Mission Accomplished - 2009 Short Story Challenge

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   I just uplodaded my entry for the Short Story Challenge to my blog.

I'd like some feedback since it is my first time writing something.

I did most of the writing last saturday but sketched the main idea during the week.

Let me know what you think of it.

http://pivo-prozim.blogspot.com/2009/01/short-story-mission-accomplished.html

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_pixel Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 27 Jan 2009 Location: Mexico Status: Offline Points: 3	Post Options Post Reply Quote _pixel Report Post Thanks(0) Quote Reply Topic: Mission Accomplished - 2009 Short Story Challenge Posted: 27 Jan 2009 at 11:58am
	I just uplodaded my entry for the Short Story Challenge to my blog. I'd like some feedback since it is my first time writing something. I did most of the writing last saturday but sketched the main idea during the week. Let me know what you think of it. http://pivo-prozim.blogspot.com/2009/01/short-story-mission-accomplished.html
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londongirl Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List NYC Midnight Black Belt Joined: 24 Jan 2009 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 2699	Post Options Post Reply Quote londongirl Report Post Thanks(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 Jan 2009 at 12:00pm
	Hi Pixel - you need to move this post to the dedicated 2009 Short Story Competition sub forum. Start it off as a new topic. See you there!