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    Posted: 30 Jan 2012 at 3:44pm
Fellow writers, step into the confession booth.  Here we can praise or air our misgivings about the stories we just created.


I'll go first:

Since submitting my story, I haven't reread it.  It was a total rush job--2480 in two days, both of which I spent at work--and I'm dreading finding something truly cringe-worthy in the copy.  Usually it takes me some time to make the switch and evaluate a story from the reader's perspective.  Perhaps, once that happens, it will take the sting out.


Anyone else?
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I walked blindly into the weeds. Deeper and deeper I wrote. Trying something new and stumbling the entire way. Not happy with the cliche prompts, "Comedy/Filmmaker/Security Clearance" I went for style over substance and it turned out a muddled mess.

Even with the help of a beta reading angel, I think my offering is sub par to my abilities and is complete rubbish. (I love you Brits use of rubbish.)

That being said, because I hate it so much, I expect a perfect score from the judges. So goes the gods of Que Sara Sara.


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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote kburoz Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 Jan 2012 at 3:59pm
ha, i like this topic. I am similar - I started my story the afternoon it was due (strange how that keeps happening), and well, let's just say I am sure it could have used a few more edits....I have read it once since submitting and did indeed find things I would definitely change or add, but I guess what can you do - I am happy there were at least no spelling mistakes!

Oh well, c'est la vie, all the best when you do decide to read it :-)
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When I saw this topic come up I reread my submission. It's the character names that I always get hung up on. I find myself trying to make names that are symbolic of the character but without being too obvious and also plausible all at the same time. And I inevitably feel like I fail on at least one of those. Does anyone else have that problem? Or do you just say "Ok, you are John. And you are Jane." and be done with it?

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I started mine about three ~ four days before it was due, and hated it as I wrote - felt it was far, far too cliché. Turned out okay, though, and everyone who read it said they liked it. I felt the ending was rather weak, but in general, I'm fairly confident. All the more so because I have not seen anyone else in my heat post on the forums, and I am secretly hoping they all forgot about the competition altogether. :p

Seriously though, I don't have to beat everyone else, I just have to be in the top five of my heat. And I think I can do that.
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Kenan, I am so glad to read a fellow writer's anxiety over the story -- I think we should collectively forgive ourselves for our blunders.  In the spirit of the contest, we all know that we all COULD write something better.  But we wrote something, so at least we did that, right?!?!? 
Mine was equally cringe-worthy.  I wasn't paying attention to my word count and completed a story that was 5,000 plus words --oops.  By the time I peeled off 2500 words, I felt I was left with nothing of the original tale.  Lesson learned ;)

Has anyone received a confirmation email yet?I submitted mine Friday night (only because I thought it was due then or I would have procrastinated til the final hour!) so it hasn't been 72 hours yet.  

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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote maiaco Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 Jan 2012 at 4:55pm

I knew I was facing a very stressful week, so started my first draft over the first weekend.  There was no time to reconsider it or have another in reserve.  Friday was an all time stressful day, so waking up on Saturday to write a story that traumatised me even more was a crazy thing to have done.  Only my beta angel managed to motivate me enough to complete it. 

I haven't re-read it yet - I daren't, but one thing is for sure - the trauma of writing it took my mind of the rest of the week........ is that why I write, I wonder?

I'm surprised though - I thought it would be a 'fun' thing to do - I'm amazed at the emotion a piece of writing, even for a contest, can evoke!



Edited by maiaco - 30 Jan 2012 at 4:56pm
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I thought I had a magic set of prompts ... Mystery/pen pals/10 year old child. There is a literacy program for 5th graders called Mystery Pen Pals. That's where I went. I wanted to submit it handwritten as a PDF, but there are the font and doc rules. However, I have redone it for the forum the way I wanted to submit it. Always taking risks ...
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After all these years of quaking in my boots at the thought of political satire, I have to say I really enjoyed writing this story, and I'm happy with what I wrote. Whether or not it is exactly political satire I'm not sure, but I like it, whatever it is.

I treated it like a weekend challenge and got the bulk of the first draft done last weekend. That proved to be really important, as I was able to leave it to brew in my subconscious for a few days. Plot and character inconsistencies occurred to me while I was doing other things, and I had time to sort them out. As this was a very plot-driven story, I think that gave me a level of confidence with the finished story that I don't normally have.

Of course, now you are all going to hate it...
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Originally posted by jackhennigan jackhennigan wrote:

When I saw this topic come up I reread my submission. It's the character names that I always get hung up on. I find myself trying to make names that are symbolic of the character but without being too obvious and also plausible all at the same time. And I inevitably feel like I fail on at least one of those. Does anyone else have that problem? Or do you just say "Ok, you are John. And you are Jane." and be done with it?

 
I find that my characters start out with one name, for whatever reason I chose for that particular story, but then often as the characters morph, their names morph also. It's not a conscious thing, but it just happens. In fact, in one, the name stayed the same, but the spelling changed. Went from Madisson to Maddison (or vise vers- can't exactly remember now). This presented a problem as the spelling changed right in the middle of the story, and I didn't even know it. Thanks to Dsaslav for catching that one, otherwise it would have gone out that way.
 
Some names have changed on their own into entirely different names. I just go with the flow. Whoever they want to be is fine with me. Through me, not from me so to speak. They seem to take on a life of their own, so I rarely sweat it, knowing it won't stay the same from begining to end anyway.
 
 
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