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    Posted: 21 Feb 2017 at 3:22am
Hi
I am Danielle from Australia. I have finally found time to come back to the forums and offer feedback/receive feedback. I was in heat no 66: Parking attendant, blackmail, comedy. Never having set out to write a comedy before it was a challenge. I also chose to write in limited third person which I haven't done before.
Happy to offer work shopping to others, and if you want to offer me some critique, copy editing let me know. Danielle
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Hi Danielle! I would certainly love some feedback, at least just on whether my Heat 5 (adrenaline junkie, extinction, action/adventure) short story had an appropriate structure for an action/adventure story. As busy as I am, I do have the time to at least occasionally read and give feedback on stories so I would be more than happy to read yours.
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I would love feedback. I am finishing up work for a graduate school class and hope to devote more time to the forum this weekend.  I will find your story then unless I take a study break.

This experience has been invaluable for me.  :)
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (1) Thanks(1)   Quote plkphoto Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 Feb 2017 at 11:46pm
Hi DanieO -- 

If you want to get feedback, you'll need to post your story on another website (a personal blog or GoogleDocs are the two most commonly used). The posts on here only allow so many characters, so it doesn't work to post your story in a message. Suave has put your link into the master list, but the administrators sometimes delete topics where the rules to host the story elsewhere weren't followed. It's also hard to read long posts on the forum.

Once you've posted your story somewhere else, you should edit your forum post to include just the link to your story, along with the title and synopsis. Then put a link to your forum post in your signature.

Once you've done those two things, it will be easy for people to find your story, read it, and then leave you feedback on the forum. When you give feedback on people's stories, your signature will give them a link to follow to leave you feedback in return. 

Here are a couple of longer "How To" posts that expand on what I said above, if you're confused about any of it: 

Hope this helps you get lots of good feedback. 

Enjoy the forum! Beer

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