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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Lookit There Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 Nov 2018 at 8:55pm
Originally posted by chrissie0707 chrissie0707 wrote:

 It had to do with an overuse of pronouns in any single paragraph.
Whoa - I got the exact same feedback! Honestly, I thought it was justified, but now that I see it's a copy & paste into each critique, I respect it one hell of a lot less.
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Lookit There Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 Nov 2018 at 8:58pm
Originally posted by chrissie0707 chrissie0707 wrote:

Originally posted by Lookit There Lookit There wrote:

My feedback was solid. They were very kind in the "What The Judges Liked" section and every bit of their "What Needs Work" was spot-on. 


I'm concerned that one of our judges seemed to have given all of us the same "needs work." critique. I've now seen the same critique on four different stories, almost word for word.
Saw this after I already posted my response above.


Edited by Lookit There - 08 Nov 2018 at 8:59pm
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