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Requiem
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Posted: 27 Jul 2006 at 8:02am |
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I'm starting to panic now.
I usually write my scripts in American English, but this year my script's set in England and I've used English spelling and a lot of English slang. Now, I'm sure readers will forgive my use of two Ls in travelling, but in the past I've had readers call me on words like KERB which is the correct English spelling of CURB. I hope I don't get marked down on stuff like this. It wouldn't seem right to write an English comedy with American spelling Spelling aside, I'm worried that a lot of my comedy will be lost because of the slang I've used. Example: Do any Americans here know what a NONCE is? What about a TODGER? Am I talking BOLLOCKS? |
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kirstenb
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so long as I pretend it is hugh grant reading those lines - I seem to instincitvely know exactly what they mean. |
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not2diversified
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You don't want to get a big trouser cough from the judges and get tossed aside because they don't understand proper British English. I'd lean towards the American spelling as I'm sure some of the judges will be American and might not get the nuances of British English. You might want to consider changing the dialogue straight away.
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aurora68
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Okay, first things first. Traveling can be spelled with one 'l' or two, and any American dictionary will support that. So don't worry about that one.
As far as spelling is concerned, I'd be careful. I think most well-read Americans will know that the British spell color as colour, etc. But I didn't know about 'kerb.' I think a nonce is a moment, but I've no idea what a todger is.
That said, I think there's probably a way to give your script a British flavoUr without losing the comedy. You don't say whether you're British or American, but I would have an American who's not fluent in British slang read your script and see what they say about it.
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Requiem
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Uh oh.... Technically a nonce is a moment, but it's also a slang term for a sex offender. I think it's back to the drawing board on this one I am English btw. |
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aurora68
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*winces*
Sorry. What heat are you in? As long as we're not in the same heat, I'll be happy to give your script a look and tell you which words I don't understand. I'm in Heat 2, Comedy/Weightlifting.
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Chris Messineo
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I love when scripts toss in "local color". I think it makes the read more authentic and fun.
Chris |
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aurora68
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I actually agree with this. But I think if it's a comedy and the local color means that the humor's not coming through because potential readers don't understand the slang -- and if the meaning's not clear from the context -- that's a problem.
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ABEAR111
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Don't worry about it, we Americans are smarter than you Brits give us credit for, we can just naturally figure things out:
NONCE = NONCE, NTWICE, Three times
TODGER = A long spoon, as in, "I stuck my todger in the blender."
BOLLOCKS = The drummer in the Sex Pistols
See, so feel free to go ahead and use all that formal English stuff you feel like.
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ABEAR111
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Seriously, you MUST consider your audience, which really puts you at a disadvantage, but hey - if you don't like it submit it to the London Midnight Run. You can go the forum where you can ask questions of the competition and see if they think it's a problem. They are usually pretty quick to get back for you.
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