nilesperry, who was basically my script doctor). 
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Originally posted by jdadams1 jdadams1 wrote:

Originally posted by MissKeister MissKeister wrote:

Originally posted by jdadams1 jdadams1 wrote:

Heat 11 - Ghost story / Discipline / A sea captain

<div style="text-align: center;">SHARDS OF DISCIPLINE <div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">A man inherits the home he spent time in as a child. But is it too
late to stop himself from following in his family's footsteps?



And here I had happily forgotten you're in my heat!  Glad there is room for you, me and Paula in the next top five!!



Haha! Well, don't count me in it too early. It's very different than what I normally write, and I'm still not sure about it. But I very much appreciate my beta readers (especially @nilesperry, who was basically my script doctor). 

I've no bloody idea what the hell I submitted
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Group 6
Comedy/Automation/A hitman


FIVE CARD CHARLIE

A hitman is hired by an elderly gentleman to assist him in eliminating a mysterious target at a Las Vegas casino.


I learned so much about pacing for comedy writing here; very challenging and fun. I hope I hit the mark 😂🤦🏼‍♀️


Edited by MMWinters - 19 Jun 2019 at 12:00pm
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