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    Posted: 22 Jan 2024 at 2:17am
We're over 48 hours in.  How's everyone doing?  Have you got your idea sorted or still banging your head against the wall?  Have you got your first draft done or submitted your whole thing already and put your feet up?

I've got my second draft back from my first round of betas.  It was nice not needing to dedicate the entire weekend to rushing to complete my story (like the Flash Fiction comp and later rounds of Short Story).  It's under wordcount (something I struggled with a LOT during the FF comp) and writing it was pretty cathartic.

I'm looking forward to doing some more revisions tomorrow and getting the next edition out to beta readers.  Just polishing from here.
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Ah to be you! Haha...

I did get it ironed out, had a tough time figuring out how to tackle my idea and was on the verge of starting over. Have over 350 words.
I think what is really driving me is that in the rules for our contest it is stating we will have 10 writers advancing from each heat instead of the 5. Yeah, the main web page still says 5, but the rules say 10.

I think maybe Charlie is starting to try to make the contests more intriguing. 
Now, if he was really trying, he might consider giving each heat two different genre to pick from, would not be hard to make happen. I see so many people just trashed by their genre - with me, if you offer a this or that, I always come up with an idea because the choice has me thinking.
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Oh, I had a full day of doubts about my story LOL The classic "is this trash? This might be trash," before getting it out for beta.

I think for how many people are competing, 10 from each group for round 1 is the right thing to do (especially since it's in the official rules).

I like the idea of getting a choice, but at the same time, I think that might put me into choice paralysis.  I'd be trying to brainstorm both ideas to see which is better. As someone who got Historical Fiction for my very first assignment in FF2023, I thought I was going to be ruined by the genre but my story came third in my group. Part of the joy of a fixed prompt is the absolute magic of creating something despite starting from the spot of "what the *eff* am I going to do with that?!" (For this round I was drawing blanks for a whole lot longer than I was comfortable with.)

(Writers Playground gives you a choice between prompts, I think.  I'm going to try my hand at that one in February.)
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I didn't make much progress in terms of word count today, but I made huge progress in quality and direction. 

Friday brainstorming, Saturday some character development, freewriting, and some loose framing, about 1,000 words. Today, it's showing around 1,300 but at least 300 will be slashed, transformed, or expanded. My big progress was on the opening scene and the start of the next. One line I'm debating on (which probably means it needs to be cut), but other than that, the first 500 words are submission ready. 

I have two more sections with major chunks written, but still need development and a lot of tightening up. I'll tackle those Monday and Tuesday after work. Wednesday is the middle. Right now that's just a couple of cursory notes and phrases. It'll come together. 

I'm loving the stretch my genre is providing, and am progressing at a doable pace.
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I have a rough draft, which currently stands at about 2950 words - but that's 150 shorter than it was a few hours ago.  Tomorrow I'll work on paring it down some more.  It seems I always draft long and then have to cut.

I feel very good about the story at the moment; experience suggests that my feelings will oscillate over the rest of the week.
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I only have 100 words down.

I have Mystery. Decided on the crime, suspects and who did it/solution. 
What is paralyzing me is how to integrate clues and motives and make the whole thing interesting and clever. 
Plus I have three children home for school holidays and entertaining them along with my six-month-old really only leaves me nights to work on my story. 
The 8 days may not be enough for me to polish up anything, we will see!
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I was given the blessing of my strongest genre (comedy) and just turned it in. It clocked in at 954 words. My husband is my only beta reader and he doesn't care for potty humor, so we'll see how it "hits" the judges Big smile
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Well, I only have 238 words on the page of my zero draft (the draft that is the "vomit what comes out of your brain" draft that nobody is to see).

But I finally figured out the story last night. Whatever I end up submitting is unlikely to be super polished but I think I will get something in. 

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Originally posted by BarbaraFL BarbaraFL wrote:

Well, I only have 238 words on the page of my zero draft (the draft that is the "vomit what comes out of your brain" draft that nobody is to see).

But I finally figured out the story last night. Whatever I end up submitting is unlikely to be super polished but I think I will get something in. 

I was thinking that I was not going to measure up this time around with drama. But am now getting a feeling for the story I wanted to write, will see. Have fun, take chances, and drive fast!
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Originally posted by Suave Suave wrote:


I was thinking that I was not going to measure up this time around with drama. But am now getting a feeling for the story I wanted to write, will see. Have fun, take chances, and drive fast!

I'm just glad you didn't get spy again! Good luck !!

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