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Originally posted by Zblugg Zblugg wrote:

Heat 7: Action/adventure (again!!!) - A Ski Resort - A Flashlight

Ski Nuts 

Beavertails, hazelnuts and chipmunks. This cook's day is 
just about to go downhill - literally.

Goddamn. I wrote a Chip and Dale episode.

Hey there, Heatmate! So glad to have you in my group, and I can't WAIT to read this!!! You are going ot post, aren't you? Please please please???
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Originally posted by stephenmatlock stephenmatlock wrote:

G20 Political Satire | A Shooting Range | A Pump
Doesn't Have the Range
The annual world championship firearm contest is underway to determine who is the best and the baddest--but mostly the best. Three countries compete in the finals, but only one can be the winner.



Stephen - can't wait to see the comments you get on this one. Great logline, and yet the screenplay is still SO much better.  Delicious. :)
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Originally posted by Charlie272 Charlie272 wrote:

Group 14: Ghost Story / A Pawn Shop / Mask

ALMOST EVERYTHING IN HERE IS FREE


Two customers in an unusual shop make an even more unusual discovery, while the proprietor desperately tries to keep them focused.



Gonna hook 'em but good with this one, Charlie. :)
Awesome job.
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Group 14: ghost story/ pawn shop/ mask

The Count's Masque
A beguiling painting in a pawn shop leads a woman into a 17th century masquerade, from where she may never return.


Edited by lorelei5 - 16 Oct 2019 at 12:49am
2019 Micro Fiction R1 G59: Cookie D'Oh!
2019 Short Screenplay R1 G14: The Count's Masque
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Originally posted by T.E. Bradford T.E. Bradford wrote:

Group 7: Action/Adventure / A Ski Resort / A Flashlight

AFRAID
Nine-year-old Josh Lyons must brave some of a child's worst fears if he's to have any hope of saving himself or his family. But sometimes the hardest moments come after the battle.



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Originally posted by T.E. Bradford T.E. Bradford wrote:

Originally posted by stephenmatlock stephenmatlock wrote:

G20 Political Satire | A Shooting Range | A Pump
Doesn't Have the Range
The annual world championship firearm contest is underway to determine who is the best and the baddest--but mostly the best. Three countries compete in the finals, but only one can be the winner.



Stephen - can't wait to see the comments you get on this one. Great logline, and yet the screenplay is still SO much better.  Delicious. :)
--Tracy


Oh p'shaw. At least it's five pages.

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@NilesPerry, We're in the same group. Can't wait to read your story :)
It seems like you've done this before. It's my first time and I'd love to have some feedback from you!
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Originally posted by NilesPerry NilesPerry wrote:

Group 12 - Horror / A pharmacy / An apple pie

THE OLD MAN AND THE PIE


Darby and Rick find their lives disrupted and threatened by an old pharmacy, an even older mysterious man and a seemingly innocent apple pie.


@NilesPerry, We're in the same group. Can't wait to read your story :)
It seems like you've done this before. It's my first time and I'd love to have some feedback from you!

(sorry I posted this twice - not very used to the forum... Embarrassed)
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Originally posted by T.E. Bradford T.E. Bradford wrote:

Originally posted by Zblugg Zblugg wrote:

Heat 7: Action/adventure (again!!!) - A Ski Resort - A Flashlight

Ski Nuts 

Beavertails, hazelnuts and chipmunks. This cook's day is 
just about to go downhill - literally.

Goddamn. I wrote a Chip and Dale episode.

Hey there, Heatmate! So glad to have you in my group, and I can't WAIT to read this!!! You are going ot post, aren't you? Please please please???
--Tracy

Why of COURSE!

Though I'll admit if there ever was one that I actually considered not posting, it's this one. And I'm not fishing for positive reviews, either -- I just think it WORKS, but is kind of meh. You know?

Can't wait to read yours! Wink
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Originally posted by fiberopticduck fiberopticduck wrote:

Group 17: Drama / Police Station / Brownie

DOUGHNUTS

In the aftermath, a policeman's wife struggles to come to terms with his death.


I'm coming to realise my loglines are so boring! 


I'm in your group and oddly enough mine also contains a policeman's wife whose husband died! I'm excited to read yours! 
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