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Originally posted by KaliAK KaliAK wrote:

I'm sitting in my son's karate dojo trying to play it cool so I don't embarrass him. But it's so HARD!

A better mom would go wait in the car oh well.

Oh, my. What is a karate dojo? 
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Originally posted by tcFlash tcFlash wrote:

Originally posted by Isaryth Isaryth wrote:

If nothing else, the feedback other authors have given me has really helped. So I'm hoping to make the cut, but if I don't, it won't be a wasted experience.

It's hard to tell. So many stories were not available to us in the forum. I just read your story. Very well done. You have reason to hope to move on, but predictions are useless.  

You're right, but thank you for your kind words about my story.
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I liked your story too, Isaryth! It creeped me out. 
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Originally posted by Zelda Zelda wrote:

Originally posted by KaliAK KaliAK wrote:

I'm sitting in my son's karate dojo trying to play it cool so I don't embarrass him. But it's so HARD!

A better mom would go wait in the car oh well.


Oh, my. What is a karate dojo? 


A dojo is what they call the karate school. My son's in his class, practicing to get his black belt, and valiantly trying to pretend I'm not here bouncing on the bench. We've been coming here long enough that everyone knows us so he can't even pretend I'm not related. Poor kid.
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Originally posted by KaliAK KaliAK wrote:

 

A dojo is what they call the karate school. My son's in his class, practicing to get his black belt, and valiantly trying to pretend I'm not here bouncing on the bench. We've been coming here long enough that everyone knows us so he can't even pretend I'm not related. Poor kid.

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Originally posted by Zelda Zelda wrote:

I liked your story too, Isaryth! It creeped me out. 

Thanks, Zelda!
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tick tick tick tick.....
 
I'm at work right now and this is making for a VERY long night.
 
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Originally posted by Zelda Zelda wrote:

Originally posted by KaliAK KaliAK wrote:

 

A dojo is what they call the karate school. My son's in his class, practicing to get his black belt, and valiantly trying to pretend I'm not here bouncing on the bench. We've been coming here long enough that everyone knows us so he can't even pretend I'm not related. Poor kid.

LOL LOLLOL
 
My son and I take karate and are both almost at black ourselves. I'd rather be doing that right now then clock-stalking...lol
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Originally posted by tonicwater79 tonicwater79 wrote:

Originally posted by Zelda Zelda wrote:

Originally posted by KaliAK KaliAK wrote:

 

A dojo is what they call the karate school. My son's in his class, practicing to get his black belt, and valiantly trying to pretend I'm not here bouncing on the bench. We've been coming here long enough that everyone knows us so he can't even pretend I'm not related. Poor kid.


LOL LOLLOL

 
My son and I take karate and are both almost at black ourselves. I'd rather be doing that right now then clock-stalking...lol


I'm more than a little jealous of him right now. I wish I had a distraction.
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