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jmsimon
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Hey Everyone,
These sound great! Here is mine, I'm in Group 34: Spy / Mail forwarding / A loan officer Digging the Truth While investigating a loan officer with ties to a terrorist group, secret agent Rex Vanderlark discovers a secret in an unexpected place.
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Annerocious
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In my head, it went "...if it doesn't bury her lede..."
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Sophiebrx
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Heat 14 - Romantic Comedy - Recycling - A senior citizen Title: Gathering Providence Logline: She’s trying to save her relationship by gathering enough of an expensive love potion. He’s trying not to need any. Man do I hate romantic comedies! :D
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stephenmatlock
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First of all, AWESOME logline! Can't wait for a chance to read it. (If you were to share it with us, of course.) But I feel your pain! I have a reflexive dislike of PDF files because when they are shared in Google Drive they have this wonky interface that puts black bars at the top and bottom with NOT HELPFUL RIGHT NOW navigation controls, and try as I might I can't dismiss them. I actually downloaded an app that converts them to a readable document format. I dinked around with a few programs, all which can import/export Final Draft content, and ended up with a mix of Fade In and Writer Duet. (Fade In for writing, and Writer Duet for final PDF because my copy of Fade In is still the demo version.) When I purchase Fade In, I think I'll use just that. Best of luck with the judges! And remember, life is what happens when you're still planning for life. |
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Pithy sayings are for the apt. For a longer message, you need a condo.
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Splinker
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I would have avoided using the word "secret" twice. But I think it has a zero chance of hurting your entry.
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Splinker
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Rikpo
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Redamntion Love between an angel and a succubus can last centuries, if they don't destroy each other. *** Okay, so I had this nice start on a sweet story about an orc sailor who fakes an injury to get out of joining the war so he can see more of his son. However, I ended with an erotic-ish fantasy where a succubus fondles an archangel. I'm thinking those pictures in the Dungeons & Dragons manuals of my youth are still kicking around in my id somewhere equating fantasy to hot monster. Let me know if I'm beyond psychological and/or literary redress. Cheers & Good Luck All!
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amariesalter
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Soldiered on with my most dreaded genre- Political Satire/ A fundraiser/ a furniture mover. Fairly certain what I submitted was absolutely wretched, but I'm glad I finished. Not quitting is my big achievement here. Plus, I ran out of cares to give and used of my favorite absurd words in my title.
The Snollygosters' Ball A small town jack of all trades is a fish out of water at a fancy D.C. fundraiser, but he may be more welcome than he imagines.
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alexdsut
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These are sounding great! Can't wait to read some of the completed scripts. Here's my two cents for Heat 34: Spy / Mail Forwarding / A Loan Officer:
Western Heights An introverted loan officer, on the brink of redundancy, decides to follows the instructions of a series of anonymous emails; becoming progressively more involved in an obscure conspiracy. |
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paulene.turner
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Look forward to reading this REEZ! Good to see you here again...despite the obstacles!
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paulene.turner
NYC Midnight Black Belt Joined: 22 Mar 2016 Location: Australia Status: Offline Points: 2311 |
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Hey, fellow heat 44-er Look forward to reading yours. How did you find the prompts? I hope you are going to put this up on the forum? cheers Paulene
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