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Originally posted by BoobTubeJunkie BoobTubeJunkie wrote:

Group 4: mystery/a vegetable garden/a feather

The Trial of Peter Rabbit

Peter Rabbit has many reasons to hate Mr. McGregor, but he wouldn't go so far as to murder him, would he? In order to set her brother free, Mopsy must find the true killer lurking in the garden.
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Originally posted by terrilynncoop terrilynncoop wrote:

Okay, here goes:

Group 7: Horror/Tattoo Parlor/High Heels

<div style="text-align: center;">ETERNAL INK<div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">"All of my clients get the tattoo that they deserve."
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So many or these sound so great!!! Can't wait :)
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Originally posted by BoobTubeJunkie BoobTubeJunkie wrote:

Group 4: mystery/a vegetable garden/a feather

The Trial of Peter Rabbit

Peter Rabbit has many reasons to hate Mr. McGregor, but he wouldn't go so far as to murder him, would he? In order to set her brother free, Mopsy must find the true killer lurking in the garden.



I'm in Group 4 ... I thought about KILLING Peter Rabbit in mine!



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Originally posted by terrilynncoop terrilynncoop wrote:

Okay, here goes:

Group 7: Horror/Tattoo Parlor/High Heels

ETERNAL INK

"All of my clients get the tattoo that they deserve."
 
Sounds. Amazing.
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Group 8 - Genre: Romantic Comedy / Location: A Zoo / Object: A Traffic Light
 

RECKLESS ABANDON

Breaking free from the constraints of a tedious and lonely existence, one girl takes a chance, discovering a blossoming new love and lighting the way to a new life.

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Originally posted by Scarlet Screenwriter Scarlet Screenwriter wrote:

Originally posted by BoobTubeJunkie BoobTubeJunkie wrote:

Group 4: mystery/a vegetable garden/a feather

The Trial of Peter Rabbit

Peter Rabbit has many reasons to hate Mr. McGregor, but he wouldn't go so far as to murder him, would he? In order to set her brother free, Mopsy must find the true killer lurking in the garden.


I'm in Group 4 ... I thought about KILLING Peter Rabbit in mine!


Ha! Poor Peter. This idea popped in my head immediately after reading the prompts, so I almost didn't write it figuring using Peter Rabbit might be a common way to go considering the setting. But the idea wouldn't leave me alone, so I went with it anyway.

I didn't post my round 1 story because I didn't have time to critique and felt bad about putting mine out there when I wouldn't be able to return feedback. I wasn't going to post this one either for the same reason, but with so many people saying they want to read it (thanks y'all, at least I know I wrote an intriguing synopsis Big smile), I might post it anyway. 
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Originally posted by BoobTubeJunkie BoobTubeJunkie wrote:

Originally posted by Scarlet Screenwriter Scarlet Screenwriter wrote:

Originally posted by BoobTubeJunkie BoobTubeJunkie wrote:

Group 4: mystery/a vegetable garden/a feather

The Trial of Peter Rabbit

Peter Rabbit has many reasons to hate Mr. McGregor, but he wouldn't go so far as to murder him, would he? In order to set her brother free, Mopsy must find the true killer lurking in the garden.


I'm in Group 4 ... I thought about KILLING Peter Rabbit in mine!


Ha! Poor Peter. This idea popped in my head immediately after reading the prompts, so I almost didn't write it figuring using Peter Rabbit might be a common way to go considering the setting. But the idea wouldn't leave me alone, so I went with it anyway.

I didn't post my round 1 story because I didn't have time to critique and felt bad about putting mine out there when I wouldn't be able to return feedback. I wasn't going to post this one either for the same reason, but with so many people saying they want to read it (thanks y'all, at least I know I wrote an intriguing synopsis Big smile), I might post it anyway. 


I think it is hysterical you wrote about Peter, but for another reason - 

Tops is in your group, and at first she couldn't think of what to write about.  I told her she should write about Peter Rabbit!  The difference in stories came in was that the mystery was that Peter's mother didn't know why Peter's eyes were always red and why he was always laughing inappropriately, etc.  Come to find out, Peter was no  longer stealing veggies but hanging out in ye old mary jane garden - LOL!  But momma rabbit had to solve the mystery.  

Tops decided to go a different route.  

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Originally posted by JenC_P JenC_P wrote:

Group 18: Horror*; an outdoor music concert; animal crackers

*My idea of horror is watching "Hocus Pocus" around Halloween, so mine is probably pretty tame. Anyway, the logline!

ANIMALIA: Black metal group Animalia has a treat for the crowds at the High Valley Music Festival.

It took everything in me not to add the line "And that treat is ... ::pause; whips off sunglasses:: ... DEATH!"
 
I almost did a very similar thing, almost ended my synopsis with "when the venue is... to DIE for!"
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Originally posted by babateigra babateigra wrote:

I'm in group 16.  

Genre:  Romance  Setting:  A Flower Shop  Object:  Colored Pencils

Cupid’s Mallow

A widow who owns a florist shop and possesses a magical gift meets her match. 
 
This one sounds like fun :)
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