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    Posted: 08 Sep 2021 at 8:09pm
Hi everyone,

I hope this is OK to post.

I've written a short screenplay (11 pages -- not for NYC Midnight).

It's a surreal comedy about a promo girl trying to sell banana plushies when a rival who's promoting a robotic chimp toy sets up stall opposite her.

I've found the feedback on my script for the Short Screenplay Challenge so helpful, so I wondered if anyone would be willing to read it and give me some feedback?
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I don't know if you found my feedback useful but happy to help if you want to PM it to me
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I'd love to read it, if you still need opinions.


Edited by TeeHi - 15 Sep 2021 at 9:40pm
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