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Originally posted by jdadams1 jdadams1 wrote:

Originally posted by MissKeister MissKeister wrote:

Originally posted by jdadams1 jdadams1 wrote:

Heat 11 - Ghost story / Discipline / A sea captain
SHARDS OF DISCIPLINE 
A man inherits the home he spent time in as a child. But is it too late to stop himself from following in his family's footsteps?
And here I had happily forgotten you're in my heat!  Glad there is room for you, me and Paula in the next top five!!
Haha! Well, don't count me in it too early. It's very different than what I normally write, and I'm still not sure about it. But I very much appreciate my beta readers (especially @nilesperry, who was basically my script doctor). 
You can fire me now. Your script doctor missed two typos, both on Pg 6.
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Group 12 / RomCom / Speed dating / Pizza Maker 


I Fall to Pizzas

Hopelessly romantic Eve is ready to meet her soulmate at
      a hotel speed-dating event. But first, pizza.
Rhyming R1: Lionheart (Hist fic)
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote MissKeister Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 Jun 2019 at 12:51am
Originally posted by NYCNewbie NYCNewbie wrote:

Originally posted by jdadams1 jdadams1 wrote:

Originally posted by MissKeister MissKeister wrote:

Originally posted by jdadams1 jdadams1 wrote:

Heat 11 - Ghost story / Discipline / A sea captain

<div style="text-align: center;">SHARDS OF DISCIPLINE <div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">A man inherits the home he spent time in as a child. But is it too
late to stop himself from following in his family's footsteps?



And here I had happily forgotten you're in my heat!  Glad there is room for you, me and Paula in the next top five!!



Haha! Well, don't count me in it too early. It's very different than what I normally write, and I'm still not sure about it. But I very much appreciate my beta readers (especially @nilesperry, who was basically my script doctor). 

I've no bloody idea what the hell I submitted

Bahahahaha same!!!  I'm just speaking "top five" for us into the universe!  LOL
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I love your wordplay! I fall to Pizzas, well done.
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (1) Thanks(1)   Quote Vernacula Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 Jun 2019 at 1:02am
People in my group really went ham (and pineapple?) with the pizza theme. I'm getting a little nervous that I didn't deliver the extra cheese. Perhaps it should have been a bigger slice of my story. 

(I haven't had any sleep, just slap me.)
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This is amazing and I salute your sleep deprived wordplay. I’m sure you delivered Wink
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote MissKeister Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 Jun 2019 at 1:14am
Originally posted by MMWinters MMWinters wrote:

This is amazing and I salute your sleep deprived wordplay. I’m sure you delivered Wink

(Or it was DiGiorno)

... I'm going to bed!
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Talk about a feature film on a postage stamp. sodding 8 pages! Who knew that would be so hard!

Heat 7, Sci-Fi, a lumberjack, cosmetic surgery

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In a future world where where you can't see the forest for the lack of trees, everyone is left gasping.
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Originally posted by paulene.turner paulene.turner wrote:

Talk about a feature film on a postage stamp. sodding 8 pages! Who knew that would be so hard!

Heat 7, Sci-Fi, a lumberjack, cosmetic surgery

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In a future world where where you can't see the forest for the lack of trees, everyone is left gasping.

This sounds fantastic, heatmate!
All my stories are here!
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Group 7: sci fi / cosmetic surgery / lumberjack 

SENESCENCE 

In a world where cosmetic enhancement is the norm, one transformation remains unattainable. Until now.

I don’t know what this is...submitted in a rush as I’m away on a business trip. Last minute writing in hotels worked for me last year, but I don’t think I’ll be so lucky this time! 
All my stories are here!
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