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Originally posted by MaHaBone MaHaBone wrote:

Sorta happy with the results but very happy to be done. I don't think I've ever written so much about erections...

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Originally posted by MaHaBone MaHaBone wrote:

Sorta happy with the results but very happy to be done. I don't think I've ever written so much about erections...


What, like boners, or buildings? 




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Originally posted by Scarlet Screenwriter Scarlet Screenwriter wrote:

Originally posted by MaHaBone MaHaBone wrote:

Sorta happy with the results but very happy to be done. I don't think I've ever written so much about erections...


What, like boners, or buildings? 






Yuo. Too much lines on deadwine day...
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Originally posted by Zblugg Zblugg wrote:

Originally posted by Scarlet Screenwriter Scarlet Screenwriter wrote:

Originally posted by MaHaBone MaHaBone wrote:

Sorta happy with the results but very happy to be done. I don't think I've ever written so much about erections...
What, like boners, or buildings? 
Yuo. Too much lines on deadwine day...


Due to time zone differences, it's only wine o'clock now ...







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Well. As they say, Que sera, syrah...
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Originally posted by Scarlet Screenwriter Scarlet Screenwriter wrote:

Originally posted by MaHaBone MaHaBone wrote:

Sorta happy with the results but very happy to be done. I don't think I've ever written so much about erections...


What, like boners, or buildings? 

The former. More Boogie Nights than the Fountainhead. 
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Originally posted by MaHaBone MaHaBone wrote:

Originally posted by Scarlet Screenwriter Scarlet Screenwriter wrote:

Originally posted by MaHaBone MaHaBone wrote:

Sorta happy with the results but very happy to be done. I don't think I've ever written so much about erections...


What, like boners, or buildings? 

The former. More Boogie Nights than the Fountainhead. 

Now I'm trying to work both of those into a pitch, dammit.
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The only thing The Fountainhead should be worked into
is a chipper shredder.
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Originally posted by MaHaBone MaHaBone wrote:

The only thing The Fountainhead should be worked into
is a chipper shredder.

Why does everyone hate it so? I'm a lefty socialist and I loved it. Ahh the lovely modernist constructions (or should I say erections?).
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Originally posted by AnastasiaW AnastasiaW wrote:

Originally posted by MaHaBone MaHaBone wrote:

The only thing The Fountainhead should be worked into
is a chipper shredder.

Why does everyone hate it so? I'm a lefty socialist and I loved it. Ahh the lovely modernist constructions (or should I say erections?).


Rand's loft philosophical notions aside (and that is A LOT to set aside) I find Rand a very clumsy and ham-handed writer. Very unsubtle and on-the-nose.
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